my fan-fic... - Page 9

its very- veryyyyy good........... 👏 i really like ur ff . 👏

wow yaar.. too good again as usual
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its really going great.. n i'm surprised to find baisa heard it all... n good that manasvi is thinking..
ahh.. waiting to c wat happens netx.. cotinu soon.. okay..

waiting for the next part............ 😊

ArjunBhanvri we are waiting for next part.

waiting 4 the next part 2 dear

hi guys, i have ot posted for quite a long time,so i will be posting 2 episodes together! no recaps as all of u know what happened in the last part!
That evening, when arjun returns home, he goes to his room. As he does not see bhavri there, he goes to baisa's room.
A: bhavri, bhavri...
Baisa: arjun, bhoomi yaha pe nahi hai!
A: kya, bhavri yaha nahi hai! To phir kaha gayi woh?
Baisa: apne kamre me dekha?
A: haan dekha, phir bhi, main dobara check karta hoon!
Arjun goes and checks in his room again. But he does not see bhavri. He checks the whole house but does no see her.
A: bhavri kaha gayi! Aise bina bataye pehle kahi nahi gayi!
Manasvi comes out of her room and sees arjun worried.
M: arjun, kya huwa, itne pareshan kyun ho?
A: bhabhi, bhavri bina bataye kahi chali gayi hai...
M: are nahi arjun, woh to khushi ko apne friend ke birthday party par chhodne gayi hai!
A: kya... yeh bhavri bhi na!
M: itna gussa kyun ho rahe ho arjun... use maine bheja hai!
A: mujhe is baat se koi problem nahi hai ke use aap ne bheja hai... mujhe is baat se problem hai ke usne mujhe inform tak nahi kiya!
M: kis hak se woh tumhe inform kare arjun? Kya ab tak tumne use ek patni hone ka hak diya hai? aur waise bhi, agar woh tumhe inform karti bhi, to tum uski baat par dhyaan nahi dete!
A: aisi baat nahi hai bhabhi...
M: aisi hi baat hai arjun! (And she walks away)
Arjun goes to his room, sits on the bed and thinks about what manasvi told him. Meanwhile, bhavri returns from dropping khushi to her friend's house! When she is going to the room, she meets manasvi. manasvi tells her everything that happened earlier and what she told arjun. Bhavri gets tensed and wonders what arjun's reaction would be. She goes to the room.
B: hi arjun, kaise ho?
A: main thik hoon. Tum kab aayi?
B: abhi panch (5) minute pehle. Kamre mein aa rahi thi tab manasvi bhabhi mil gayi! To unhone bataya ke tum mujhe dhoondh rahe the! Kya baat hai, koi kaam tha kya?
A: nahi bas, tum inform kiye bina chali gayi...
B: sorry arjun, mujhe laga ke main ghar jaldi wapas aa jaungi... lekin wapas aate waqt raaste mein bohot traffic mila. Is liye der ho gayi...
A: to kam se kam phone to kar diya hota!
B: mere phone ki battery low thi, is liye phone band ho gaya tha! Main abhi charge par rakh deti hoon!
She puts the phone on charge and sits next to arjun.
B: kya baat hai arjun, itni chhoti si baat ke liye itne pareshan ho gaye! Sab thik to hai na?
A: haan bhavri, sab thik hai!
B: tumne kuch khaya?
A: nahi, main tumhara intezaar kar raha tha...
B: manasvi bhabhi ne kaha ke baaki sab logo ne khaaliya hai! ab chalo, hum bhi khaa lete hai!
They have dinner together and also discuss what to do about S-M the next day! After dinner, they go to their room and get ready for bed.
A: good night bhavri!
B: good night arjun!
A (in his mind): main janta hoon ke tum mujhse naaraaz kyun ho bhavri! Aaj agar manasvi bhabhi ne mujhse woh sab nahi kaha hota to shayad main kabhi tumhare dil ki baat nahi samajh pata! Aur main yeh bhi janta hoon ke tum us din phone par kyun ro rahi thi! Lekin bhavri, main tumhe kaise samjhau... Jo baat tum sunna chahti ho, woh main bhi kehna chahta hoon, lekin tum mujhe mouka nahi deti ho!
LK (from behind): arjun, aise mouke diye nahi jaate, tumhe mouka khud dhoondh na hoga!
A: Hey Bhagwan! Meri madat kijie!
LK: isme bhi meri madat chahiye... yeh manushya ek bohot uljha huwa prani hai! aur jab inhe kisi samasya ka samaadhan chahiye hota hai, to yeh mujhe hi yaad karte hai! chalo, aaj tak madat ki hai to aage bhi karunga! Tum jo chahte ho wahi hoga! Mera aashirwaad tumhare saath hai!

The next day, there is a lot of hustle and bustle going on in the house. All the ladies are busy cooking and cleaning! When arjun wakes up, he doesn't see bhavri in bed so he goes outside the room. He sees all the ladies are up and running around the house. As he is about to go to the kitchen to find bhavri, he passes manasvi's room. Manasvi is sitting on her bed and weeping. Arjun goes in.
A: bhabhi, aap thik to hai na?
M: haan arjun, main bilkul thik hoon.
A: accha! Mujhe nahi lagta...
M: kyun?
A: kyun ki agar aap thik hoti to aap ro nahi rahi hoti! Aur bhabhi, aaj subah subah sab kaha chale gaye?
M: sari bahuen kitchen mein hai!
A: kyun? Aaj kuch hai kya?
M: aaj nahi arjun, kal karwa chauth hai!
A: kya? Woh kya hota hai?
M: karwa chauth ek aisa riwaaz hai jisme har patni apne pati ki lambi umar ke liye vrat rakhti hai.
A: oh! (that is when he understands why manasvi was crying) main chalta hoon bhabhi. Bye!
Arjun leaves the room and goes straight to suraj's room.
A: bhaiya...
S: ao na arjun...
A: plan change bhaiya... ab tumhe aage kya karna hai, yeh suno! (he tells him what to do)
S: use bura laga to?
A: agar unhe bura laga, to tum mera naam badal dena!
Suraj gives out a small laugh.
A: ok bhaiya, I have to go! Mujhe bhavri ko dhoondh na hai!
S: thik hai, jao!
Arjun leaves suraj's room and heads towards the kitchen. When he reaches the kitchen, he sees all the ladies in there! He gets confused as to how he should tell bhavri to come out! Then he gets an idea! He gives a missed call to bhavri! Bhavri sees arjun's missed call and wonders why arjun is doing so! Arjun gives her another missed call!
Shefali: bhoomi, itne missed calls koun de raha hai tumhe?
When bhavri looks at shefali to answer, she sees arjun near the door.
B: pata nahi bhabhi, lagta hai koi wrong number hai.
When arjun hears this, he starts wondering why bhavri lied! Just then, bhavri comes out.
B: kya baat hai arjun ji? Itne missed calls kyun?
A: woh sab main tumhe baad mein bataunga, pehle mere saath chalo!
Drags her to their bedroom. When they get inside, arjun shuts the door and puts a stopper over it!
B: kya kar rahe ho arjun, mujhe bohot kaam hai!
A: kaam baad mein karna, pehle meri baat suno.
LK: hmmm, yehi sahi mouka hai arjun, batado bhoomi ko apne dil ki baat!
B: bolo, kya baat karni hai!
A: dekho bhavri, kal karwa chauth hai!
B: main janti hoon arjun.
A: lekin tum yeh nahi janti ho ke kal ke din hum manasvi bhabhi ke dil mein suraj bhaiya ke liye pyar ke ehsaas jaga sakte hai!
LK: dekho! Maine pehle hi kaha tha! Yeh manushya ek bohot uljha huwa prani hai! ab arjun ko hi dekhlo! Isse accha mouka nahi milega use bhoomi ko apne dil ki baat batane ka! Lekin phir bhi, jab mouka haath se chala jayega tab isse pata chalega ke iske paas ek mouka tha!
B: kya yeh hum kaise kar sakte hai arjun!
A: dekho bhavri, (tells her what to be done)
B: idea accha hai arjun, lekin unhe bura laga to?
A: bhaiya ne bhi mujhse yehi sawaal kiya tha! Aur jo jawaab maine use diya, wahi jawaab main tumhe deta hoon, ke agar manasvi bhabhi ko bura laga, to tum mera naam badal dena!

wow arjun bhavri ....... amazing ... great lovely... too good... cant add the claps now..net slow n gotta go.. too late.. will clap later.. but very good.. n veyr sweet..waiting for next part

hey very gud parts....... waiting for da next ones 2 cm

Was waiting from a very long time for you to update it and finally the wait was worth it....wonderfull episodes 👏 ...please keep updating and please don't make us wait soooo long......... 😭