my fan-fic... - Page 11

totally speechless. 👏 .I'm agree with tuhina
we are waiting for next episd.

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hi guys, i overwhelmed by the response.
The next morning, Baisa gives Shaku and Gunvanti their sargi. Gunvanti, in turn gives shefali the sargi and Shaku gives some to bhavri. she also remembers the time when she used to give the sargi to manasvi. then, a few minutes later, baisa secretly goes to manasvi's room. when she knocks, manasvi opens the door very quickly.
B: manasvi, lagta hai tum mera intezaar kar rahi thi!
M: haan baisa, mujhe pata tha ke aap aayegi.
B: yeh lo, tumhari sargi.(baisa feeds manasvi the sargi and then puts her hand on her head and then leaves)

Meanwhile, in a-b's room, after shaku gives the sargi to bhavri, she wakes up arjun.
B: arjun utho... arjun!
A: kya hai bhavri, sone bhi nahi deti ho!
B: arjun aaj karwa chauth hai! bhool gaye kya?
Arjun wakes up almost suddenly
A: kya??? main to bilkul bhool hi gaya tha! ek baat batao bhavri, ya aaj ke din tum kuch nahi khaogi?
B: nahi arjun, aaj ke din koi bhi aurat kuch nahi khati hai. yeh vrat pati ki lambi umar ke liye hota hai!
A: oh! to phir mujhe karwa chauth bilkul pasand nahi hai!
B: arjun, aisa nahi kehte!
A: sach hi to hai bhavri, yeh kya baat huwi? agar tum poora din kuch nahi khaogi to bimaar par jaogi!
B:(laughs) kuch nahi hoga arjun! chand nikalte hi, tum mujhe apne haatho se khila dena!
A: apne haatho se? yeh bhi karwa chauth ka ek riwaaz hai?
B: haan.
A: to phir mujhe karwa chauth bohot pasand hai!
Bhavri laughs. Then they sit and talk for sometime. They dont realise that the time has moved on and it is already 7:00am. When bhavri finally sees the time...
B: hey Bhagwan, saat(7) baj gaye... pata hi nahi chala. main chalti hoon arjun. naashta banana(not kela, mind you) hai!
A: lekin tum to nahi khaogi, to phir naashta kis ke liye!
B: arjun, is ghar mein aur bohot log hai jo vrat nahi rakhte hai! unke liye to khana banana(oops) hi parega na!
And then she leaves.

After some time, during breakfast, kakasaheb, mamaji and yuvraj are having their breakfast, while arjun, suraj and sidhart are sitting on the table doing nothing! Enter bhavri and shaku.
Bhavri: are, tum logo ko kuch nahi khana hai kya?
Arjun: nahi bhavri, aaj main bhi kuch nahi khaunga! main bhi yeh vrat rakhunga! (bhavri becomes internally happy)
B: aur suraj bhaiya, aap?
S: mujhe bhookh nahi hai bhoomi!
A: samjha karo bhavri!
B: oh haan!
Shaku: aur yeh(referring to siddhart) to, jab se hamari shaadi huwi, tab se har karwa chauth par, mere saath vrat rakhte hai!

Enter manasvi!
Shaku: manasvi beta, ao na... chalo baith jao! khana khalo!
M: nahi maaji, mujhe bhuk nahi hai! main baad mein khaungi!
S: thik hai beta, jaisi tumhari marzi!
And then manasvi leaves. Before going, she glances once at suraj. Suraj is also looking at her. She smiles and leaves. Mansen sees all this and wonders as to what is going on!


thats it! hope u like it!

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arre brilliant yaar 👏
wat a krava chauth... manasvi's last glance... soooo sweet 😳 😳
every update i read i get to know..main tumhari ff ki fan bekar mein nahi hoon... 😉 😉 😉

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wow its tooo gud
hope u write sooon
n plz dnt make us wait much

hi, oh my, i read all ur responses and i hv no words to describe my happiness!
After breakfast, arjun and suraj leave for office. Before leaving, arjun goes to meet bhavri in the kitchen where she is cooking lunch. Manasvi is also there. So is shaku, gunvanti, shefali and baisa!
A: bhavri, main jaa raha hoon... bye!
B: bye, aur jaldi aana!
A: kyun?
B: bas aise hi. ab jao!
A: ok, bye!
Manasvi hears all this and excuses herself from the kitchen! She goes to her room and sends suraj an sms.
Here is what is written: hi suraj, aaj ghar jaldi aana. main tumhara intezaar karungi! bye!
This sms brings a smile on suraj's face.
After they leave, manasvi returns to the kitchen to help in the cooking.
Bhavri: manasvi bhabhi, aaj gajar ka halwa aap banaegi na?
Manasvi: haan kyun?
B: nahin bhabhi, main sirf confirm kar rahi thi! mujhe aap ke haath ka bana gajar ka halwa bohot pasand hai! aur kisi aur ko bhi!!!!
Manasvi looks at bhavri and smiles and all the others are confused!
B: mera matlab hai ke arjun ko bhi! aap samajh gayi na bhabhi?
M: haan bhoomi. aaj gajar ka halwa tumhe aur use bohot pasand aayega! yeh mera vaada hai!
B: are vaah! ab to karwa chauth ka mazaa hi kuch aur hoga!
All the ladies in the kitchen laugh.

In the afternoon, when it is nearing lunchtime, arjun calls bhavri.
A: bhavri, aaj main lunch par nahi aa paunga!
B: kya, lekin kyun?
A: bhavri office mein achanak ek consignment aa gaya hai.
B: yeh sahi nahi hai arjun! tumne subah bhi kuch nahi khaya tha! aur ab aise lunch skip karke...
A: kya bhavri! main tab tak nahi khaunga jab tak tum kuch nahi khaogi! aisa samajhlo ke maine bhi tumhari lambi umar ke liye vrat rakha hai!
B:(laughing) arjun, yeh baatein aurte bole to acchi lagti hai!
A: are, jab ek aurat apne pati ke liye poora din bhookhi reh sakti hai, to phir ek mard kyun nahi!
B: tum jo karna chaho woh karo, lekin aaj shyaam(evening) ko chand nikalne se pehle ghar aa jana!
A: tum tension mat lo... I'll be home before you can say "ARJUN"
B: arjun!
A(from behind): i m home!
Bhavri turns around.
A: kaisa laga mera surprise?
B: mujhe nahi pata tha ke tum itni acchi tarha se jhooth bol lete ho!
A: lekin bhavri, ab jo main kehne jaa raha hoon, woh koi jhooth nahi hai!
LK: lo, itne dino baad ab mila mouka, apni patni ko apne dil ki baat batane ka! batao batao! main chalta hoon!
B: aisi koun si baat hai arjun! koi problem hai kya?
A: haan, aur nahi! problem hai! lekin, problem nahi hai!
B: ab yeh kaisi problem huwi?
A: dil ki problem hai bhavri! ab ise solve sirf tum kar sakti ho!
B: kya, dil ki problem...(jokingly) koi nayi girlfriend mil gayi hai kya????
A: bhavri, main mazaak nahi kar raha hoon!
B: ok Mr Goenka! bataiye kya baat hai!
A: tumhe bura to nahi lagega na?
B: nahi arjun! ab jaldi batao!
A: bhavri, mujhe kisi se pyar ho gaya hai!
Bhavri stops to a still.
A: bhavri... kya huwa?
B(suddenly having a serious expression): kuch nahi! koun hai woh ladki?
A: uska naam hai...
Bhavri closes her eyes as she cant bear to hear the girls name.
A: BHOOMIKA GOENKA!!!!!! yaani ke meri bhavri!
Bhavri opens her eyes. She has tears in them!
A: tumne kya socha?
B: maine... maine socha ke...
A: ke mera kisi aur ke saath... main paagal ho gaya hoon kya! apni bhavri ko chhod kar kisi aur ke saath... i love you bhavri!
Bhavri wipes her tears and arjun gives her a warm hug.


Thats all for now ppl... i hope you like it!

lovely lovely lovely 👏
thats the beautifullest thing i cud read at 2a.m at nit yaar,.... the a-b scene was very lovely n mansvi msg too...
this episode was really really really rocking !!!!!!

its too gud
write soon plz

waiting for the next part..... 😊