my fan-fic... - Page 3

it was 22222222 gud
waiing 4 the mext part

thanks. recap:arjun screams at bhavri
NEXT MORNING, BHAVRI MEETS MANASVI IN THE HALL.
M: TO BHOOMI, KAB SIKHNA CHAHTI HO GADI...
B: SSSHHHH, BHABHI. KISI KO PATA NAHI CHALNA CHAHIYE, KHAS KAR KE ARJUN KO. MAIN USE SURPRISE DENA CHAHTI HOON.
M: THIK HAI BHOOMI, KAB SIKHNA HAI?
B: AAJ DOPAHAR KO. SUBAH MAIN KHANA BANA RAHI HU TO MUJHE WAQT NAHI MILEGA.
M: THIK HAI. TEEN BAJE.
B: DONE.

IN THE AFTERNOON AT 2:30, BHAVRI IS GETTING READY. SHE GOES TO THE HALL AND MEETS MANASVI.
M: CHALE BHOOMI.
B: CHALIYE BHABHI.

MANASVI TAKES HER OUTSIDE N MAKES HER SIT IN THE CAR.
M: BHOOMI, AB YE DEKHO, TUM IS WAQT DRIVER KI SEAT PE BAITHI HO. WAHA APNE PAIRO KE PAAS TEEN JO DIKH RAHE HAI NA, USME SE EK ACCELERATOR HAI, DOOSRA BRAKE AUR TEESRA CLUTCH.

THEY CONTINUE WITH THE TEACHING TILL QUITE LATE. BHAVRI LEARNS ALMOST ALL THE BASIC THEORY AND ALL THAT IS LEFT IS THE PRACTICAL, WHICH MANASVI HAS LEFT FOR THE NEXT DAY. IT IS 8:30 WHEN THEY REACH HOME. ARJUN IS HOME AND WAITING FOR BHAVRI. WHEN BHAVRI GETS HOME, HE SURROUNDS HER WITH LOTS OF QUESTIONS.
A: BHAVRI, KAHA GAYI THI TUM? KIS KE SAATH? KYUN?
B: ARJUN, ARJUN, SHANT HO JAO. MAIN, WOH MANDIR GAYI THI MANASVI BHABHI KE SAATH.
A: KUM SE KUM EK PHONE TO KAR DIYA HOTA(BHAVRI IS SILENT) ACHA THIK HAI BHAVRI, MUJHE BOHOT BHUK LAGI HAI.
B: HA ARJUN, ABHI LATI HOON.
BHAVRI BRINGS THE FOOD AND THEY FEED EACH OTHER and sharesome happy moments.

next morning, arjun is getting ready for office when he sees bhavri coming in from the kitchen. she doesnt notice him because he hides behind the curtain when he sees her coming. when bhavri enters,
B: are ye arjun kaha gaya? abhi kuch der pehle to yahi tha(she checks the bathroom but doesnt see arjun. then she sees arjuns tie on the bed. the bed is very near to the curtain. as bhavri goes to pick the tie up, arjun sees the chance and grabs her from behind. she is about to scream when arjun closes her mouth tightly. he slowly turns her and looks at her lovingly without saying anything. he removes the hair on bhavris face to get a clear view of her. bhavri blushes 😳 😳 😳
B: arjun, jane do na. mujhe bohot kaam hai.
A: ssshhhh... (then gives her a kiss on the cheek and leaves her to go to the hall for breakfast. bhavri gets so shocked by such behaviour of arjun, and at the same time, she has a smile on her face. she sits down on the bed and gets the flash of arjun kissing her again n again. just then shefali enters
Shefali: bhoomi, chalo baisa niche breafast pe bularahi hai(no response) BHOOMI... kaha kho gayi
B: kuch nahi bhabhi, aap jaiye, main aati hoon.

thats all. tata byebye!

sorry arjun bhavri for not commenting on ur previous part but it's too good. 👏

sorry 4 the delay guys, there was a problem with the internet connection.
recap: bhavri learns basic driving, arjun grabs her from behind.
after breakfast, arjun goes to the office and bhavri enters the kitchen for cooking. enter shefali
S: bhoomi, kya kar rahi ho?
B: khana bana rahi hoon bhabhi. kuch kaam tha kya?
S: ha bhoomi, kya tum mujhe bhindi ki sabzi banana(not kela) sikha sakti ho?
B: zaroor bhabhi, lekin kis liye?
S: woh yuv ko bohot pasand hai.
B: kab sikhna chahti hai aap?
S: aaj dopahar, teen baje.
B(hesitates): woh bhabhi, aaj dopahar ko shayad nahi ho sakega... sorry.
S: koi baat nahi bhoomi, waise, tum kahi jaa rahi ho?
B: woh bhabhi, pehle vaada kijiye ke aap ye baat kisi ko nahi batayenge
S: kuch serious to nahi hai na?
B: nahi bhabhi, aap vaada kijiye.
S: thik hai, ab bolo kya baat hai..
B: bhabhi, main gadi chalana sikh rahi hoon.
S: ye to bohot achi baat hai bhoomi. main chalti hoon bhoomi, mujhe kuch kaam hai.
shefali leaves. bhoomis phone rings, arjun is calling.
B: haan arjun, bolo.
A: aaj raat ko mere saath date par chalogi?
B: kya, aaj, date.
A: haan. bolo na.
B: thik hai, lekin ek shart par.
A: koun si shart?
B: date ke baad budhi ke baal khayenge. manzoor hai to chalungi!
A: thik hai meri maa. bye, shaam ko milenge.
B: bye.(hangs up)
enter manasvi.
M: kahin jaa rahi ho bhoomi?
B: haan bhabhi, arjun ne kaha ke woh mujhe date par le jaana chahta hai 😳 😳 (blushes)
M: kya baat hai bhai. acha hai, tum dono ka rishta aage badhraha hai. (bhavri is silent)
in the afternoon bhavri goes to her usual driving class with manasvi. she practices with manasvi. in the evening in HH,
M: tum to bohot jaldi sikh gayi ho bhoomi, tum jaanti ho, mujhe gadi sikhne mein do mahine lage the...
b:(laughs) thik hai bhabhi, main chalti hoon. mujhe tayaar hone jana hai.(leaves)

i dont think i will be able to write for some time, i have my exams on. so tata for now

nice part 😃 n best of luck 4 exams. 😃

hey lovely parts... 👏 sorry i havent been able to read fer past few days so just done it...n hence the late reply.😊 anyways best of luck with ur exams n do continue soon..both critical jagah chora hai FF..arjun n bhavri's date yaar..😃

it was gud
ve write sooon

this part is also very nice 👏 & all the best for your ezam 👍🏼

Hey I read all the parts and found it extremely nice and sweet.So pls do keep writing and BEST OF LUCK FOR YOUR EXAM

hi frenz, m back. n i m free... HOLIDAYS! neways, here we go again. n by the way, welcome to the forum, WaJd, ksbabt n janu_2006.
bhavri is in her room gettin ready when she recieves a call frm arjun
A: aur kitni der lagegi bhavriji?
B: aa rahi hoon arjun, waise tum kaha ho?
A: bahar khara hoon. ab jaldi karo...(hangs up n then says to himself but loudly) ye aurto ko tayaar hone mein itni der kyun lagti hain? pata nahin memsaab kab aayegi?
B(frm behind): fikar mat karo arjun, bohot intezar nahin karwaungi..(by the way, she is looking very pretty)
A: thank God bhavri...main pichle adhe ghante se yaha khara hoon.(then notices her clothes and appearance) apne deewane se itna intezar karwana thik nahin hai bhavri. waise(coming close to her) kya lag rahi ho tum aaj..(bhavri blushes) ab chale (he helps bhavri in the car ie opens the door for her)
they drive to a restaurant. when they go inside, there are no cars outside.
B: oh, yeh jaga to khali hai. lagta hai bandh hai...
A: nahin bhavri, chalo mere saath.
they go inside and the place is decorated and soft music is played in the background. arjun suddenly steps in front of her, kneels down and asks for a dance. bhavri accepts and arjun takes her to the dance-floor. the song jiya dhadak dhadak from kalyug plays in the backgroung while they dance. arjun cant keep his eyes off bhavri. bhavri has her eyes lowered. arjun lifts up her chin(just like the way they do in the ad) and they look into each others eyes. they stare at each other for quite some time. the hotel manager interrupts them tp tell them that the food is ready. they go n sit down on the table and bhavri sees that arjun has ordered her favourite food, baingan ka bharta(lol) and roomali roti.
B: are arjun, ye sab to meri pasand ka khana hai. so sweet of you.
A: vaah bhavri! kya baat hai, english bol rahi ho aaj kal.
B: waise arjun, aaj kal bohot kuch naya kar rahi hoon main.
A: naya jaise?
B: woh main tumhe kuch hi der me bataungi. waise tumhe apna vaada to yaad hai na?
A: koun sa vaada?
B(frowning): arjun, budhi ke baal.
A: oh haan, yaad aaya.
after dinner, arjun goes to the manager to pay the bill and they leave. outside,
B: arjun, woh candyfloss wala yehi kuch hi minute ki doori par hai. chalo na chal ke jaye...
A: thik hai chalo.
on the way, arjun holds bhavris hand tightly. bhavri smiles to herself. they walk hand-in-hand till they reach the candyfloss guy. arjun orders for 2 of them. both have it and talk while eating.
B(after she finishes one): arjun, ek aur!
A: bhavri, zyada khaogi to moti ho jaogi...
bhavri frowns and starts walking away frm there towards the car. arjun asks for another candy frm the guy n then runs after bhavri.
A:(running) are bhavri, ruko na. ye lo, tumhara candyfloss.(bhavri smiles)
B: thank you.

they reach the car and arjun is about to sit in the drivers seat when bhavri stops him
B: arjun, waha baitho na(pointing towards her seat)
A: kyun, to phir gadi koun chalaega?
B: main!!!
A: KYA??????
bhavri sits in the drivers seat and arjun sits near her. she turns the key and turns on the car. presses the clutch and changes the gear. meanwhile arjun is watching her and getting shocked. she presses the accelerator and the car starts moving. on the way, her attention gets distracted for a split second and the steering gets out of control. luckily, arjun holds the steering and brings it back to control. in this process, they dont realize that arjun put his hand on bhavris when he tried to get the steering in control. when the car is in control, thats when both notice it. a chill runs down bhavris spine. but she keeps her attention on the road to avoid any further distraction. At HH, as they enter the hall, every1 is sitting there worried. as they enter, shaku runs towards arjun n bhavri, crying...

thats it ppl, it has become too long but i thought i should compensate for the days that i was not around. hope u like it.