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yaar Arjun bhanvri our ff dream come true as S+M marrige.

what a awesome ff.keep writing.it's so good. 👏

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SORRY THAT I DONOT POST COMMENTS FROM A LONG TIME 😭 😭

heyi... where r u again.????????????????
waiting again...as always.... 😊

hiya guys! wasnt here 4 quite a long time. thanks for all the comments. not writing any recaps.
that afternoon, at HH, suraj comes back from the office but arjun doesnt coz he has a lot of work to do. bhavri gets quite upset with this. but then she calms down. suraj goes to manasvis room.
S: kya main andar aa sakta hoon?
M: haan suraj, ao na!
S: kaisi ho manasvi?
M: kaisi lag rahi hoon?
S: tum kal vrat rakh rahi ho?
Manasvi is shocked for some time. when she recovers,
M: kya keh rahe ho suraj? tum jante ho na ke...
S: kya manasvi? ab tum mujhe sach batao, kya tum sach mein mujhse shaadi nahi karna chahti ho?
M: main, woh main(hesitates) pata nahi!
S: iska matlab tumhara jawab na nahi hai! good news.
M: suraj pls, tum jao yaha se!
S: chala jaunga manasvi! lekin meri baat yaad rakhna! woh vrat waali!
Manasvi suddenly understands. after suraj leaves and smiles to herself.
that evening, when arjun returns home, suraj is sitting in the hall waiting or him.
S: arjun, office me kaam kaisa raha?
A: bas sab kuch thik hai. aur ghar ka kya haal hai?
S: jab bhoomi ko pata chala ke tum dopahar ko ghar nahi aa rahe ho tab woh thodi si gussa ho gayi thi, lekin phir shant ho gayi!
A: main mara! anyway, woh sab chodo, manasvi bhabhi se baat huwi?
S: haan, tum thik keh rahe the. use bura nahi laga, in fact, jab main uske kamre se bahar aa raha tha, tab maine dekha ke woh muskura rahi thi!
A: wah wah bhaiya, tumhara toh kaam ho gaya!
Suraj smiles and replies.
S: ab tum apna kaam karo! bhoomi thodi si naaraaz hai! jaa kar use manao!

thats it... its a bit short, but will post soon

suprub 👏
we are waiting

very good very good very good 👏
manasvi to almost maan gayi... wow........ i'm soooooo happy !!!!!!!!!!!!

waitin for the next part...... 😊

hey all, next part comin up... no recaps as usual...
Arjun slowly enters his room. bhoomi is sitting on the bed waiting for him. he walks up to her and sits down beside her.
A: hi bhavri, kaisi ho?
Bhavri does not reply, instead she turns away!
A: bhavri, sorry... maaf kardo na! office mein bohot kaam tha isiliye late ho gaya!
B: main kuch nahi sunna chahti hoon. kya tum phone nahi kar sakte?
A: main bohot busy ho gaya tha bhavri, time nahi mila!
B: accha,aaj kal mere liye bhi waqt nahi hai!
A: aisi baatein kyun kar rahi ho bhavri. maine kaha na ke i m sorry!
B: thik hai thik hai. ab zyada butter lagane ki zaroorat nahi hai... its ok!
A: thanks bhavri, ab chalo mere saath!
B: kaha?
A: tum bas chalo! (drags her out of the room and into baisa's room. suraj is also there)
A: baisa, bhaiya ne aap ko batadiya ke kya huwa?
Baisa: haan arjun, aur sach kahu to bohot accha huwa.
Bhoomi: to ab kya kare?
Baisa: ab ham sab so jayenge! kal karwa chauth hai, is liye kal jaldi uthna hai! aur jaldi uthkar sabko apni apni sargi deni hai... shakuntala ko, gunvanti ko, shefali ko, bhoomi ko aur...
Suraj: aur?
Baisa: aur manasvi ko bhi to uski sargi deni hai na! ab chalo, tum sab sone jao!
Every1 leaves. meanwhile, manasvi is in her room thinking about the next day. just then, she sees satya's photo. she goes in front of it and joins her hands.
M: kya main sahi kar rahi hoon satya? yeh jo kuch ho raha hai, kya woh hona chahiye? yeh ajeeb tarha ke feelings jo mere mann mein hai suraj ke liye, kya woh sahi hai?
Suddenly, she sees satya's reflection from the glass frame of his photo.
Satya: tum kuch ghalat nahi kar rahi ho manasvi. tumhe poora hak hai apni zindagi apne tarike se jeene ka! tum jo suraj ke liye mehsoos karti ho, woh koi paap nahi hai! main dua karta hoon ke tumhari aur suraj ki aage ki zindagi mein koi problems na aaye! all the best manasvi!
After saying all that, he disappears into thin air. manasvi feels relieved.

wow .......... its rocking !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
n how rocking it is u shud know by the great votes u got for best writer......... every1loves u cos u write lovely 👏
waiting desparately for next part.... dont be late 😉 😉