Veeba Tagathon:Suhaagraat ki SIYAPPA! !:Part-14{1},page-65 updated!

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[Okay!I got dis idea from da Tagathon I read in YHM forum,so ofcrs not my idea!😳But dis tym I decided I won't do alda hard works alone,and m gonna mk alda great writers in dis forum work too!😈
So dis is a tagathon series..Wat does it mean?😕
It means at da end of da story I tag another writer,who goes on wid da story..And dn she will also tag sm1 else,and so it goes on..Nd yes u cn repeat da writers..😉Like suppose u feel sm1 will be good to write da dialogues or cn add da proper humour,tag her agn,or sth..😳
I want u all to get involved plz..!😛🤗Nd yes,da story updates,shud continue in dis thread,mks it easier to read..Da tagged writers plz pm me on ur updates,I'll mk da necessary changes in da main post..😉
Hope dis is fun!😳😆]



Suhaag raat ki SIYAPPA!!!

Part-1:ISS DEEWANE LADKE KO KOI SAMJHAYE

PYAAR MOHABBAT SE NA JAANE KIYUN YE GHABRAYE..?!

Baldev was in a lot of tension these days..Literally perspiring with the thought..

Thoughtfully he sipped on a steaming cup of tea,and literally dropped the cup,yelping out in pain..It was too hot,and he had not even noticed..!

Suddenly out of nowhere,she was infront of him,as he stood touching his burnt lips..

"Dev..?Ki hua..?Jaal gaya tera hont..?

[Dev..?What happened..?Your lips got burned..?]"As a suffering Baldev nodded his head,trying to soothe the pain,she stepped closer,and Baldev forgot the pain,and also forgot to breath,as his eyes widened at her nearness..

"To main pappi dekar thik kar doon..?

[So should I kiss and make it better..?]"She whispered softly,sexily,and pouted her lips in such a way,that Baldev nearly toppled backwards in shock..

"Tu ki keh rahi hai..?Pata hain hum logo ki shaadi hone wali hai,paar yaha iss tarha beech sarak pe..?!

[What are you saying..?I know we are going to get married,but like this in the middle of the road..?!]"He said under his breath,looking around at passer by's uncomfortably..

"To ki hua Dev..?Main to teri hi hu na..?Kya farak painda log kya kehte hai..Kehna de..

[So what happened Dev..?I am yours only am I not..?What does it matter what people says..Let them talk..]"She whispered in a soft tone,and came closer to him..

"Nai nai!Oye nai!Ye hum yaha nai kar sakte..!Ye pind hai..!Sheher nai..!

[No no!Oye no!We can't do it here..!This is village..!Not a city..!]"He declared breathlessly,as he took a step back..

"Please Dev..?Sirf ek pappi..!

[Please Dev..?Only one kiss..!]"She whispered making a puppy face,that Baldev normally found irresistible,but today it seemed like a death knot to him..!As she moved closer again..

"Nai oye!Tu baat ko samajh!

[No!Try to understand!]"He pleaded as he was stepping back again..

Veera held his arms now,and was pulling him close forcefully,and no matter how much he tried to move back,he could not..

How did she become so strong..?!Maybe his love and pampering had made her so strong now..?!

"Tu jaa kiththe raha hai..?!Hume suhaagraat ki practice bhi to karna parega na..?!

[Where are you going..?!We even have to practice for Suhaagraat won't we..?!]"Her words fell like a bomb on him as his face completely paled..

He gulped for breath,trying to process what she had just said..She seemed to be standing out from his scariest nightmare right now..!

"S-s..Suhaagraat..?Practij..?!"He managed to croak out,as he started sweating profusely at the same time..He was unable to look away from her eager glowing face,completely horror struck..

She was looking so happy about it,but how would she react if she knew,he was worried about it these days..?

How would she react if he told her,he was nervous as hell that he would make a complete cake of himself on that very night..

How would she feel,if he told her,that he needed expert advices on that..!That he had no idea how to go about it..?

Hell,he had never kissed her even,as yet..He had only seen a one or two kiss on lips on an English movie once,but that's all he knew..!How would he-..

A hard push brought him to reality,as he stared into Jaggi's amused eyes,and knowing smirking face..

"Ki hua Paji..?!Kiththe khoye hue hai aap aajkaal..?Parjaiji ki soch mein..?!Aur abhi se hi suhaagraat ki sapney dekhne shuru kardi aapne..?!

[What happened Paji..?!Where do you stay lost these days..?In Parjaiji's dreams..?!And you have already started dreaming about your suhaagraat..?!]"He chuckled poking Billa,knowingly,who was also smiling like a Cheshire cat..

Baldev realized Veera had been a figment of his imagination again,as he angrily stood up to leave the tea stall.

"Oye chup raho tum dono!Bakwaas karne ki ilawa aur koi kaam dhandha nai hai ki tumhare paas..?!Main jaa raha hun!

[Just shut up you two!Don't you have any other work other than talking rubbish..?!I am leaving!]"He muttered angrily,and started striding away,when he heard Billa calling out to him from behind.

"Praji!Agar koi maddat ki zaroorat ho to hume zaroor awaaz de dena..!Koi bhi advice chahiye to..!

[Praji!If you need anything,do give us a call..!Whatever advice you might need..!]"Baldev shook his head,with a muttered curse,and then the next moment stood still on his tracks..

Wait a moment!They were right..!He could ask them for advice right..!Indirectly of course!

He was just deciding to go to them,when he saw a familiar figure walking towards him..

"Baldeva!Ruk!

[Baldeva!Wait!]"Baldev looked at how pretty she looked in her navy blue and pink Patiala suit,with her beautiful silky open hair blowing in the breeze,her eyes wide and sparkling,her cheeks pinkish,and her lips so pink and soft,curved in a beautiful smile,as she approached him..And his heart skipped a beat..

He looked back at his pals,and then back at her approaching him..

And he wondered again..

Ye Suhaagraat ki Siyappa ka main karoon to kya..?!



[I tag RoshiniManeet,my partner in crime!😈Best of luck partner!🥳Move on with the story..!😉Nd dnt forget to tag sm1 else at da end too!😳]


Part-2(By RoshiniManeet),page-3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110714853


INDEX:

Part-1(By TehsinaJFJ):Above!😛

Part-2(By RoshiniManeet),page-3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110714853

Part-3(By ElireEli),page-9:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110855569

Part-4(By Meilliures),page-15:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110965006

Part-5(By Lovelyvb),page-20:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111018859

Part-6(By TehsinaJFJ),page-25:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111131146

Part-7(By RoshiniManeet),page-31:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111307728

Part-8(By ElireEli),page-36:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111430722

Part-9(By Sparkle2985),page-42:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111609610

Part-10(By Lovelyvb),page-49:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111700120

Part-11(By RoshiniManeet),page-56:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/112012550

Part-12(By TehsinaJFJ),page-60:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/112066528

Part-13(By _Bidzie_),page-63:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114462315

Part-14{1}(By TehsinaJFJ),page-65:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/123257510







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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice idea sina 👏 👏
kya concept hein SR par likna 😆 😆
gud start 😊
sorry for late reply dear 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow😃...aweeesomeee update👏...cool name😳...loved it❤️...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ha ha Sina...u r so naughty...well let me try😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet

ha ha Sina...u r so naughty...well let me try😆



Dt to I always m!😎U cn always call me Satan SINA u know?😈😆Will look forward to ur work!Nd tagging!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome always like innocent baldev and cute veera 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤣 I can imagine this happening in the show too...awesome story..looks like we are going to enjoy this thread very much...superb idea👏...Looking forward to the next update...Best of Luck Roshini😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great update... U r really soo naughty Sina! Best of luck Roshni 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lovelyvb

Great update... U r really soo naughty Sina! Best of luck Roshni 😃


hey cm to the lets play veera... 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is a pretty cool idea...great start bud, bichara Ballu lol.

Looking forward to what Roshni does with this!!

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