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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

thank u Shaina 😊 😊 😊
Mansi is shocked and overjoyed to hear ke Raj ne haan kardi hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
Koi bhi shock hoga jo Raj ko jaanta hoga.😲 😲 😲

She kissed Abhi lightly on the lips magar Abhi ne chance pe dance kiya and deepened the kiss!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He is so naughty.😆 😆 😆
Mansi suggested ke aaj hi Raj ko saath lekar ladki dekhne chalte hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
aur kya us ka hona jaroori hai.

Mansi rang up Shalini and said ke usse ek acchi khabar sunani hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

acchi khabar jitne jaldi bata do utna hi accha.
Shalini first guessed ke woh maasi bannewali hai to which Mansi blushed and then guessed that Abhi has given her a surprise!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
aur kya guess bhi kar sakti thi vo.😆 😆 😆

Shalini finally gave up and then Mansi dramatically announced ke Raj maan gaya hai Naina ko dekhne ke liye!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

accha tha na ye surprise.😉 😉 😉
I loved Shalu's reaction to that!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
hona hi tha aisa.

Raj ki maa ko wakai bahut jaldi hai kyunki unka kehna hai Raj ka kya bharosa!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

sahi keh rahi hain na.
You have described the arranged marriage very well!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Short notice par ladki waalon ko inform kar diya ke ladki dekhne aa rahe hai!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒
aisa hi hota hai madam n thank u.😊 😊 😊

Aur ladki waale yeh soch rahe hai ke itni jaldi saara arrangement kaise hoga!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

karna to hoga beti ka sawaal hai.😉 😉 😉
Mansi is now teasing Raj!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉I loved that line ke Raj ko thoda bhaav toh marna hi tha naa!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
aur kya itna to chalta hi hai.😆 😆 😆

Bu Mansi knows her brother and is back to her leg pulling!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆Raj has really fallen for Naina hard in just one meeting!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

kya baat hai Raj ne to bada jhatka de diya.😆 😆 😆
Raj toh office mein bas Naina ke khayalo mein khoya huya hai!!!!!😍 😍 😍 😍

The song was very nice and just perfect for him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Akhir Aman ki selection thi na.😊 😊 😊
Raj blurted out ke naam toh usse bhi nahi pata toh usse kaise bataye!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
sahi baat hai itna sharma raha tha ki us ne bhi nahi poocha.😆 😆 😆

Aman is teasing him so much!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Raj tried to change the topic par Aman kaha maane wala tha!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

dost hote bhi isiliye hain na.😉 😉 😉
He is singing another song!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj is right uske paas har situation ka gaana available hai!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
kaam hi yahi hai aaj kal us ka.😛 😛 😛

Yeh Aman kya pehle FM ka koi RJ tha??😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

pata nahi maine poocha nahi.😕 😕 😕
Raj is denying ke aisi koi baat hai and Aman is saying ke woh pata laga ke rahega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
pata chal hi jaayega jaldi.😉 😉 😉

Priya ne kitni innocently puccha ke Naina un sab ko chhod kar chali jayegi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Both Shalu and Naina's mom became emotional at this!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

bacche aise hi hote hain.😃 😃 😃
Shalu's daughter is too cute aur Naina ko aake kitni innocently usne sab kaha!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
she is soooooooo sweet.😃 😃 😃

Raj kaise bhul gaya ke usse aaj usse Naina se milne jana tha??😕 😕 😕 😕Ab apni maa ko maska laga raha hai when she suggested cancelling the program!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

kya kare cancel kar degi to milega kaise Naina se?😉 😉 😉 Kaam jyada tha na us k paas.😆 😆 😆
Mansi is again teasing him and Raj is trying to hide it but still he is blushing a little!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
koshish ho rahi hai bus.😉 😉 😉

Lakshmi jee ek bhari banarasi saree de rahi thi aur Shalu ek light embroidery waali!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Naina agreed with her bhabhi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

sahi reason diya tha na vahann Shalu ne.😛 😛 😛
Lakshmi jee bhi Shalu ki baat maan gayi bina kisi behes ke!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Lagta hai yeh saas-bahu ki team ek dusre ki baat asani se maan jaati hai bina tu tu main main ke!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊
ye K serails waali saas bahu nahi hain na is liye.😆 😆 😆

Naina's nervousness was very well described!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

thanks 😃 😃 😃
Naina wanted to to take a look at her would be husband from the window!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
koshish ki us ne par dekh nahi paayi na.

Too bad she could not she couldn't see his face but she liked him from behind!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

jaane do abhi to poora saamne se dekhna hai.😉 😉 😉
Sab log Raj ko dekhkar khush hai akhir he is the best!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊
vo to hai no doubt.😛 😛 😛

Raj ki ankhen toh bas naina ko dhundh rahi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Shalu aur Mansi dono ish baat ko samaj rahi thi!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

samajhna hi tha aakhir Raj itna impateince jo tha.😉 😉 😉
The song is very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
thank u 😃 😃 😃

Shalini understanding it suggested bringing Naina!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina is very nervous and Shalu is assuring her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

ek acchi bhabhi hai na vo.😊 😊 😊
Raj toh bas Naina ko hi dekhe jaa raha hai and she is blushing!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
vo bhi na dekhte hi us ko chaloo ho gaya.😳 😳 😳

Ab toh undono ko paas bhi bitha diya hai bas jee bharke dekhte hi raho!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

sahi me lage raho.😉 😉 😉
Ab dekhte hai woh log kya baate karte hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm 😃 😃 😃

thank u so much.😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

lovely part yaar, thanx sooo much for the pm....btw that "thooda bhav to maarna hi tha" thing of raj was too too cute

thank u mam, maine aap ka thank u post dekha tha to pm kar diya.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: guddi29

perfect atmosphere.........plzz cont.....shaadi fixed 4 sure lol

thank u yaar for liking.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pritib0

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thank u Preeti for finding time to reply dear.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey guys sorry mujhe maaf kar dijiyega mai out of town jaa rahi hoon 5 days k liye to jaldi me mai aap sab ko is baar pm nahi kar paaongi so naraj mat hona aap sab. Laut k aa k pm kar doongi sab ko.
part 3:-
Sabse Chupaake Idhar Udhar Se ,

Mujhako Hi Dekhe Chor Najar se

"Kuch bol na Raj agar tu aise hi is ko dekhta rahega to kya sochegi ye ki pehle kabhi tune ladki nahi dekhi hai lagta hai." Raj soch raha hai.

Naina kya soch rahi hai, "Dikhne me to bahut accha hai bilkul mere sapno k Rajkumaar jaisa. Thank u bhagwaan jee apne itna accha ladka bheja mere liye. Par kya ye mujhe pasand karega?" she was asking her self.

Baat Labon Par Hai Ruki Tejh Dilon Ki Dhadakan
Haay Re Kal Ke Sajani Saajan
Milkar Kyaa Bole

Kyaa Bole Kyaa Bole Re Milkar Kyaa Bole

"Naina beta Rajveer ko chai do." Naina ki maa ne kaha.

"Oho to Naina naam hai is ka. Kitna khoobsurat naam rakha hai is ka. Naina aur us k nain jee karta hai zindagi bhar bus yu hi dekhta rahoon is ko." Raj soch raha hai.

"Hmmmm to Rajveer naam hai is ka, naam to bahut accha hai mai to is ko Veer bulane vaali hoon." She thought.

"Beta Naina tum logon bahar jaa k baatein karo na." Lakshmi jee ne dono ko bahar bhej diya aur dono ko samajh me nahi aa raha hai ki baat kya karein?

Do Anjaane Ajnabi Chale Bandhane Bandhan
Haay Re Dil Mein Hai Ye Uljhan
Milkar Kyaa Bole

Kyaa Bole Kyaa Bole

Re Milakar Kyaa Bole

Nayi Umamg Nayi Khushi Mehak Uthaa Hai Aangan
Haay Re Ghar Aaye Man Bhaavan
Milkar Kyaa Bole Kyaa Bole,

Kyaa Bole Re Milkar Kyaa Bole

Raj ne bahut sochne k baad khud baat karma start ki, "Mera naam Rajveer Singh Shekhawat hai aur mai ek M.N.C. me job karta hoon. Fihaal mai apni company ka C.E.O. hoon. "

Naina smiled us ko aisa lag raha tha jaise Raj interview dene aaya hai yahan. Par kuch kaha nahi us ne.

"Aap bolti nahi hain kya?" Raj se jab raha nahi gaya to us ne pooch hi liya. Jab ki vo bhi jaanta tha ki Naina bolti hai aur acche se bolti hai par abhi us ko lag raha tha ho sakta hai pehli mulakaat hone ki vajah se Naina kuch sharma rahi ho.

"Nahi aisa kuch nahi hai." She said.

'Thank god kuch kaha to is ne varna mujhe laga ki kahin mai kehta hi na rahoon aur ye sunti rahe bus.' Raj thought.

"To kuch kahiye na apne baare me apne hobbies k baare me aur kuch." Raj ne kaha.

Phir thodi bhaut baatein shuru ki Raj ne hi pehle apni college life phir apni office life k bare me. Naina ne bhi bataya apne baare me apne hobbies k bare me aur baaki kuch baatein. In sab k dauraan Naina bus ek baat bahut acche se feel kar sakti thi Raj me ki he is honest n down to earth person. Kuch bhi nahi chipaya us ne apne baare me aur apni zindagi ek khuli kitaab ki tarah Naina se share kar di.

Naina ko accha laga aur us ko pata nahi kyoun Raj aur accha lagne laga. Us ki saadgi aur seedhapan Naina ko bahut pasand aaya.

"Naina kya mai tum ko theek laga?" Raj k suddenly aisa poochne se Naina thoda ghabra gayi . It was really unexpected.

"Vo m?.a????i matlab????." Aage haan kehne se Naina bach gayi kyounki tabhi Mansi aur Shalini aa gaye vahan.

"To kya decide hua bhai." Mansi ne Raj ko dekhte hua poocha.

"Di vo aap Naina se hi pooch lijiye." Ye keh kar Raj seedhe neeche chala gaya kyounki vo jaanta tha ki agar vo khada raha to Naina kuch bhi nahi keh paayegi.

"Are ye to sharmaana bhi seekh gaya. Kya sikha diya Naina tum ne is ko abhi se." Mansi teased Naina whereas she blushed.

"To Naina bata na kya hai tera faisla, hum sab jaana chahte hain. Tabhi baat kuch aage bhi bhadegi na." Shalu asked with a hope in her eyes.

"Naina is k pehle tum kuch kaho mai tum ko kuch batana chahti hoon. Mera bhai Raj na thoda buddhu hai ho sakta hai us ne kuch aisa kaha ho shayad jo us ko nahi kehna chahiye tha aur ho sakta hai us ka behavior tum ko thoda ajeeb bhi laga ho par ek baat mai jaanti hoon acche se ki vo bahut accha insaan hai. Saaf dil ka aur sab se pyaar karne vaala to mujhe umeed hai ki vo tum ko bahut khush rakhega aur tum se bhi bahut pyaar karega."

Naina was smiling at Mansi that how was she showing the good n bad both qualities of her brother nicely in front of her.

"Naina bata na." Shalu ne fir se poocha.

Naina blushed the hardest n hugged her bhabhi n hide her face in her. "Oho to mai samajh gayi aise sharmaane ka kya matlab hai."

Dono ne sab ko bata diya ki Naina ne haan kar di hai. Raj to sab se jyada khush tha is baar varna vo doubtful tha ki pata nahi Naina kya sochegi aur kahegi us k baare me.

"To theek hai Singh sahib, hum engagement ki date aaj hi fix kar lete hain. Kyounki bhai mera maana hai ki subh kaam jitney jaldi ho utna hi accha hai." Mr. Shekhawat said.

"Theek hai bhai sahib aap jaisa theek samajhe." Aur jaldi hi pandit jee bhi aa gaye aur date nikle one week baad ki.

"Par itne jaldi sab taiyaarian kaise hongi?" Lakshmi jee ne kaha.

"Koi tension mat lijiye bhabhi jee hum hain na, aur ab to mujh se bhi nahi ruka jaa raha hai ki kab jaldi se Naina mere ghar me bahoo ban k aaye." She blessed Naina. Apne purse me se kuch nikala aur Naina k haath me dete hue kaha, "Beta ye humara khandani kangan hai. Mujhe pata hai shayad tujhe pasand na aaye kyounki ye thoda old fashioned hai par is ko samhaal k rakhna tu meri amanat samajh k." aur ye keh kar unhone Naina ko gale se laga liya aur bhari aakhon se kaha, "Beta mere bete ki zindagi ko khusiyon se bhar dena. Mai har kadam par tere saath hoon."

Raj batiha sab dekh raha tha ki kaise us ki maa Naina ko aashirvaad de rahi hain aur vo bus Naina aur us ki simplicity me khoya hua tha ki Mansi aayi us k paas aur vo samajh gayi, "Raj abhi se tera ye haal hai, baad me to tu hum ko bhool hi jaayega." She teased him.

"Di aap bhi na, kahin to chod diya karo mujhe." Raj embarrassed.

"Kya baat hai aaj kal to tu sharmaana bhi seekh gaya hai, vaah vaah."

"Dii pls ab bus bhi karo."

"Theek hai Singh jee hum chalte hain ab, koi bhi kaam ho to aap hum ko bata dijiyega aur kal hum hall book kar lete hain."

"Theek hai bhai sahib hum kal saath hi chalte hain baaki ki cheejein fir do din me discuss kar lete hain."

Do din kaise beet gaye pata hi nahi chala. Yahan office me Raj ne sab se pehle Aman ko apni engagement ki khabar di pehle to Aman naraj hua ki Raj ne us ko pehle kyoun nahi bataya fir Raj ne us ko mana hi liya.

"To ye bata humare hone waali bhabhi kaise hain?" Aman asked to tease him.

"Kaise hai I mean kaise hogi ? jaise hone chahiye vaise hi hogi na."

"Offo Raj mai acche se samajh raha hoon ki tu baat ko ghuma raha hai par fir bhi bata na ki vo dekhne me kaise hai?"

"Hmmm to theek hai sun kaise hai v.o?????.

Ho Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga
Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa LagaJ
aise Khilta Gulaab
Jaise Shaayar Ka Khwaab
Jaise Ujli KiranJ
aise Van Mein Hiran
Jaise Chaandni Raat
Jaise Naghme Ki Baat
Jaise Mandir Mein Ho Ek Jalta Diya
Ho Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga
Ho Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga
Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga
Jaise Subahon Ka Roop
Jaise Sardi Ki Dhoop
Jaise Veena Ki Taan
Jaise Rangon Ki Jaan
Jaise Balkhaaye BelJ
aise Lehron Ka Khel
Jaise Khushboo Liye Aaye Thandi Hava
Ho Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga
Ho Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga
Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga
Jaise Naachta Mor
Jaise Resham Ki Dor
Jaise Pariyon Ka Raag
Jaise Sangdal Ki Aag
Jaise Sola SighaarJaise Rasti Fuhaar
Jaise Aahista Aahista Badhta Nasha
Ho Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga .

"Bus kar yaar, samajh gaya mai ki meri bhabhi duniya ki sab se khoobsurat ladki hain aur tu poori tarah se un k pyaar me pagal ho chukka hai." Aman said joining his hands n bending in front of him.

Raj laughed at him, "Sach me yaar vo sab se alag aur sab se pyaari hai."

Idhar Raj k ghar par aur Naina k ghar par taiyaariyan zoron par thi.

"Beta aaj tu office se chutti kyoun nahi le leta?" Geeta je suggested.

"Kyoun maa aaj kuch khaas kaam hai kya?" Raj asked.

"Haan aaj teri sagai ki ring lene thi aur mai chahti thi ki Naina aur tu dono jaayein pasand karne apni ring." Geeta jee said to which Raj's eyes lit up par is se pehle ki vo kuch bol paata Mansi boli.

"Are rehne do na maa is k paas kahan itna time hai ki ye jaaye. Mai aur Shalu hi chale jaayenge Naina k saath don't worry. Haan Raj tu apna size de dena bus." Mansi knowingly said to pull his leg.

Raj gave her a look n turned to his maa, "Nahi maa mai le loonga na aaj chutti. Mai abhi office phone kar k aaya." Ye keh kar Raj bhaag gaya vahan se kyounki vo mauka nahi dena chahta tha ab fir se Mansi ko bolne ka.

"Buddhu kahin ka, sab samajhti hoon mai." Geeta ji smiled at Raj's innocence and she again got busy with other work.

Raj ne Aman ko call kar diya aur bata diya ki bol dena kuch jaroori kaam hai to vo aaj aa nahi paayega. Aman samajh gaya tha aur us ne beech beech me Raj ki khoob jee bhar k leg pulling bhi ki. Idhar Naina ko bataya gaya ki kuch der me Raj apni didi ko le kar aa raha hai aur un ko saath hi jaana hai ring lene.Jab se Naina ne ye suna tha tab se Naina ko ajeeb sa ehsaas ho raha tha. Thodi se khushi bhi thi aur ajeeb se ghabrahat bhi.

"Kya baat hai Naina?" Shalu kab se Naina ki aise haalat dekh rahi thi jab us se raha nahi gaya to pooch liya us ne.

"Nahi kuch nahi bhabhi." Is se jyada bol hi nahi paa rahi thi vo.

"E dekh jhooth mat bol. Alekh k baad mai hi teri best friend hoon ab mujhe bata na baat kya hai?" she asked lovingly.

"Bhabhi vo ????.vo?????..vo aa rahe hain na . Mera matlab hai ki???.un k saath jaana hai to????ma??..mai mujhe bada ajeeb sa lag raha hai." Naina ne kaha.

"Oho to madam apne un k liye pareshaan hai, hieeee kya baat hai. Kabhi itna sharma k hum ne to apne un se baat nahi ki." She teased her.

"Bhabhi aap bhi na, jaao mai ab aap ko nahi bataoongi kuch bhi." She turned her face with fake anger.

"Oho accha baba sorry par problem kya hai tujhe bata na?" Shalu asked her.

"Bhabhi mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai mai un k saath kaise????" she couldn't continue as Shalu cut her b/w.

"Dekh Naina pareshaan hone ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. Tu akele thode na jaa rahi hai hum sab hain na matlab mai aur Mansi. Par haan agar tu akele jaana chahe to baat kuch aur hai hum promise karte hain ki tujhe disturb nahi karenge."

"Bhabhi sach me aap na?????"

"Naina Shalu beta jaldi karo vo log aate hi honge." Lakshmi jee ne kaha neeche se dono ko bulate hue.

"Haan maa bus ho rahe hain ready."

After an hour:-

"Kahan ho tum dono jaldi neeche aao " Lakshmi jee ne bulaya.

Pehle Shalu neeche aayi fir Naina aur as usual Raj ki aakhein Naina ko hi dhoondh rahi thi. Jab us ne Naina ko dekha to behosh hote hote bacha vo.

'Oh my god, mujhe to lagta hai shaadi k pehle hi Naina ka plan hai meri jaan lene ka. Pata nahi agar aise hi do teen baar aur dekha maine Naina ko to mai kaise jeeyunga." Raj man hi man me bad bad kar raha tha.

"Kuch kaha tune Raj?" Mansi asked perfectly knowing what did he just said.

"Nahi di kuch nahi, maine to kuch nahi kaha. Kyoun aap ne suna kya?" Raj asked confusingly.

"Accha chal chod koi baat nahi, aksar aisa hota hai. Aage to abhi na jaane tu man hi man aur kya kya kahega aise hi." Mansi teased him.

"Di chaliye der ho rahi hai." Raj said getting up trying to change the topic.

Bahar jaa k Mansi ko ek plan soojha.

"Shalu chalo na mere saath baitho." Mansi suggested.

Shalini samajh gayi, "Haan haan kyoun nahi vaise bhi mujhe kuch jaroori baatein karne hai tujh se." Naina gave her a stare but she avoided n smiled in return.

Dono friends' baith gayi pars Naina abhi bhi kuch confuse si bahar khadi thi.

"Naina jee, "Raj called her softly to which she alarmed, "Chalein?" ye keh kar us ne Naina k liye car ka door khola.

Naina was hesitant but ab koi aur chaara bhi nahi tha to baithna hi pada us ko. Raj ne gadi chalani start ki to dekhta kya hai ki Mansi kuch ishare kar rahi hai us ko. Raj samajh nahi paa raha tha.Tabhi Mansi ko ek idea soojha us ne sms kiya Raj ko aur us me likha tha. Kuch baat start kar na.

Raj was surprised but he knew his di is so naughty. Naina was looking outside, Mansi ne jab dekha ki Raj baat nahi kar raha hai to Mansi se raha nahi gaya.

"Haan to Naina ek baat batao tumhari hobbies kya hain?"

Naina smiled, "Kuch khaas nahi di mujhe music, dance aur bacchon ka bahut shaukh hai."

Ab Mansi aise kahan chodne vaali thi she teased Naina, "Accha hi hai agar tum ko abhi se bacche pasand hain to aage chal kar koi problem nahi hogi, kyoun Raj?"

Naina blushed n Raj embarrassed. "Kya di aap bhi na." Raj said giving her a stare.

Naina quickly made a correction in it, "Mere kehne ka matlab tha ki mujhe baccho k saath time spend karma kaafi accha lagta hai."

"Haan haan mai bhi to vahi keh rahi hoon na . Bhai shaadi k baad bacche to tumahre hone hi na to tum ek acchi maa ban paaogi." Mansi added again to tease her more.

Naina ne ab kuch nahi kaha, kya kehti Mansi ne to us ko ajeeb se feeling de di. Raj se shaadi aur fir bacche aur vo un k saath?????.hieeeee kinni sodi feeling hain na.

"Vaise Naina tum ko ladke jyada acche lagte hain ya ladkiyaan?" Mansi ne fir se poocha.

Ab Naina kya jawaab de Mansi to lagta hai aaj apni nand hone ki kasar poori hi karne me lagi thi.

"Accha raj tu hi bata, Naina to kuch bol nahi rahi hai." Mansi ne ab Raj ki taraf dekh kar poocha.

"Di pls ab bus bhi kariye na." Raj said while Naina was still blushing n when Raj looked at her blushing he just loved her more. A slight pink color which rose in her cheeks was extremely beautiful.

'She looks gorgeous when she blushed, hieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.' Suddenly Naina looked at him n found him gazing her like this. Her heart started beating faster n she embarrassed. Raj ka dhyan gaadi drive karne se jyada Naina ki or tha tabhi saamne se ek gaadi aa rahi thi kaafi speed me. Naina screamed, "Rajveer bacho???????.".

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
First of all The Songs were Amazing !!! ...

I liked the beginning when they were lost in thoughts about each other ..

and then Raj giving the "Interview" lolz ...

and later on when Mansi was teasing both Raj and Naina ...

i guess her only mission in life is too tease them both ... it'll be quite funny if they both gang up on her lolz ..

but anyways i'm really liking the Shyness between them, and hope it continues like that for a while .... yes but with both of them opening up to each other ... and all ...

Anyways lovely update Di!!

Take Care

Yasmin
Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hello sisss hows u?
the update it was mindblowing!!!!! aur haan todays comment wil b in alekh's style ok?

are naina aur raj tho aide ho gaye hain ek dusre ke pyaar meinch.. yeh raj ko kya ho gayla hai woh interview dene aaya hai kya???😉😉

aur ye mansi tho din bhar raj ki taang kheench ti rehti hai.. bole tho leg pulling..😆 apun tho kuch jhaasti hi hass reli thi..😆😆

sis bole tho behen yeh ud tho bahut hi mast thi.. raj aur naina ek dusre ke saath bahut hijhakaas dikhte hain.. apun tho iss love story mein flat ho gayi..😳 bol tho apun fan ho gayi inn dono ki..😳

abhi apun agle ud ke liye wait kar reli hai... fast update karna,,..

lots of love bole tho apun ki taraf se aapko bahut saara pyaar..
ritu😊
Edited by RSZR - 16 years ago
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it was really gud plz contd soon n sorry 4 commentin soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow mahek the story is getting so interesting....i am dying to read d next part..plz post soon/
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nyc dialogue n gud starz...

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