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Lovely_KaranIka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ
Once again me pissed dt i cudnt like da post but bt dis ws truly awsum Meilliures! ⭐️ Loved it!So da ball is now in Veera's court.. 😆 Things might get interesting here..I wonder wat Saffa wil do wid dis! 😆 Once agn thank u so much for a beautitul update!U write so well! 👏 Thank u! 😉

Sina di... Ye kahan phsa diya apne... Demo... Now i have to write a demo.. 😕 hope i can make it good as all others writers did..

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AMbili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Meilliures

Thank u so much crazy😆
Even i wanted ballu to ask Ranvi and then I thought veera will be the best teacher lol😳
Um happy that u enjoyed it
Love u crazy

u r welcome di😉if ranvi gave his teaching 😆😆😆then it would be fun but veera😉☺️it will be more fun😆😆😆

love u di😳😳😳

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HarshaMawra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: TasriS
Nice update..

Thank u😉

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HarshaMawra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: ..crazy_doll..
u r welcome di😉if ranvi gave his teaching 😆😆😆then it would be fun but veera😉☺️it will be more fun😆😆😆
love u di😳😳😳

Hahahah I wanted a hot update so thought of this

Love u😆

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Bravehearts

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Wow loved this part it was hilarious seriously he was gone ask ranvi abt it oh ballu 🤣 then he went to ask veeta i love veera reaction she gone give him shock of his life.
Cant wait for next update

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TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

[Thank u guys for all da likes and comments!🤗.😳Thank u Saffa for givn us a wonderful continuation to da story.. 😛M sure u hve done an awesome job..!😉So guys read on and plz giv in ur views..😃]

Part-4(By Meilliures),page-15:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110965006

Part-5.

(Author:Lovelyvb.⭐️)

Veera pushed him on bed and fell on top of him, baldev was so shocked and was sweating
Baldev; veera tu eh ki kar rahi hai
[Veera what are you doing?!]
Veera; tujhe demo de rahi hun fikar mat kar mein tujhe sab aikha dun gi
[I am giving you a demo..Don't worry I'll teach you everything..]
Baldev didnt know what to say now bcoz he was the one who first asked her to give him a demo of suhag rat
Veera's face was so close to him and she was comming more closer baldev feels a sensetion in his body, she came so close that he can feel the warmth of her breaths on his lips and then she place her lips on his and kissed him,he wants to break the kiss but he dont know why he didnt do this and he started kissing her back..after some moment he suddenly broke the kiss
Veera; ki hoya?
[What happened?]
Baldev; tu..tu eh ki kar rahi hai koi aa jaye ga.. Menu jane de hat mere upar se
[What are you doing?Someone will come up..Let me go..Get off me!]
Veera; koi nahi aye ga sab so rahe hain.. Aur tenu hi to sekhna tha na eh sab
[No one's gonna come..Everyone is asleep..And you were the one who wanted to learn these right..?]
Baldev; lekin jaggi ne menu btaya tha k ghunghat uthana hai sb se phly aise eh sab...
[But Jaggi told me,that I had to raise the ghunghat first..Like this-.]
Veera; tu ghunghat di fikar mat kar o mein khudi utha lun gi to bs chup kar k leta reh ithe
[You don't worry about the ghunghat..I will raise it myself..You just lie over here quietly..]
Baldev didnt know what to say as he was so scared from the wedding night and he also wanted to give his good impression so he do what she says
Veera started untieing his shirt buttons
Baldev; veera eh ki kar rahi hai tu
[Veera what are you doing..?!]
He says in shivring voice
Veera; tenu bola na mein ne.. tujhe demo de rahi hun
[Didn;t I tell you..Giving you a demo..]
She take off his shirt and then she stunned seeing him he was looking so handsome she cant control herself and came close to him and again kissed on his lips

He kissed her back
He was holding her face in his hands and she was holdin his..they both were lost in eachothers..baldev's hands on her waist and then he realized what he is doing he can't let himself go out of control,not now he broke the kiss and take her off from him..
Baldev; nahi mein eh ki kar raha hun..
[No!What am I doing..!]
Veera; kuch bhi to nahi kar raha tu..mein to bas tenu suhag rat ka demo de rahi thi na tune hi to kaha tha menu(in a teasing voice)
[You are not doing anything..I was just giving you a demo of the suhaag raat,that is what you told me to do..]
Baldev; nahi nahi menu kuch nahi chahiye mein khudi soch lun ga tujh se nahi pocho ga ab kuch bhi mein ja raha hun
[No!I don;t need anything..I will think up something myself,I won't ask you..!I'm leaving!]
Veera; lekin baldev..tu sun to
[But Baldev..Listen..]
Baldev was sweating and was confused why she was doing this all befor their wedding night, he stood up and left her room
Veera; oye sun to kithe chala
[Listen!Where are you off to..?!]
But he already left the room, she starts laughting
Veera; bechara baldeva.. Mein to sirf pareshan kar rahi thi aur ye to sach me dar gaya..apne ap nu pind da sher kehta hai aur suhag rat se dar raha hai..
She continues laughting

Next morning baldev was with his friends and see's veera comming, he started sweating again remembring what last night happens
Jaggi; paaji apnu inna pasena kyun aa gaya aik dam se..tabiyat to theek hai na apki?
[Paaji why are you sweating like this..?!Are you feeling alright..?!]
Baldev; ha...haan kuch nahi.. Pasena kithe hai? Menu to koi pasena nahi aa raha..thek hun mein
[Ye-..Yes nothing..Where am I sweating..?!I am not sweating at all..I'm alright..]
Veera; oye baldev chal mere nal..menu tujh se buhat zaruri gal karni hai
[Baldev..!Come with me..I have something important to talk to you about..]
Baldev in shock and affaird thinking in his mind..
Balde; (gal..kahin eh phir se kal rat di trhan..)
Ki gal krni hai..?
Yahin kar le mein kahin nahi jane wala
[(Talk..What if she again starts like last night..)
What do want to talk about..?
Talk over here,I am not going anywhere..]
Jaggi; paaji chale jao na.. Paarjai ne koi personal bat karni hogi na..ap samjhte hi nahi ho.. Theek kaha na paarjai ji
[Paaji go on..!Parjaiji must have something personal to talk to you..You don't understand..Right Parjaiji..?]
Veera; haan bilkul thek kaha tune..ab chal na baldev
[Yes you are right..Now let's go Baldev..]
She holds his hand and pulls him to a place where they were all alone, baldev was scared.. Is his thought is right she brings him here do something like she did last night...his heartbeat went fast his face was sweating
Baldev thought in his mind; eh veera nu ki ho gaya hai..mein ne to is se pocha tha suhag rat k bare me aur ye to menu demo dene pe tuli hai..hun ki kran mein??
[What has happened to Veera.I just asked her about suhaag raat and she is after me to give a demo..!What should I do..?!]
Veera; baldev.. Baldev.. ki soch raha hai
[Baldev..baldev..What are you thinking..?!]
He back in his senses
Baldev; han...o dekh veera menu pata hai tu menu yahan kis vaste lai hai..lekin menu nahi chahiye koi demo...tere se pochna na meri sab se bari galti thi..is se changa hota k mein wo jaggi ki bat man k wo us ranvi...
[Yes..Veera I know why you have brought me here.But I dn;t want any demo..Asking you was my biggest mistake..It would have been better if I had listened to Jaggi and asked Ranvi..]

What did he say..?he was about to speak or he already spoke it..what will veera think about him..he was about to ask ranvi for their suhag rat...

[Tagging:Saffa did not tag any1 and asked me to tag sm1..I dnt know whom to tag..All are aweome!😕😆So I ask u all,our readers to vote and decide,whom u want da next writer to be..!😃Nd YES m damn serious,I want u to vote whom u want the next writer to be..!😡Odrwise da tagathon will just stop and I dnt want dt to happen!😭
So chose ur next update writer friends!U can chose from da 1s who have written to da ones who haven't yet..It's Jaanta ki adalat!I mean Veebians ki Adaalat!😆😳Choose any1 but DO CHOOSE!!!I will peep in,and declare da next writer after counting da max votes!😳]

p.s.Phew!Finally translations added!😆Nd u guys chose me!!!😡Now I know..Ppl in glass houses shud not be throwing stones at others..🥺

Part-6(By TehsinaJFJ),page-25:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111131146

Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago

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TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Poor Baldev!😳What has suhaag raat done to him!🤢😆I loved it!Thank u Saffa!Nd I vote for 😕...
Plz vote and help me out guys..!Chose da next writer!Dnt let da story go to a waste..😳
Nd Saffa I loved da ghugat wala diaogue!Me and my GM loves a BOLD VEERA!!!😈Thank u so much for dis!🤗

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Nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Good update, where will baldev turn to now??? 😊

Can someone whi has already written a chapter be voted or must it be someone new

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TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Nikki36
Good update, where will baldev turn to now??? 😊

Can someone whi has already written a chapter be voted or must it be someone new

Hi Nikki! 🤗 😛 Any1 wud do! 😆 Smtyms tagathon stops wn dere r shortage of new writers so u can vote for someone who has already written or someone new,both.. 😳 But mk sure its only 1 writer.. 😉 😆 .Tc.Waiting for da vote..

P.s.Guys plz vote! Da story needs to be moved!Vote for da next writer to be tagged!Dere r so many of dm who work fab! 😛