Marriage(RN) part 25 pg 146 n note on pg 150 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Mansi is shocked and overjoyed to hear ke Raj ne haan kardi hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

She kissed Abhi lightly on the lips magar Abhi ne chance pe dance kiya and deepened the kiss!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Mansi suggested ke aaj hi Raj ko saath lekar ladki dekhne chalte hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Mansi rang up Shalini and said ke usse ek acchi khabar sunani hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Shalini first guessed ke woh maasi bannewali hai to which Mansi blushed and then guessed that Abhi has given her a surprise!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Shalini finally gave up and then Mansi dramatically announced ke Raj maan gaya hai Naina ko dekhne ke liye!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved Shalu's reaction to that!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj ki maa ko wakai bahut jaldi hai kyunki unka kehna hai Raj ka kya bharosa!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

You have described the arranged marriage very well!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Short notice par ladki waalon ko inform kar diya ke ladki dekhne aa rahe hai!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Aur ladki waale yeh soch rahe hai ke itni jaldi saara arrangement kaise hoga!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Mansi is now teasing Raj!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉I loved that line ke Raj ko thoda bhaav toh marna hi tha naa!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Bu Mansi knows her brother and is back to her leg pulling!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆Raj has really fallen for Naina hard in just one meeting!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj toh office mein bas Naina ke khayalo mein khoya huya hai!!!!!😍 😍 😍 😍

The song was very nice and just perfect for him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj blurted out ke naam toh usse bhi nahi pata toh usse kaise bataye!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Aman is teasing him so much!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Raj tried to change the topic par Aman kaha maane wala tha!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

He is singing another song!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj is right uske paas har situation ka gaana available hai!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh Aman kya pehle FM ka koi RJ tha??😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj is denying ke aisi koi baat hai and Aman is saying ke woh pata laga ke rahega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Priya ne kitni innocently puccha ke Naina un sab ko chhod kar chali jayegi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Both Shalu and Naina's mom became emotional at this!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

Shalu's daughter is too cute aur Naina ko aake kitni innocently usne sab kaha!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj kaise bhul gaya ke usse aaj usse Naina se milne jana tha??😕 😕 😕 😕Ab apni maa ko maska laga raha hai when she suggested cancelling the program!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Mansi is again teasing him and Raj is trying to hide it but still he is blushing a little!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Lakshmi jee ek bhari banarasi saree de rahi thi aur Shalu ek light embroidery waali!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Naina agreed with her bhabhi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Lakshmi jee bhi Shalu ki baat maan gayi bina kisi behes ke!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Lagta hai yeh saas-bahu ki team ek dusre ki baat asani se maan jaati hai bina tu tu main main ke!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina's nervousness was very well described!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina wanted to to take a look at her would be husband from the window!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Too bad she could not she couldn't see his face but she liked him from behind!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sab log Raj ko dekhkar khush hai akhir he is the best!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ki ankhen toh bas naina ko dhundh rahi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Shalu aur Mansi dono ish baat ko samaj rahi thi!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Shalini understanding it suggested bringing Naina!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina is very nervous and Shalu is assuring her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj toh bas Naina ko hi dekhe jaa raha hai and she is blushing!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Ab toh undono ko paas bhi bitha diya hai bas jee bharke dekhte hi raho!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Ab dekhte hai woh log kya baate karte hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

Beautiful part. Luved Shalu's reaction hearing dat finally our DEAREST RAJ has agreed 4 marriage. Every1 is so happy.

Luved Aman n Raj's convo. BTW thnx 4 having Ankur in ur fic. Just luv both of them.

And then Raj-Naina's first meet. Was w8ing 4 dis only. But abhi toh puri mulaqat baki hai. So eagerly w8ing 4 dat. PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83

very nice

traditional marriage just like vivah
shalu aur naveen ki beti she is very cute.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
lovely part yaar, thanx sooo much for the pm....btw that "thooda bhav to maarna hi tha" thing of raj was too too cute
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
that was really nice
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
perfect atmosphere.........plzz cont.....shaadi fixed 4 sure lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
HIIIIIIII VARTIKA HOPE UR FINE...........
THE UD WAS................
AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOME..............
SUPERB................
EXCELLENT..............
GR8..............
JUST TOO GOOD...............
DO CONT.SOON............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
hiiiii......😊
mood baht kharab hai...isiliye chota sa comment karungi. hope k tu mind nahin karegi aur chala legi.😊
too gud.👏 👏 👏
baht hi acche se tune indian arrenged marriage ko describe kiya hai. photo dekh kar pasand karna...aur phir short notice par ladki walon ko inform karna ki hum ladki dekhne aa rahe hai...aur ladki walon ka sar par hath rakhna ki kaise itni jaldi sare arrengement ho payega...etc...etc...sab kuch tune baht hi achhe se describe kiya hai.👏 👏 👏
hmmmmm......pura ud padhne k baad mai is natije par aayi hun ki sayad tujhe in sab baton ka personal xperience ho chuka hai. hey...just joking yaar.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
raj k bhav khane par mansi ka us ki khinchai karna baht achha tha. aur yeh raj to pahli hi mulaqat me naina par fisal chuka hai yaar...!!! bhagwan jane aage kya hoga...??? par yeh aman ko raj ko chdhana baht mast tha. by d way yeh aman pahle 'FM radio ka RJ' tha kya...??? matlab har situation k liye us k paas koi na koi song ready rahta hi hai.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
aur yeh raj kaise bhul gaya ki use aaj naina se milne jana tha. chalo der aaye...durust aaye. akhirkar vo pahunch hi gaya...naina se milne.😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
yeh bhi sahi likha hai tune har ladki...khidki se bahar to jhankti hi hai k use jo ladka dekhne aa raha hai...vo 'gulshan grover' ki tarah dikhta hai...ya...'abhishek bachhan ' ki tarah.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
achha hua ki naina ne raj ko piche se pasand kar liya...!!! ab dekhna yeh hai ki raj ko aage se dekh kar kya karti hai.😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉
raj ki ankhen naina ko dhundh rahi thi...aur is baat ko samajh bhi liya shalu aur mansi ne...!!! lekin naina k aane par raj itna nervous kyoun lag raha tha...!!! vase naina to sirf blush hi kar rahi thi...aur kya kar sakti hai vo...!!! raj use is tarah se dekhega to vo aur kar bhi kya sakti hai.😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
aage dekhna hai ki un dono k bich baat kya hoti hai...!!! ab to un dono ko paas paas baitha bhi diya gaya hai...ji bhar k ek dushre ko dekh lo...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
do ud fast.😊
lo...maine kaha tha ki short comment karungi aur pura detailed likh diya...maine. sharam aani chahiye mujhe...apni baton par mai kaayam nahin rah payi...!!! par tere liye itna to chalta hi hai...kyoun ki
'koi jab tumhara hriday tod de
confuse kar k bich rashte me chod de
tab tum mere paas aana mere dost
mera PM khula hai...
khula hi rahega sirf tere liye...'😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89

Arre waah........WoW........it was fun reading the update.....seriously Mehak.......You know isme sabse accha kya lagaa mujhe......it was the way in which the whole thing was set up..... i mean kaise ek ladke ko ladki ki photo dikai jati hai and how he has to decide whether he should accept her as a life partner even when he is just seeing an inanimate photo.......it was just so realistic.....bas shukar ye tha ki even though for a few minutes, they had met earlier at the party.......[i had really liked the dupatta scene.......😊😊😊.........].......

And then the nervousness of the girl who is abt to meet a complete stranger and knows that her family is trying to get her married of to him......and how she is conscious abt the way she is gonna conduct herself......it was so well potrayed...........It is even well titled MARRIAGE........great indian marriage.....hehehehe.....
And the way both family members are excited abt the whole thing....and yes, all the commotion that goes before the actual arrival of the guy's family........yaar, ladke waalo ke liye sahi hai....bas notice de do ladki waalo ko ki shaam ko aa rahe hai.....fir aaram se baitho......bechari ladki waale.....kariban 8 ghanto mein becharo ko deadline meet karni padti hai.......hehehehehehe..........
And fir Saas-bahu ke idea differences....thankfully tu tu main main nahi hui sari ho le kar......waah....kaphi kam saas-bahu teams aisi dikhati hai jo itni sharafat se ek doosre ki baat maan jati hai...hehehe.....
And i even enjoyed Mansi-Shalini and Aman-Raj's convo......nice one.......
To sum up......wonderful update......and see, i have started replying....hehehe😆 😆😆😆.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏👏👏Gr8 Update!!!👏👏👏
😛😛😛Raj agreed to see Naina rite away n now he cant w8!!!!😛😛😛
😆😆😆N Raj at office wazz funni too😆😆😆
😆😆😆Aman waz funni too😆😆😆
😳😳😳Raj is Blushing AWWWZZZZ😳😳😳
😆😆😆I luved the way Mansi teased him itz waz toooo gud😆😆😆
😛😛😛Priya waz too cute!!!!😛😛😛
😳😳😳OMG RAJ JUST KEPT STARING AT NAINA!!!!😳😳😳
😳😳😳and Naina Kept Blushing!!!!😳😳😳
😃😃😃Too cute!!!😃😃😃
cont. soon
Star⭐️

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