~*~*~FATINY~*~*~(RN/RM FF)Ud- PAge 146--9/1/2010

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Hello Tina this reply is for next update:-

Vow g8 yaar ab Raj se Naina shaddi kar legi 😛😛😛aur shaddi k baad dono me pyaar ho jaayega 😉😉😉kyounki neither Raj nor Naina has a gf or bf.😆😆😆

Ab story acchi lag rahi hai padhne me yaar.😃😃😃

Naina ne accha plan socha hai Raj k saath KMA me enter karne ka.😊😊😊

I love Raj when he said mai aur tum ek hi bed😳😳😳 par aur Naina kehti hai don't worry mai us tarah ki ladki nahi hoon😆😆😆 n one more secne when Naina was about to go she says ki maine tumhare bed par tumahre saath fir kabhi.😳😳😳

ab dekhte hain kya karte hain dono.😊😊😊

update soon dear.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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Tina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

@sameera
thnx!!....sry dear to keep u waiting....but rahul's on his way.....really!!.....slow guy!1...lol....they'll come eventually in the story to help r-n....and dats pretty soon!!...

@jags
thnx a lot!!..

@riyaa
thnx!!....well it is indeed to be seen how the love blossoms and does naina become naina singh shekhawat!!..

@suhana
thnx!!...
well call it co-incidence....those two are lyk my fav scenes as well!!..........keep blushin!!....well lets see wat and how and where they enter.....for all u noe dey'll fall into deeper trouble!!...lol!!.......

@deeya
hey!...thnx a lot!!......naina did trust him nd will always trust him!!

@rituka
thnx!.....indeed she is dffrnt!!....hmm we'll see wat happens ahead!!..

@soumya
ohh nytym dear!!..
thnx!!....

@prerna
thnx!!..

@lipi
thnx a lot!!....naina is gud evrywhere na!!

@bhavini..
thnx ya....r-m are cmin....very slow...romancin smewer...lol!!.....

@sea_nyx

thnx yaa!!

Edited by cool~~gal - 16 years ago

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Tina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

Comin to mahak's question

Tumharey questions ke main 2 answers doongi......mayb not be too solid but hope it is satisfactory

1.Its for de story.....the story kickss off after naina forgives him......the story is not bout how angry naina is bout it all...its bout how dey gt together and prove navin innocent and in the course spend more tym wid each othr nd stuff....

2.In the second update i mentioned that naina had forgived raj coz of the words navin had told her...and naina loved her brother and trusted him a lot...he had told her something...(bout smetyms no one is rong nd all dat)...and she just wanted to follow that....maybe it would wrk!!..but yea dis point does bcme an issue later.....i can tell u coz i hv typed out most of de parts...so yeh point ka issue abhi nahi banega!!...

I noe mayb not good..but these are de 2 reasons i have!!..

If dey are not satisfactory(which i suppose they arent ) then i m sorry!!....sorry for the error!!....but i just wanted to get over that thingi bout he killin navin nd all....mayb it was too quick!!.......

But i am really glad u askd....it makes me also think nd improve as a writer!!...I really had to think before typin out a reply to u.....thanx a lot for askn the question as well.....it makes me feel good!!.....

@ mahak for reply-2

thnx!!...well ab biwi banti hain ya nahi aur akhir kaise yeh toh dekhna padega!!.......aur thats my fav scene as well!!.....

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj puchta hai ke Naina uske kamre mein uske bed pe rahegi toh Naina haa bolti hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Naina jab kehti hai woh waise ladki nahi hai toh Raj embarrass ho jata hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Navin kehta tha ke Raj ladkion se bada flirt karta hai aur pakda jaye toh ajeeb embarrassing sa face banata hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina started crying into his arms and Raj did not know what to do!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭But realising Naina broke off!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina kehti hai ke uske saath uske bed par kisi aur din!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛She is so naughty!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

She said she trust him and hopes ke kisi din woh bhi itni acchi dosti nibha paye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

This reminds me of the Nahin scene in the serial!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina roh rahi hai and the only reason she forgave Raj was because of what Navin had taught her!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Wow!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina suggested joining the academy wher he is awaiting posting!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛But Raj said teacher-student relationship is not allowed!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊That dialogue of his was very sweet and funny ke tum phookat mein wapas aajaogi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

From friendships and relationships they went to psychological definations of them!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕Baapre!!!!

Naina's dialogue that is he looking for a wife jo susheel sanskaari ho was too funny!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

But usse Naina ke dimaag mein light bulb jala!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

Naina has come up with a plan to go as Naina Singh Shekhawat!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

That means they will either do a paper marriage or pretend to be husband and wife!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Hey the NAINA SINGH SHEKHAWAT thing was too GR8. I just loved. But now please update soon. Waiting 4 it EAGERLY.

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...anshu...

@...anshu...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

tina

gr8 update

can u pm me next time u update

anshu

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Tina

@-Tina-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj puchta hai ke Naina uske kamre mein uske bed pe rahegi toh Naina haa bolti hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Naina jab kehti hai woh waise ladki nahi hai toh Raj embarrass ho jata hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Navin kehta tha ke Raj ladkion se bada flirt karta hai aur pakda jaye toh ajeeb embarrassing sa face banata hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina started crying into his arms and Raj did not know what to do!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭But realising Naina broke off!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina kehti hai ke uske saath uske bed par kisi aur din!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛She is so naughty!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

She said she trust him and hopes ke kisi din woh bhi itni acchi dosti nibha paye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

This reminds me of the Nahin scene in the serial!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina roh rahi hai and the only reason she forgave Raj was because of what Navin had taught her!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Wow!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina suggested joining the academy wher he is awaiting posting!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛But Raj said teacher-student relationship is not allowed!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊That dialogue of his was very sweet and funny ke tum phookat mein wapas aajaogi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

From friendships and relationships they went to psychological definations of them!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕Baapre!!!!

Naina's dialogue that is he looking for a wife jo susheel sanskaari ho was too funny!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

But usse Naina ke dimaag mein light bulb jala!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

Naina has come up with a plan to go as Naina Singh Shekhawat!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

That means they will either do a paper marriage or pretend to be husband and wife!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

ab ek na ek din toh shayad wahi honney wala hain...meaning woh aur Raj ek saath soyengey!!...that nahin scene was superkool!!...

now whether dey do paper marriage normal husnband wife live-in or something else.....who knoes!!....inka kuch nahi kaha jaa sakta..

Thnx!!

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Tina

@-Tina-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#58

@sumaiya

thnx!..i'll ud soon!!

@anshu

thnx!1...i will pm u!!..

@rituka

i'll ud soon dear!!

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Edited by cool~~gal - 16 years ago

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Tina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#59

PART-3

"STARTING A NEW JOURNEY"

Naina-Plan sunoo......i told you na....puri kahani sun lo!!

Raj-Ahh sunao!!..

Naina-Dekho....tum jis bhi academy mein hoon....whan par keh dena ki tumhari behen ki jaan ko khatra hain...so you wanna live with her......bas done.....

Raj-Suddenly meri behen kahan se paida hogayi?? 😆

Naina-Ahh koi cozin toh hogi na 😕

Raj-Nothing at all...meri sirf ek behen hain...jo ki already army mein training le rahi hain.....uske alwa na maa na baap....na koi door ka sambhandi... :(

Naina-okk so I am afraid plan B...Main tmhari biwi!....Naina Singh Shekhawat

Raj-What????🤢

Naina-Chill....sirf contract basis par....uss ke liye tumhari girlfriend ko pata na padega........if there's one!!... tum fikar mat karo.....hum ek contract sign karengey....legally married......maybe for 6 months or a year......ek baar bhai innocent prove ho jayen...phir tum jaana wapis apni jaan ke pass aur main ban jaongi doctor......logon ki jaan bachati phirongi.....atleast uske bad kam to milega....ab toh ek desh-drohi ke behen ko naukri nahi mil rahi....

Raj was shocked.. 😲

Naina-Raj practically socho....this is the need of the hour......Aggar tumhe yeh idea pasand nahi ayya then its fine!...hum aur kuch sochengey....mein toh hoo hi crazy kafi ghatiya idea tha...i knoe aur kuch sochte hain

Raj-Nainaaaa (he said still shocked) 😲

Naina-Hmm

Raj-Yeh idea

Naina-BAd I knoe!!

Raj-Baddd.....very bad....but like you said need of the hour!!....

Naina-Matlab? 😲

Raj-Kal tak sochte hain.....let this be our back-up plan.....aggar aur kuch samjh mein nahi ayya...toh we wll go ahead with this!!

Naina-What?????😲

Raj-Ya... 😊

Naina-Kool.....awesonme.....abb toh we will prove bhai innocent!!

Raj-Naina yes recorder Navin ka hain...(taking it out from his pocket) us din dena bhul gaya....lo rakh lo....ek bhai se bahut messages hain uski behen ki liye!!...😕

Naina-Thanx!!

Raj smiled..

Raj-Main chalta hoon.....kal milte hain!!

Naina-Hmm...

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Well call it fate...destiny or mere luck raj got his posting orders that day..

He was with Naina that night for dinner...when he recieved the call..

(one-sided conversation)

Raj-Sir!

Raj-I am gud thanku sir...

Raj-Yes sir...

Raj-I will be there!!

Raj kept the phone..

Naina-Kya hua??

Raj-Posting orders!!

Naina-Kahan??

Raj-KMA... 🤢

Naina was shocked and so was Raj..

Naina-Raj destiny is taking us there...dekho kaise sab kuch...i mean its perfect...tumhair kma ki posting....i mean..

Raj-Naina...I dunno main shayad whan jaakar kamzoor padh jao....meri saari yaddein kma se hain...😭..aur toh aur

Naina-Aur??

Raj-aur wahan is waqt meri behen bhi hain...bahut ziddi hain naina...aggar usse kuch fishy mehssos hua toh woh mere khilaf jassosi bhi karegi!!....Muskaan Singh Shekhawat kisi hitler se kam nahi!!...

Naina smiled...

Naina-Raj main tumhare saath hoon na..

She placed her hands on top of his..

Naina-So kya hum apna back-up plan??

Raj-Hmm right now mujhe kal acaemy mein report karna hain..hum kal niklengey ambala ke liye!!....

Naina-Hum?

Raj-Haan....main kuch din academy mein settle ho jao...phir dekhte hain!!..

Naina-Maa baba??

Raj-unse abhi milte hain..

Naina-No way.....tumhe kal academy mein report karna hain na ek piece main??

Raj-Naina I am serious tumhare mom dad se baat toh hogi!!..

Right there Raj and Naina leave to meet her parents..

Savitri (navin's mom) got the door...

Savitri-Naina beti tum...

Savitri closed the door and went outside..

She hugged her daughter..

Savitri-Kahan thi kaise thi??..

Naina-Maa main raj ke saath thi..

Savitri noticed Raj..

Savitri-Maafi chathi hoon beta uss din humne

Raj-Nahi aunty....aapney jo bhi kiya sahi kiya!!....Aap please maffi matt mangeyi!!

Naina-Mama...Raj galat nahi tha maa....ek baar usee kehney ka mauka to dena tha....maa khud bhai ne raj se kaha tha ki woh thak chukey hain....aur woh bahut hi harr chuke the maa....

raj ke mana karney par bhi bhai ne usee yeh sab karwaya....bhai ka recorder bhi hain mere pass....jisme se pata chalta hain ki uss din hua kya tha....shayad aggar uss din raj bhai ko nahi marta toh bhai aaj zinda hotey maa...ismein koi shak nahi hain...lekin woh ek murdey se bhi battar zindagi jeetey hongey maa.......

woh loog bhai ko marr marr kar torture kartey ma....iseey behtaar bhai ne apney dost ke hathoon..

Naina had tears in her eyes....and so did her mom!!

Savitri-Beta yeh baat tumharey papa nahi samjhengey..

Naina-Main samjhti hoon ma......main baba ko bhi samjhanogi

Savitri-Raj Naina....tum duno aggar andar aaogey na toh Naina ke papa badak jayengey....unka gussa thanda nahi hua bacha.....mat milo unse..

Naina-Maa Raj ki posting Kma mein huyi hain...hum duno kal KMA ke liye nikal rahe hain..

Savitri-Kya?...tu nahi bacha..tu kahin nahi jayegi

Naina-Maa mein jaa rahi hoon ma.....bhaiya ke liye mujhe jana hi hoga...

SAvitri-Beta par

Naina-Maa Raj mere saath hain na.....woh mera bhaiya ke tarah hi khayal rakhta hain maa...sach!!

Raj looked at Naina...She was saying stuff to jus console her mom....he hadnt done anything great!

Savitri-Beta mat jaa

Naina-Maa..

Savitri-Tune mann bana liya hain toh jaa!!

Naina hugged her mom

Naina-Baba

Savitri-Naa beta.....aaj baba nahi...sirf ma....mera asshirwad tere saath hain.....duno sada khush rahoo.....

Naina-Jane se pehle baba se milna chathi thi.....khair jald wapas aaongi...apney bhai ka gaurav leke!!..

Savitri smiled..

Savitri-Raj mera bacha apna khayal rakhna aur naina ka bhi!

Raj-Haan aunty rakhonga...mera yakkenn ke jiye!

Savitri smiled..

Mr.Ahluwaliya (from inside)--Kaun hain

Savitri-Jao bacha!!...

Naina and RAj ran!!

Savitri-Jii woh koi Mr.Sharma ke ghar jana tha...galti se yahan aa gaya....aap chalie..khana khate hian

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At Ambala....

For Raj in a flash all those memories come back!!...

Absoluetly evrything!!...

He drove to a little outskirts of the city!!.

Naina-Raj is this some shortcut to KMA

Raj-Noo uh...we are going to my friends place....for a few days you can be there

Naina-But why??....I mean KMA

Raj-Naina first let me get things right there.....then we will see what to do!!..

Naina-Are you sure?...how will I be with this friend...i Mean...

Raj-He is a very sweet guy!!....dont worry!!😊

Naina-Guy !!...shit!....your sick!....your leaving me with a guy!!..what kinda husband are you!!😆😆

Raj-(smiling) shut up!....that guy wont touch you!!......your not his types...moreover he is on night shifts...sleeps in the day and works in de night.....you dont need to bother!!.. 😆

Naina-yaya i was jus kiddin... 😉

Raj-Hmm!!..

Naina-Raj we will get through na..

Raj-Hopefully Naina...just one thing...this is a new journey...leave evrything else behind...we are starting fresh...

Naina nodded!!

After a long time they finally reached Raj's friends house!!

They kept putting the bell for about 20 minutes...

Ting tong ting tong!!..It went on...and after 20 minutes the door was opened...There he stood....Raj's friend....the one he had trusted so much with a huge grin on his face!!..

Played by Mayank Anand....

But there was'nt a smile on Raj or Naina's face...

Both were thinking about what destiny had in stock for them...what was their fate...

Fate and destiny both were same......a predemnant of the future!....Who knows what fatiny had in stock for them!!

*************** Finally Rahul's here.... And so is Muskaan Singh Shekhawat as well..

Muskaan is a bit different here....hope you guys dont mind...shes just a bit more matured....but right now in a angry face of life...with some problems...which will be solved eventually!!...

Edited by cool~~gal - 16 years ago