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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome and well written update👏 Tfs for pm Sina dear 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice story, all the writers are doing a tremendous job! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lolz sina hawwt and hilarious updaye enjoy evry bit .to yeh te sr ke step so funny mujhe laga kya honge 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
Those 12 steps were awesome. How did baldev get dumb and dumber as his best friends 😆 . Step 12 OMG , love that bansuri caught him reciting the list.

the hot smooch was great as always, and ranvis line , if only he knew they were in the kiss and make up stage of the fight

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Posted: 11 years ago
🤣Tehsina! OMG! The steps of SR! It is better Baldev forgets these steps...😆 Impression banne se raha if he follows these steps...and Bansuri should leave her son alone now😡 and Baggi plz yaar stop creating more problems for paaji...😆Awesome update dear...loved it to the core...
I really hope Bidzie writes the next part...would love to read her version...how she handles the situation...plz dear Bidzie missing your writing dear😳 Best of luck dear...😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Sina🤗...commenting late ...sorry
Great update as usual...OMG...these were the 12 steps🤣 and Bansuri there to hear😆 can't stop laughing...

Loved it to the core❤️...Veera almost caught...suspense...Pakadi gayi tho gayi kaam se...Shadhi hi cancel karva degi Bansuriji😆

Eagerly awaiting next update😛


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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh God! This is wonderful. I laughted a lot on the 12 steps (actually I'm a married man with real life experienc of SR) and then towards the end my heart started racing, can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update!!⭐️ loved it to the core❤️ 12 steps of SR and the 12th one🤣
now what will Bansuri do😕

eagerly waiting for next update 😳

p.s. sorry for late comment, but u know na why im late 😆😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
v v nice update sina
hilarious at the end 🤣 and 12 steps of SR 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
[Ummm..Hello friends..😳I m back wid da update Bidzie had sent me long way back..Nd since i m back 4m da dead m updatn it..Sorry a miliom tyms 4 dis looong delay..So enjoy!Nd leave ur comments..I hope u dint forget it.Nd if u did,do read it agn..😳
Thank u Bidzie for such an awesome update!🤗]

Part-12(By TehsinaJFJ),page-60:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/112066528


Part-13.

(Author:_Bidzie_⭐️)


"Aaahhh!" Baldev screamed out loudly, making Bansuri face him with a shocked and startled expression. "Puttar ki hoya? Tu theek hai na?" She ran to him and questioned him concernedly.

"Woh.. woh mainu pet vich dard ho raha hai. Dawaai le liya, ab aaram karna hai mainu. Subha hum gal kare?" Baldev suggested, inwardly getting worried if Bansuri would agree or not.

"Theek hai puttar! Tu aaram kar, par utthe..." Bansuri pointed towards the curtains. "Utthe se awaaj aai.." she confusedly said.

"Ohoo Beeji! Kuch nahi hai. Woh mere phone vich main ek film vekh raha tha, bas wahi galti se play ho gaya hoga. Aap sone jao na aur mainu bhi aaram karne do." Baldev firmly requested.

"Theek hai puttar! Aaram kar tu." Bansuri smiled and walked out of the room. Baldev rushed towards the door and immediately closed it. He sighed in relief.

Veera, Jaggi and Billa came out from behind the curtains and looked relaxed.

Baldev glared at Jaggi and Billa. "Oye khoteya! Ki jarurat thi aise choro ki tarah itthe aane di? Subha tak intezaar nahi ho sakta tha ki?" he blasted at them.

"Praaji! Maaf kardo. Humhe ki pata tha ki aye sab hoga." Jaggi innocently exclaims.

"Oye par tum dono itthe aise aaye hi kyun?" Veera questioned them, baffled.

"Kuch nahi bas woh Praaji nu aur idea dene aaye the su---"

"Oye kuch nahi oye! Bas aivayi dimaag khaane aa gaye. Chalo jaao ab!" Baldev interrupted Billa and angrily stared at him.

"Oye chal Jaggi! Praaji nu pareshaan nahi karte hai." Billa advised, seeing how mad Baldev was at them. "Theek hai praaji, subha milte hai!" Jaggi bid farewell to Baldev and at last, he and Billa left from there.

**

"Ab tu bol! Itthe kyun aayi? Beeji vekh leti toh pata hai kinna vadda siyaapa ho sakta tha?" Baldev concerned asked.

Veera teasingly chuckled. "Waise toh bada pind da sher banaa phirta hai. Ab darr kyun lag raha hai?" she approached closer to his face. "Bol deta ki teri hone wali voti tainu der raat vich milne aayi hai..." she held his chin and turned his face towards hers. "After all, jo akele mein hondi hai woh sab ke saamne kaha.." she winked mischievously.

Baldev smirked. "Akele vich ki hondi hai, Veerakdi?" He grabbed her wrist and pulled her closer, causing her to bump with his chest. "Mainu bhi janna hai!" he whispered sensuously.

"Ki kar raha hai, Baldev? Jaane de!" Veera nervously pleaded. Baldev intensely gazed her and approached nearer while she sat quietly. She felt as if something was preventing her to move apart, eventually she gave in and waited for him to make the next move. "Jaa! Kisne roka hai tainu?" His smirk was broader once he realized that she was breathing heavily. "Tainu na jaldi jaana tha. Time nahi tha na tere paas? Ab ki hoya?"

Veera closed her eyes and a slight smile crept at the corner of her lips. "Tere vaaste humesha waqt hai." She whispered and gripped the bed sheet in her fist to control her heartbeats that were getting faster than the usual.

Their lips were barely an inch away. Their noses brushed with each other. Baldev beamed to see her red cheeks and the way she surrendered to him. "Jab tere gaal sharam se laal hotey hai tab tu... aur bhi achi lagti hai." He lovingly said. She smiled in bliss and blushed even more. Just when Baldev was about to seal her lips with his, her phone rang, making them open their eyes in a jerk.

"Aye phone nu abhi bajna hona tha!" Baldev exclaimed in a pissed off tone. Veera giggled to see his frustration and received the call. "Haan Veerji! Veerji main woh Sweety ke ghar hoon. 5 minute..." She looked at Baldev who gestured her to ask for some more time. Veera, smiling at his cuteness, informed Ranvi that she would be home after 15 mins. Baldev grinned in happiness. Veera disconnected the call.

"Chal 15 mins toh baat kar paayenge!" Baldev happily stated. "Sirf baat?" Veera questioned flirtatiously and before Baldev could speak anything further, she softly caressed his lips with hers and slowly pressed it harder. Just when Baldev was going to respond to her gentle kiss and fill passion and intensity in it, his phone rang. They literally sprang apart as the ringtone was loud enough to scare them off.

"Oho Rabji!" Veera slammed her forehead with her palm as she cursed their destiny. "Shaanti se ek kiss bhi nahi hori hai humari!"

"Oye khoteya! Phone karne da abhi time mila ki... Acha khasa pa---"

Veera opened her mouth in shock, seeing Baldev telling it to his friends about their intimate moment. Baldev composed himself and said, "Acha khasa party da sapna tod ditta. Sojaa ab aur mainu bhi sone de!" He cut the call in anger.

"Aye dunia humari dushman hai sach mein!" Baldev exclaimed in frustration and seeing him like that, Veera's expression instantly changed from upsetness to laughter.

"Tainu hasi aa rahi hai? Ek kiss bhi nahi hua, kabhi tera Veer banta hai kabab mein haddi aur kabhi mere woh bewakoof dost." Baldev vented out in disappointment.

"Ohoo mera sher! Chinta kyun karta hai? Kuch hi dino vich shaadi hogi phir toh waqt hi waqt hai humare paas. Aur waise bhi abhi kabab mein haddi mil rahe hai par humari suhaagrat vich toh sab perfect honi hai." Veera excitedly said.

Baldev frowned. "Wahi toh asli siyaapa hai!" he thought tensely.

"Tu abhi bhi issi baat ko leke pareshaan hai?" Veera questioned confusedly.

Baldev forced a smile. "Nahi pareshaan nahi hoon! Tu ghar jaa ab. Tera veer intezaar kar raha hoga na."

"Theek hai. Tu dhyaan rakhna!" Veera caressed his cheek affectionately and stood up to leave. Just then she thought of something and looked back at him.

"Ki hoya?" Baldev asked. Veera smiled and quickly pecked him on his lips. "Good night!" Baldev smiled wide in pleasant surprise. "Good night!" He stood and hugged her. Veera left the room from the window, while he stood near to make sure that she climbed down safely, and looked on until she went off from his sight.

"Abhi bhi ghum phir ke wahi baat hai... Suhagraat ka siyaapa! Rabji, aap nu ki mazaa aa raha hai mainu aise vekhke?" Baldev stared at the sky, disappointed and sad.


Tagging:I hv bn tagged by Bidzie..So prepare for getn tortured frnds!😉😉



Part-14{1}(By TehsinaJFJ),page-65:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/123257510




Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 10 years ago

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