~*~*~FATINY~*~*~(RN/RM FF)Ud- PAge 146--9/1/2010 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
@mahak
ok..no probs...take ur tym!!....waisey mera reply padha??...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: cool~~gal

Comin to mahak's question


Tumharey questions ke main 2 answers doongi......mayb not be too solid but hope it is satisfactory
1.Its for de story.....the story kickss off after naina forgives him......the story is not bout how angry naina is bout it all...its bout how dey gt together and prove navin innocent and in the course spend more tym wid each othr nd stuff....
2.In the second update i mentioned that naina had forgived raj coz of the words navin had told her...and naina loved her brother and trusted him a lot...he had told her something...(bout smetyms no one is rong nd all dat)...and she just wanted to follow that....maybe it would wrk!!..but yea dis point does bcme an issue later.....i can tell u coz i hv typed out most of de parts...so yeh point ka issue abhi nahi banega!!...
I noe mayb not good..but these are de 2 reasons i have!!..
If dey are not satisfactory(which i suppose they arent ) then i m sorry!!....sorry for the error!!....but i just wanted to get over that thingi bout he killin navin nd all....mayb it was too quick!!.......
But i am really glad u askd....it makes me also think nd improve as a writer!!...I really had to think before typin out a reply to u.....thanx a lot for askn the question as well.....it makes me feel good!!.....
@ mahak for reply-2
thnx!!...well ab biwi banti hain ya nahi aur akhir kaise yeh toh dekhna padega!!.......aur thats my fav scene as well!!.....

Thanks a lot darling for clearing my doubts.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
@mahak
ohh u dunt need to say thnx dear....hope i made sme sense!!... :)
@ur comment for update 3...
thnx a lot....abb rahul muski ki entry bhi ho gayyi....aur naina ke dad ke baat jahan tak hain woh bahut hi ziddi hain naina ki tarah!..lol....he will eventually forgive her hopefully!!.....and raj as well...lets see wat fatiny has in stock for them ...lol!!
Edited by cool~~gal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
Superb fic yaar, šŸ‘
just loved it.šŸ˜‰
nice story yaar update soon.šŸ˜›
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
First of all sorry for the late reply
Tina it was a gr8 update..Hmm Finally RM in.....Gr8 conversation..Superb dialogues dear.
Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Luved it totally RM WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Looking for more of them.....
Keep writing I will be waiting






Edited by sweetdreams4040 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
@varshita
thnx a lot..
@sam
no prob at all yaa!! nd yes finally r-m r here for u!!...nd definetly you'l hv more of em soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
PART-4
"BACK TO BASE"
They stood outside for about 10 minutes!!

Finally he opened the door!.

Raj-Hey rahul..😊
Rahul-Hey ka bacha....kitney din se milney bhi nahi ayya....kaisa hain..
And he hugs him.....dats when he sees Naina..
Rahul-Ahem ahemšŸ˜‰..toh akhir yaad aggyi na meri.......but for a selfish motive.!!....not bad...mera flirty dost akhir pyar mein phas gaya!!.šŸ˜†....achi ladki hain!!....iski koi behen hain kya?....toh main bhi chance maro!!šŸ˜‰
Raj-Shut up!!....mujhe baat karne dega ya khud bakk bak karega!! šŸ˜†
Rahul-Areyy yaar...mujhe sab pata hain....chal andar chalšŸ˜‰
Raj-Ohh mere antaryami dost!!....ab chal!!
They go and settle down!!
Naina looks at Raj uncomfortably!...Raj gives her a reassurin smile..
Rahul-Ahem ahem...mujhe ab darr lag raha hain..kahin mere ghar se mujhe hi bahar nikalna ka plan toh nahi šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Raj-Rahul teri maddad chahiye yar!!..
Rahul-Woh toh malloom hain..bata
Raj-Woh meri posting KMA mein huyi hain
Rahul-Kool 😃...Actually not so kool..Muski wahan hain na...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Rahul started laughing..
Rahul-Teri toh phatti!!..
Raj-Abbey chup na yaar...meri baat toh sun..
Rahul-Sorry sorry bol..
Raj-Aur yeh meri dost Naina....naina met rahul rahul met naina..
Rahul-Hey Naina 😊
Naina smiled and said hi!
Raj-Issey kuch din ke liye rehne ke jagah ....uhh kuch din ke liye tere saath
Rahul-Heyy tu apni girlfriend ko mera saath chodh rahah hain😲...not bad!!! šŸ˜‰
Raj-Pehle baat yeh meri girlfriend nahi hain.....dusri baat mera tujhpar pura barosa hain......behen jaise dhyan rakhega tu iska!! šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Rahul-Itni soni kudi meri behen...kool...šŸ˜›.
Suddenly Rahul realized that Raj was serious.....he was in no mood to joke
Rahul-Sab theekh toh hain na Raj...main bas mazak kar rahha tha...tu fikar na kar...bhabhi ko yahan koi pareshani nahi hogi.....main dhyan rakhonga..
Raj-Thnx buddy šŸ˜›
Rahul-To kuch chuppa raha hain Raj
Raj-Rahul kisi aur din fursaat mein baat karengey....aaj late ho raha hain..
Rahul-Ok tu ja...apna khayal rakh....waisey aata toh rahega na bhabhi se milne!! šŸ˜‰
Raj smiled
Raj-Chalta hoon...
Raj hugged Rahul and walked to Naina..
Raj-Dont worry...sab theekh ho jayega....mein jald hi wapas aaonga!!..
Naina smiled
Naina-Take care 😊
Raj-You too..
Raj turned around to go!!
Raj-Rahul jus for your info.....sambhal kar rehna...teri bhabhi ek doctor hain aur haan psycology mein ....bahut dangerous hain!!
Raj laughed and so did rahul and Naina..
He left!!..

********

A while later he finally reached KMA!!.... It was his home his base....his everything in life

He went straight to report to Brigadier chandok!
"Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat reporting sir"
Brigadier looked up from his file
Bc-Welcome to KMA once again Captain !! 😊
Raj-Thankyou sir!!..
Bc-So ghuma firakey your are always connected to Kma..the best indian soldier of your batch ..😃
Bc laughs...but Raj was senti!!
Bc-I understand Captain...It must jus be like old days for you....Co-Incidently some of your batchmates are posted here too.....you could meet them soon!!....I am sure its going to be a tought time for me again!!..... šŸ˜†
Bc smiles
Raj-But Captain Navin is not there Sir!!....and i was the 2nd best cadet....navin was the best...and will always be the best....you knoe sir he was not a traitor😭!!
Bc's face became sad!!
Bc-Captain you may proceed towards the mess....you will find all the cadets and faculty there.....go ahead....and all the best captain!!..
Raj moves towards the mess wondering whom he would meet....his batchmates...his sister.....kma was jus the perfect place!!
He gave a fake smile.. 🤢
On his way he bumped into someone.....well it was jus the first person..
When he looked at the lady standing in front of him...he was taken aback......ahhh bc was right..
Raj-Tum?? 😲
Lady-Tumm??
Raj smiled..
Raj-Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat.....communication and stratergy...
She smiled
Doctor shalin!!.....infirmary incharge!!
Raj-Kool.....so your the doc!!...😊
Raj hugged her
Raj-How have you been??
Shalini-Perfectly fine!!.....and you
Raj-Hmm good!!..
Shalini-Its really so good to see you!!
Raj-I knoe!!..
Shalini-going to the mess??
Raj-Yea!!.
Shalini-Alright then...lets go!!.
They proceed to the mess!!
As they enter the mess together....
Our Cadets are sitting over there
Cadet Amardeep huda!

Cadet Aalekh sharma

Cadet Yadhuvansh sahani

Cadet Muskaan Singh Shekhawat

Cadet Sameera Shroff

Cadet Tanvi

(No Naina ofcourse....plus no ali and pooja)
Huda-Oyee yudiyee.....woh dekh....teri chori uss dusre chore ke saath hain......main na kehta tha...deri mat kar.....ab hogi na teri kudi kisi aur ki!!...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Huda was laughing!!.
Yudi-Shut up bro!!.....
Sameera Tanvi and muskaan had not yet come
Aalekh-Ayye khali peli bheja mat khao!!...
Raj And shalini reach their table!!
Shalini-Cadets yeh hain kma ke nayee faculty member...Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat..
All were shocked!!
Huda--Oye kahin inka meri Muskaan se koi nata toh nahi!!..
Shalini-Appke batchmate ke bhai hain....Cadet Muskaan ke bhai!!..
Huda-Oyee teri!!..
Shalini-Kya hua cadet Huda?? šŸ˜†
Huda-Kuch nahi ma'am!....Kuch bhi toh nahi!!🤢..Welcome to KMA sir..
Shalini smiled.....
Raj-Thankyou cadet
Shalini-Chalo Raj......tumhe bakiyyon se milwati hoon
Raj-Hann ah woh Muskaan kahan hain??
Yudi-Sir woh apne kamre mein hian!!.
Raj-Thankyou Cadet!....
Shalini-Milna chaogey?
Raj-Ah its ok...badme!!
Raj and shalini walk towards where another faculty meber was sittin
Shalini-Aur woh hain Kma ke vice principal..Captain abhimanyu rai chahuhan
Raj-Chauhan!!
Abhimanyu-Raj tu yaha!
Raj and Abhimamnyu hug!!
Raj-Mota ho gaya hain chauhan....body vody ban le hain ek dum solid!! šŸ˜†
Abhimanyu smiled!!
Raj-Humara purana group hi lag raha hain....sirf Navin nahi hain!!...
All their smiles vansihed!!
Chauhan--raj....tum fresh ho jao.....bakii battein badmein..
Raj-Hmm
Raj was walking out....
He saw Muskaan
Raj-Cadet shekhawat!!
Muskaan-Aap yahan...
Raj-Haan meri posting huyi hain yahan..
Muskaan-Posting huyi hain ya jaan bojkar yahan ke liye mangi....taaki
mujhpar nazar rakh sake... 😔
Raj-Muskaan tu kyun aisa sochti hain...I sware itefak se yahan posting
huyi hain... šŸ˜•
Muskaan-Forget it !!......njoy wid ur posting!!...Abb to milte rahengey!! 😔
😔😔
Muskaan left
Raj doesnt knoe why off-late Muskaan had drifted so much from him....they were very close....after their mom and dads death...raj brought her up all alone.....muskaan respected him a lot.....and loved him a lot......but suddenly it was all over....wen he reutnred from a long mission.he saw a a completely changed muskaan...he has been trying to figure out what exactly happened...she wont speak to him about it......and nor could he find out....he was paying his duty to his country and somewhere neglecting his sister!!...
Raj felt sad wen muskaan behaved like this!!..
Raj went straight to the quarters assigned...he went to get freshened
up...meanwhile shalini sent Muskaan to his room to keep some files.....when she entered his phone started ringing..
Muskaan-Aapka phone baj raha hain..
Raj(from inside)-Muskaan?
Muskaan--Haan...aapka phone bhaj raha hain...
Raj-(inside)-Tu please dekh legi..
Muskaan sighs...picks up the phone..
Muskaan-Hello....
It was Rahul at the other end..
Rahul-Ahh...Kya main Raj se bat kar sakta hoon??
Muskaan--Woh iss waqt busy hain tumhe bad main phone karengey...
Rahul was silent for a second
Rahul-Muskaaann??????
Muskaan was trying to to place the voice..little would she have known if
she would have seen the name before picking up.......maybe she wouldnt have picked up seeing the name....
Muskaan-Ohh shit....monkey man??
Rahul-Haan...monkey man.😃
Muskaan--Gawwd.....
Rahul dint say anything at the other end..
Muskaan-Pata nahi kyun hamesha tumse default main baat ho jati hain....argh i so hate it..😔
Rahul-Muskaan....maine tujhe kuch bhi nahi kaha....phir phookat main kyun badhak rahi hain??🄱
Muskaan--Dekho monkey man yeh sab faltoo battein tum kisi aur ladki ke saath karna....mere saath nahi..mujhe toh samjh main nahi aa raha ki main tujhse aakhir baat kyun kar rahi hoon......😔😔
Raj comes out..
Muskaan sess and sighs..
Muskaan-Gud bye..
She hands the phone to raj
Rahul sighs at the other end....uff yeh ladki....crazy girl!!
Raj-Helloo
Rahul-Main Rahul!!
Raj-Haan rahul bata sab theekh hain na?
Rahul-Haan woh naina tujhse baat karna chathi thi šŸ˜‰
Rahul passed the phone to Naina....And left the room
Silence
Raj-Naina
Naina-Raj umm...bas yeh puchne ke liye phone kiya ki theekh se pahunch gayee na??
Raj-Ofcourse Naina....tum toh abhi se patni ke tarah behave kar rahi
hoon šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Naina smiled!! 😳
Naina-Pata nahi ek tum hi hoo mere saath....I am so worried!!šŸ˜•
Raj-Shh!!...dont worry.....jab mein hoon tab tumhe apne chote se khali se dimag ko koi kaam nahi dena.šŸ˜†..mein sab sambhal loonga.....u trust me ??
Naina-Ofcourse...ek tum he hoon jispar mein bharosa karti hoon!!...ab aggeey kya karna hain??
Raj-Pata nahi...par for now the news is mere kuch dost bhi co-incidently Kma mein Posted hain!!...So pata nahi is see easy hoga ya aur bhi tough!...Main weekend par aaonga dekhte hain kya karna hain
Naina-Kya rahul bhaiya ko janta hain??
Raj-Ofcourse bahut achhi tarekkey se...jab mein aaonga toh rahul ko sab bata dengey.....woh humari bahut madda kar sakta hain...... and woh sab sach bhi jaanta hain...mere barrey main...aur navin ke mauth ke baarey main...
Naina-Ok!!..Weekend pe milte hain!!
Naina heard Rahul scream from outside
"Mein tumhare boyfriend ke tarah rich nahi hoon!!....mera balance kam hain....uss khados ko kaho khud phone kare....you see incoming is free"
Naina smiled and so did Raj!!. he heard that as well...
Raj-Sala kanjoos!!....bol dena usko Weekend pe aa raha hoon.....chillar de donga!! šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
Naina-Bye!!..Take care!
Raj-Bye!...You too!!

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Edited by cool~~gal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
hi tina,h r u?

sorry 4 not replyin to u'r pm sweety,n sorry 4 the delay in readin n commenting on u'r fic,

actualy i was very busy 2day only got time 2 read the fic as it is a holiday 4 me,

the strt of u'r fic is simply super n very intrestn,

lovely turn to the story,dialogues were gr8,

characters were super n rockin RN the best,

waitn 4u'r next update,

all the best,



Aarthi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
It was nice Tina. Luved the chillars part. It was a nice beginning but hope that muskaan will sort out her problems wid raj soon. coz i dont wanna see him in more troubles.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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tooo good.....................liked rahuls charachter here

n dos lines in d end wer awesomešŸ˜†

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