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Posted: 19 years ago
arre yaar... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon........
how can u keep me waiting so much yaar... i'm desparate to read the next part......
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Posted: 19 years ago
pljjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj update.... ...................
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Posted: 19 years ago
please update further iameager 2 know what happened further plz do it sooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 19 years ago

hello every1, thx for the lovely comments. n sorry to not hv posted for a long time.

Next mornin, in A-B's room, bhavri wakes up to find arjun beside her. She remembers everything that happened the previous night. She smiles to herself and then lays her head an arjun's chest. This wakes up arjun. He playfully brings her hand closer to bhavri's back and tickles her. She jumps and looks up. arjun pretends to be sleeping. She thinks that she is imagining things. She lays her head again on arjun's chest. this time, arjun tickles her violently and she jumps to find arjun tickling her. She quickly defends herself and starts tickling arjun and both of them are laughing. Amidst the tickling, arjun falls off from the bed. This makes bhavri worried and she runs to arjun to help him up. But before she could do anything, he starts tickling her again. They start the tickling all over again and then, when they get tired, both fall on the bed together.
Arjun looks at bhavri who is breathing heavily and laughing at the same time. He puts his hand on hers and she looks at him lovingly. He slowly moves closer to her and puts his hand around her waist... Just then... Trrrrrring... trrrrrrring..... the alarm sounds. Bhavri and Arjun both are having the same dream.
Both wake up with a start.
A(to B): kya tumne bhi wohi sapna dekha jo maine dekha? tickle karne wala?
B: haan... dont tell me tumne bhi wohi sapna dekh!
A: haan! (both start laughing madly. outside, every1 can hear their laughing)

Later, during breakfast, both arjun and bhavri are behaving weirdly. Bhavri gives a toast instead of a paratha to siddhart and arjun drinks suraj's tea instead of his. Every1 is shocked at this behaviour of A n B.

ok guys, i'll post the next part soon. sorry 4 the short part

Edited by arjun_bhavri - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
a-b !!!!!!!!!!!!!

waonderful part👏

but sooooooooooooo short 😭

itne dino ke intezaar ke bad bhi bas yahi...... not good okay !!!!!!!

plzzzzzzzz update soon.... thiswas fab... n waiting for another fab 1 😉 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
fab parts of a-b's
too gub
keep writing dear
janu_2006 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
fab parts of a-b's
too gud
keep writing dear
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Posted: 19 years ago
It was 2 good iam very happy hope this was in the real serial neways keep the good work on
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Posted: 19 years ago
too good 👏 . i read ur ff all together. u give all the characters almost equal importance, its good to c that...just update soon, i cant wait to see the reactions of the family members on a-b's wierd behaviour 😆.
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Posted: 19 years ago
where r u a-b ?????????????????
we all r waiting........
plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon........

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