~*~*~FATINY~*~*~(RN/RM FF)Ud- PAge 146--9/1/2010 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
hey tina
awesome part
i use to watch LRL but after raj died i stopped
glad to see such a nice FF on them
do cont soon
get RM in soon yea
love
tanu
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
nice udπŸ‘.cont soon.......
Edited by *Rajeevian* - 16 years ago
prerna1 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
gr8 part
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!
Raj came in his full uniform and Naina sensed ke koi baat zaroor hai!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•But she teased him ke usse koi parvah nahi ke Naina jeeye yaa mare!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
Raj ne keh hi diya ke he killed Navin!!!! Magar Naina ke mom dad toh kuch sunne ko hi taiyyar nahi hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
At least Naina itni samajdar hai ke woh pura sach janna chahti hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊
Naina is a doctor!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Raj is right ke do they have medicines,patients and death always on their mind??😊 😊 😊
I liked Raj's sad joke!!!!!😊 😊 😊
Raj ne Naina ko sab kuch bata diya and Naina started crying!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Poor Naina!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
Raj is right!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Naina is truly the most matured person he had ever met!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
Dono hi nahi soh paye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina is thinking ke Raj is right or wrong and Raj is thinking what Naina is thinking!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Raj Naina ki uske bags ke saath help karta hai aur Naina usse flirt bulata hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Naina ghar chhod ke aayi hai Raj ke paas!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
a truely awesome updt...................loved rn chemstry here...........πŸ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

@saridena
Reserved...lol!!

@jags
thnx!!...

@rituka
thnx!!...awe many more twists cmin up!!

@watch rajeev
thnx a lot.....indeed i will try my best to be regular this time as well!!...

@tanu
thnx a lot!!....ya r-m will cme a little further.....

@varsha
thnx!!

@prerna
thnx ya!!

@shaina
thnx shaina........

@lipi
thnx a lot!!

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Well thnx guys for all the comments...but kisi ne mere small se sawal ka small sa jawab nahi diya..... :(...about the pm nd email thingi......please let me noe!!...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
Hi!! Tina!!
Wow!! what an update....Naina has left her house to prove her
brother's innocense....great...
Now waiting eagerly to see what happens next...
Take care.
Continue soon...
love
Riya.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
hey tina plz pm me when u update the fic

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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
PART-2
PLAN OF ACTION?
Naina-Yeah...aur kya karti mom dad toh baat sunn na nahi chathe hain....mujhe nahi pata...bas bhaiya ko innocent prove karna hain

Raj-Toh tumne ghar chodh liya

Naina-Haan...

She started munching an apple..

Raj-Toh tum yahan is hotel mein rahogi??

Naina-Haan

Raj-Hang on kahin mere kamre mein sona ka toh?

Naina-Haan....Paise thodi hian mere pass..

Raj-Naina...

Naina-Raj...

Raj-So tum mere saath is hotel main rahogi.....mere kamre mein mere bed par

Raj stopped abruplty....what on earth was he saying...

Naina-Hey mein waise types ki nahi hoon!!

Raj-Ahh I dint mean that.......

Raj was embarrased..

Naina-Bhaiya theekh kehte the.....tum hoon hi ajjeb..

Raj smiled...ordered for some food......and they started talking..

Raj-Navin ne mere barrey mein tumse kuch kaha tha...humare milne se pehle!

Naina-Hmm kehte the mera best friend hain rajveer....bahut acha soldier hain...yeh woh....ladkiyyon ke saath bada flirt karta hain......blah blah!!.....aur jab pakda jayee toh ek bahut ajjeb embarrasing sa face banta hain..

Naina starts laughing..

Naina-Bhai ne tumhe kya batay mere bareey mein?

Raj-Bilkul waisa jaisa tum ho

Naina-Matlab

Raj-Sometimes the most matured person and sometimes the most dummest!!..

Naina smiled..

Naina-I knoe...

Naina looked away...

Raj-Naina...tumne yeh theekh nahi kiya..

Naina-Pata nahi.........i really dunno kya ho raha hain...ek tum hi toh the....jis par mein pura barosa karti thi..

Raj-Thi??...Yani ab nahi karti......

Naina had tears in her eyes..

Naina-Raj I am confused...

Naina broke into his arms....Raj was taken aback.....he dint noe what to do.....his hands mid way.....

He placed his hands on her shoulder...thinking that was the safest..

Raj-Naina..

Naina-Kyun hota hain yeh sab??

Raj-Naina its ok..dekho...

Nain suddenly realized she was actually sticking to him...she broke...

Naina-I am sorry..woh bas

Raj-Its ok...

Naina wiped her tears....picked her bag and walked towards the door...Raj was confused...what had he done?....

Naina-Ahh dont look so confused...maine apney liye kamra book kiya hain......bas they are cleaning it up.......tumhare saath tumhare room main tumhare bed par kisi aur din!!...

Naina laughed....

Raj-Naina woh

Naina-Uff I trust you big time raj!...I did....I do..I always will...I just wish main kabhi kisi se itni acchi dosti nibah paoo!!....I am proud of you!!...chalti hoon....kal dekhte hain kya karna hain

Naina left to her room..

She sat on the sofa and burst out crying....The only reason she forgived Raj is Navin....Her brother had taught her....something he believed in

He had told her

"kabhi kabhi zindagi mein aisa hota hain ki kisi situation mein koi sahi koi galat nahi hota....hamesha koi right aur koi wrong ho yeh zarrori nahi hain naina....kabhi kabhi duno sahi hote hain...ya duno galat......yeh baat meri hamesha yaad rakhna naina.....zindagi mein bahut kaam atti hain..tumhare nazariya se shayad koi sahi hon....lekin woh khud apney app ko sahi samjhe yeh zarrori nahi!!"

Those words rang in her head ....and thats why she was ready to support Raj...her prime motive was to prove the innocence of navin..and she was willing to do it!!...

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At the restaurant

Next day Naina And Raj were trying to see what they could do..

Raj-Dekho Naina...hamara ek saath rehne bahut zarrori hian lekin assan nahi.....

Naina-Matlab?

Raj was hesitant

Naina-Please batao

Raj-Naina aggar logoon ko pata chala ki mein tumse milta rehta hoon...joki unke hisab se ek traitor ki behen hain......toh woh sarrey clues jo mujhe pechle 4 saal se mil rahe hain...woh sab waste ho jayengey naina....tum samajh rahi hoon na

Naina-Jaanti hoo raj...Har jagah chupati hi rahi hoon....Ab toh aadat se ho gayyi hain....apni asliyat sabse chupati hoon....

Raj-Naina knoe its difficult.....but humme navin se matlab hain naki kisi aur se

Naina-So kya mein name change kar doon??

Raj--Nahi Naina...tumhe apna naam change karney ki koi zarorat nahi hain..lekin haan kuch toh karna padega

Naina-Hmm...

Raj-Ahh tum ma baba se phir se baat

Naina-Nahi...maa baba ko iss sab se dur rakhna hi theekh rahega......main maa baba ko sambhal loongi....I will miss them...but bhaiya ke liye kuch bhi!!

Raj-Hmm..

Naina-So plan of action kya hain??

Raj-Soch raha hoon....kya tumhare pass koi idea hain??

Naina-Nahi!!...

Naina looked around the coffe shop casually...suddenly an idea struck her

Naina-Raj aggar mein woh academy join karo jahan your awaiting posting then....we can be together na

Raj-My sweet friiend... student-teacher relationship is strictly not alowed...tum toh phookat mein wapas aa jaogi....mera kya hoga....mar mar ke mar dengey

Both laughed..

Naina-Toh kya faculty member dusre faculty member ke saath relationship rakh sakta hain....by the wayy hum relationship par kyun pahunch gayye?....humm toh bas mission par concentrate karna chahiye

Raj-Naina...what according to you is relationship??

Naina-Ahh...By the way psycho main hoon....so dont you think relationships ke barrey main i should be knowing better.

Raj smiled..

Naina-Ofcourse ab main jaanti hoon lekin jab main bachhi thi i had differnt ideas...you knoe the typical boyfrind girlfriend types and

Raj-And?

Naina-Ahh...

Raj-Batao

Naina-Physical

Raj laughed..

Raj-Friendship is also a relationship

Naina-Friendship is friendship

Raj-Naina....Relationship is a specific connection betwwen two people.in this case...in general its a connection betwwen objects concepts people anything...

Naina was looking at him with a smile..

Naina-..and to remind you again i m psychologist.....so i noe all this.....waisey relationship main kaffi exper lagte hoon

Raj-Haha....(he got the mischief in her eyes).....aisa hi kuch samjh lo....

Naina-Hey tumhari koi girlfriend hain kya??

Raj smiled...

Raj-Hum Navin par the right...we are diverting...

Naina-Okok baba mat batao!...apni girlfriend ke barrey mein...

Raj-Acha toh tum batao.....boyfriend??

Naina (imitating Raj) Hum Navin par the right....we are diverting...

Raj smiled..

Raj-Ok yeh relationships ko bajoo rakhte hain...aur ab dekhte hain hum kya kar saktey hain....dekho pehle toh we should see to it that you'r realy identity is hidden....second we should be in a position wherein you and me can meet without problem.......if your a student at the academy where i am posted...its a bit of a problm....so think of something else...

Naina-Uff...you want me to help in the mission or your looking for a wife jo sushel sanskarik and all that hoo!!..she should stick to you all the time...we could jus be normal with each other..

Raj smiled.

Raj-Get serious..

Suddenly Naina's smiled changed into joy!!

Naina-Perfect!!

Raj-Huh??

Naina-Raj I have a perfect plan!!

Raj was now scared....suddenly naina jumping out with a plan...

Naina-Out of here...my room 15 mins!!

And Naina was off...leaving Raj bemused!!

15 mins later!!

Raj-Batao kya hain tumhara plan??

Naina-Do you have a girlfriend??

Raj-Naina please focus for godsake!!

Naina-Jus tell me yes or no!!

Raj-Naina enough of jokes...I am serious!!

Naina-Ufff....tum itney ziddi kyun hoon ...anyway hain bhi toh trust me not a problem...suno...main naina singh ahluwaliya ki tarah toh nahi jee sakti lekin what do you say about Naina Singh Shekhawat!!

Raj ki duniya ghum gayyi!!....what exactly did she mean by that.....Naina Singh Shekhawat!!....Shit!!..

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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
Nice update I muss say..Waitin for the next one Hopefully RM comin my way 😳😳

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