my fan-fic... - Page 4

ok, here i go!!!
recap: a-b share some romantic moments together, bhavri shows arjun that she can drive.
At HH, when they enter, shaku runs towards arjun.
Shaku(crying): arjun, bhoomi, kaha the tum dono, main tumhe kabse phone karne ki koshish kar rahi thi lekin tumhara phone lag hi nahi raha tha
A: aap ro kyun rahi hai mummy? kya baat hai?
S: beta, suraj kal subah ko office ke liye nikla tha, aur ab tak wapas ghar nahi aaya hai...
A: kya? haan, woh kaal office me bhi nahi tha... lekin wo jaa kaha sakta hai?
S: pata nahi beta... jab bhi kahi jata hai to bata ke jata hai... tumhare papa aur mansen bhaisaab use dhoondhne gaye hai.
A: main bhi jata hoon mummy, shayad kahi miljaye.(looks towards bhavri n gives her a smile and then leaves)

its really short but i dont have much time...

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ok, i m writing again... didnt hv much time earlier.
recap: suraj is missing.
arjun calls up sid to ask him abt any news of suraj. meanwhile, at HH, manasvi is really tensed abt suraj. bhavri enters.
B: bhabhi, fikar mat kijie, suraj-ji miljayenge...
S: bhagwan kare tumhari baat sach ho jaye. ye suraj bhi na...pata hai bhoomi, college mein bhi aisa hi kiya karta tha, class bunk karta bina inform kiye. ek din to woh pure do din college nahi aaya. tab mujhe laga ke woh itne din class bunk kar raha hai. lekin phir jab main uske ghar gai, tab mujhe chaiji ne bataya ke usne college ke kuch gundo ke saath ladai ki, kyon ki un gundo ne mere baare mein kuch bura-bhala kaha...

bhavri smiles. n then leaves.
arjun meets sid n mansen n asks them abt any news frm suraj. they deny.
A: mujhe lagta hai hume police mein report likhani chahiye(just then, mansens phone rings, suraj is calling)
Mansen: hello, suraj, kaha ho tum? kaise ho?
stranger: dekhiye mera naam bhaleram hai, aur main city hospital se bolraha hoon. mr suraj ka accident ho gaya hai. woh is waqt ICU mein hai. bohot mushkil se aap ka number mila hai. aap jaldi se hospital aajaiye...
M: thik hai, hum abhi aate hai.
Sid: kya huwa mansen?
M: suraj hospital mein hai.
they go to the hospital n find suraj in the ICU, injured very badly.
M(to the doctor): doctor, mera beta kaisa hai.
Doctor: dekhiye, waise to woh khatre ke bahar hai, kyun ki unhe sahi waqt par hospital laya gaya tha, lekin unhe hosh aane ke liye thoda waqt lagega.

arjun goes n meets the person who called them n thanks him. he says its ok n that he has to do the farz of a human being.
meanwhile, sid calls HH n tells every1 abt what happened. in 15 minutes, every1 is at the hospital.
shaku is very sad. she asks the doctor if she can meet suraj. the doctor says that he is unconscious n that she can only see him.

thats it... tata. its quite late, so good nite as well.

oops, looks like the time is different. it is 12 midnite where i stay 😆 😆 😆

wow...great work done...sorry just read all the past ones...n welcome back n do continue.😊

recap: mansen gets a call frm an unknown guy, everyone is in the hospital.
Shaku is in the ICU loking at Suraj, crying. Arjun sees her n a tear drops frm his eye.
A(to himself): main kyun ro raha hoon? mera uske saath kya rishta? (wipes the tears frm his eyes. he then notices manasvi, sitting in a corner and very quiet.
A(goes n sits near manasvi): bhabhi, aap itni chup kyun hai? kahin aap ko us suraj ke liye to bura nahi lag raha hai?
Manasvi: arjun, main aur suraj ache dost hai. hamara rishta bilkul waisa hai jaise shaadi se pehle tumhara aur bhoomi ka rishta tha. agar us waqt bhoomi ka is tarha accident huwa hota to...
A(almost screaming): BHABHI!
M: dekha arjun, sirf ye baat sunke tum itne naraaz ho gaye. to socho mera kya haal hoga.
bhavri has been listening to all this. she feels sorry for manasvi but at the same time is happy that manasvi has some weird hidden feelings for suraj. but all this is forgotten when shaku screams from inside the ICU.
Shaku: DOCTOR!!!!
every1 runs to the ICU and the doctor comes running as well. to everyones surprise, suraj has gained consciousness and is smiling towards shaku n all the others.
Doctor: amazing, incredible! itni jaldi inke hosh aane ki umeed to mujhe thi hi nahi...
Suraj: doctor, mera parivaar hai isiliye main hoon. aaj ye sab yaha hai isiliye mujhe hosh aagaya.
mansen goes n sits near suraj and for the first time in his life puts his hand on surajs head. suraj is very happy, but arjun feels a bit jealous of this amd makes a bad face. suraj sees this and smiles towards him. arjun turns his face away...

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hi guys, m continuing...
recap: manasvi is sad abt surajs condition, arjun does not like it when mansen puts his hand on surajs head.
outside the room,
Shaku(to doctor): doctor, mera beta ghar kab aa sakta hai?
doctor: abhi ek-do di aur rehna parega inhe yaha, aur phir hum inhe discharge kar denge.

later, mansen, yuv, shefali, and shaku leave.
Arjun(to shaku n sid): mummy, papa, aap bhi ghar chale jaiye... hum hai na yaha par!
shaku: thik hai beta. suraj ka dhyaan rakhna.
after shaku n sid leave, arjun, bhavri n manasvi are sitting outside the ICU when the doctor comes and tells them that they will have to shift suraj in the common ward as he is out of danger. after suraj is shifted...
M: arjun, bhoomi, tum dono ko ghar jaa kar thoda sa aaram kar lena chahiye...
A: lekin bhabhi, aap yaha akele?
M: meri fikar mat karo arjun, main apna aur suraj ka, dono ka dhyaan rakhungi.
A: thik hai bhabhi, agar koi problem ho ya phir kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho to phone kar dena...
M: thik hai arjun...

arjun and bhavri leave. after some time, suraj wakes up
Suraj(to nurse): nurse, kya mere parivaar me se koi yaha hai?
Nurse: haan, apki patni bahar baithi hai..
suraj is confused and looks outside and sees manasvi.
he laughs...
S(to nurse): woh meri patni nahi, meri dost hai...
N: oh, sorry... waise, main kaafi der se dekh rahi hoon, woh aap ke liye bohot pareshan hai.
suraj suddenly has a wide smile on his face. just then manasvi enters.
M: kya baat hai suraj? itne khush kis baat pe ho?
S: kuch nahi manasvi, aise hi. tum bhi ghar chali jaati na, bohot thak gayi hogi tum.
M: nahi suraj, main thik hoon. tum batao ke tumhe kaisa lag raha hai?
S: pehle se kaafi behtar hoon, waise doctor ne kya kaha, main is jail se kab chhoot sakta hoon?
M(laughing): doctor ne kaha ke bas kuch hi dino me tum yaha se bahar hoge.

meanwhile, at home, arjun is very confused on his state of mind... bhavri sits near him
Bhavri: kya baat hai arjun? itne khoye-khoye kyun ho?
A: kya kahu bhavri... mujhe khud samajh mein nahi aa raha hai ke mujhe kya ho raha hai. main jo doosro ke liye mehsoos karta hoon, ye main khud nahi jaanta. jaise ke suraj ko hi dekhlo, main use bilkul pasand nahi karta, lekin phir bhi, jab woh hospital mein tha tab mujhe uske liye bohot bura lag raha tha. ab tum apna hi example dekho, tum jab suraj se baat karti ho to mujhe accha nahi lagta, tumhe jab chot lagti hai to mujhe dard hota hai... kya ho raha hai? aisa to pehle kabhi nahi huwa...
bhavri is very quietly listening to all this. but when arjun reaches the last part about her, she stares at arjun and blushes 😳 .

thats it. hope u like this part.