[So we r back wid da next update guys!🥳Thank u Ambi for going into so much trouble for us and m sure dis is awsome!🤗I love your works!😉So okay eough of my gibberish and lets go on wid da update!🥳Guys likes and comments plz!😳]Part-8(By ElireEli),page-36:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111430722
Part-9:Golmaal hein bhai sab golmaal hein!!!
(Author:Sparkle2985..⭐️)
Baldev thinking "Yeh ki kardi meina ab veera nu manaana padega"
Veera is thinking baldev aise kaisa sab kuch apne dosto ke saath discuss karta hein,mein usse baat hi nahi karti agar voh menu manane koh ayega toh bhi nahi.
Veera "rukh" voh ayega ya nahi ... but somewhere in the bottom of her heart she knows tat he will definitely come to tell her sorry ..." Voh mera baldev hein voh zaroor ayega".
There was a knock and veera without knowing who it is said to come in .Baldev came inside and said shall we go to the skit rehearsal otherwise we may forgot our dialogues and it will be a mess.
"Baldev tu mera kamre mein hamesha kidki se aata hein na aise kaise saam ne darwaza se aaya veera asked quizzically.(You always come to my room through window how come u came through door)".
"Oye Veera sagaai hogaya humara abhi bhi choro jaisa kidki se aavu ki ...ab toh mera haq hein tujhse milne ka koi bhi nahi mana karsakte. (Veera I am engaged to u and I can come and meet you no one can object it)".
Veera seeing baldev talking to her causually as if nothing happened made her loose her temper.She at once started shouting on Baldev... "Tu ithe se ja baldev menu tere saath kahi nahi jaana(you go from here I don't want to go with you anywhere") and saying this she was going from his side out of her room , Baldev grabbed her by her wrist very forcefully that veera collided on him and she had to take support of his shoulders to not to loose her balance and fall on him.This proximity made veera feel as if butterflies are flying in her stomach.She saw into his eyes which was looking at her with concern and love.Her hands unknowingly went towards his back and veera thighten the grip and it seemed like she is hugging him.Baldev was stunned by this move of her and wanted to loosen the grip but his heart is not letting him do it.
He saw her face and there were a few hair strands on her face,which was covering her eyes and cheeks.He gently tucked the hair to the back of her ear ,the touch of his fingers on her cheek,eye and ear aroused the sensuous feeling inside her and she was getting drown by his seductive touch on her face and ear.Baldev glanced at her face and seeing her eyes closed and making it clear to him with a pleasant smile on her face tat she is enjoying his touch made baldev gaze at her and unknowingly he touched the bottom of her lips,with the touch of his fingers veera was melting inside with the heat that is arousing inside her.she felt weak at her knees and she cannot stand further and pulled baldev more close to her.with her sudden pull baldev hold her waist to avoid falling on her and his face was on her nape...this pull of her made him loose control on himself and he started kissing her gently on her neck.veera instead of stopping baldev slid her hand into his dark thick hair as if giving him the signal to continue..baldev was giving her wet kisses on her nape,neck and below the chin.. with each kiss veera is melting inside and drowning into the sensuous feeling that is caused by his kisses.Baldev stopped kissing and was looking at her face ,veera was also having eye contact with him she is being lost in his dark intense look on his face and in his eyes which are filled with love and passion for her.She was looking at him and unknowingly licked her lower lip.Veera even before realizing that was a mistake that she shld have not done his lips were already on hers and they had a deep passionate kiss which longed for a long time.They were disturbed by a phone ring and without seeing at veera's face baldev left her room and went to his home.
In Baldev's room his mobile was ringing he is searching for his mobile in his shirt pocket he found veera's earring in it which got attached to his shirt when they were kissing...Baldev thinking about what happen few minutes back was smiling seeing the earring and bansuri who noticed it went and snatched the earring from his hand and shouted
yeh kiski kaan ki baaliya hein baldev ?????(whose earring is that')
Baldev who was dazed came out of his trance and was speechless as thinking what to tell to bansuri .
"Baldev yeh kiski baaliya dekhe tu muskura raha hein ????? uss veera ka hi na ab jhoot mat bol ki yeh gunjan ka hein "...(its veera's earring know don't tell lie now tat its gunjan's)
"Yeh ki har din voh veera apni kaan ki baaliya ghumati rehti kya voh bhi tere paas hi milta hein iska matlab ki hein???????(what is that every other day veera is misplacing her earring and it will be found near you only ")?????
Baldev was not knowing what to tell and was standing speechless in front of her.
"Shaadi bhi nahi huva tu uske piche piche ghoom raha hein shaadi ke baad uske pallu ko pakad ke rahega ki she said almost with tears in her eyes.
Baldev said beeji aisa kuch nahi voh veera ka hein hi nahi beeji ... Aap aise hi kuch bol rahi hein ..."
Gunjan entered "veerji aap ithe hein aap kyu natak ke rehearsal mein nahi aaye mein aur ranvi aapki aur veera ki intezaar karrahe the"
( Even before mrge only u r roaming behind her after mrge you will be roaming around her only know ...baldev said nothing like beeji you are just assuming like that ,just then gunjan enters and ask y he and veera dint come to the skit rehearsal)
Bansuri's looked with a questioning face as if asking now what baldev will tell ...
Baldev immediately said "gunjan aao na hum dono aaram se bethke chai piyenge abhi natak ke liye bohut waqt hein na ,beeji aap dono ke liye chai banado na"
(he said u sit gunjan we will have tea ,beeji prepare tea for us na...)
Bansuri said ok and left the room ...
"Gunjan tu rukh ithe mein dekhe aata beeji abhi tak chai kyu nahi leke arahi hein ,
(gunjan u wait I will go and see y she is taking so much time)."
he went and saw tat bansuri is neither in kitchen nor anywhere in the home ...
"Beeji kahi veera ke ghar toh nahi gayi aur veera nu abhi tak dekhi ya nahi ki uske baaliya ek ghoom huva mein phone kar ke veera nu bolta hu ki pehle voh apne kurta badal le doosra rang ke pehne aur baaliya bhi..
(Did beeji went to veera's house to check whether it is her earrings or not I shld cal veera and tel her change her kurta and earrings)"
Baldev called veera to tell her to change her kurta and earrings as bansuri is coming to her house to check whether the earring she found is veera's or not ,but it was very late and bansuri is already downstairs waiting for veera.
Ratan was calling her from downstairs that bansuri has come to meet you ...
Veera changed her kurta quickly and changed her earrings and went downstairs to meet bansuri..
Everyone there are shocked seeing her and ratan and chaiji are exchanging glances as bansuri is seeing her angrily.
Ratan said "veera yeh tune kya pehen ke aaya ek baar apne aap ko aina mein toh dekhi hoti niche aane se pehle voh bhi teri honewali saas ke saamne ."
(Veera what have u wore and came in front of ur wld be mother-in-law ,u shld seen once in mirror)
Veera didnt get why everyone are seeing her with shocked expressions .
"Oye veera voh hare wala kurta acha tha yeh neeli vala kyu pehni ",the earring which bansuri had was also green in colour she showed the earring to her silently and veera was thinking what to say...
ratan said "veera jaake apne kurta seeda toh pehen ke aana "
(veera wear ur kurta properly and come)
Veera then noticed in a hurry she wore the kurta wrong side and ran to her room to change it .bansuri followed her to her room to warn her not to meet baldev before marriage . Veera quickly changed and seeing bansuri coming to her room told her to sit in her room and she will bring tea and snacks .. even before bansuri rejecting she ran downstairs ...
Baldev came to her room thought it was veera there and started blabbing out ...
"Veera yeh kya hein meine neeche chaiji aur chachiji ki baate suna tu kurta ulta pehen li aur vaise hi mere beeji ki saamne aayi..."
"Pehle hi une shak huva teri kaan ki baaliya mere paas dekh kee ..jab menu pata chala voh yahi aaraha hi hein toh meina tujhe phone karke bola na ki tujhe kurta change karlo bolke itni bhi kya jaldi hein mere beeji ke saamne jaake khade hone ki ikk baar apne aapko aina mein aina mein dekh sakti thi na ...
shukar hein beeji chali gayi varna agar une pata chalega ki voh tera hi baaliya hein toh siyappa hojata tha"..
(Veera what have u done I heard the convo down between chaiji and chachiji tat u wore kurta on wrong side and u came like that in front of my mom I called and informed u that she is coming to ur house as soon as came to know abt it but u went like that stood in front of her and thank god my mom went away and she dint knew it was ur earring otherwise it wld be a big problem)
... Veera entered "tayiji aap chai li jiye" ...Baldev seeing veera beside him was shocked and afraid as to whom did he was speaking till now ...Bansuri very angrily turned towards him and said "baldev tu aisa karega meine socha bhi nahi aur veera tenu toh ..."
"B b beeji aa aap ithe aa aap kab aaye " said with a fake helpless smile plastered on his face..
"Baldev kya huva" veera was asking not knowing what had happened ...
"Veera meine tu samajke beeji de naal saari baate kardi ap toh siyappa hogaya..."
(Veera I thought it was you and told everything to beeji)
Bansuri angrily went downstairs and gave the earring to ratan and said her that she found it in her home and told her to make sure veera wont meet baldev before marriage...ratan got angry as what bansuri said is right and she also wanted the same.
she was going to veera's room to warn her about the same and saw baldev was running downstairs and was calling his beeji...ratan understood and was very very angry on veera.
Bansuri did not listen to her son and walked away angrily towards her home and baldev thought now talking to her will be time waste and she wont even listen to him and decided to go and meet balli and jaggi.
They were coming to meet him only
"Paaji aap hamare saath aayiye hum aap ko ek jagah leke jayenge"
(You come with us we will take you to a place)
Baldev:ab nahi mera sarr phat raha hein
(not now my head is aching)
Jaggi:Paaji aapko suhaag raat ke baare mein kuch jaanna hein na aaye hamare saath.
They took him to a place where and there he saw a person sitting with a ghoongat and was wearing a lehenga
Baldev was shocked seeing and said "oye jaggi yeh kaun hein and yeh sab kya hein ab veera nu pata chalega ki yaha ek ladki hein mere saamne ghoonghat pehen kar dulhan ki kapdo mein toh meri jaan le legi.
Mein jaraha hu yaha se ."
(who is tat gal and if veera comes to know ab it she will kill me and I m going from here)
Jaggi stopped him and said "paaji yeh ladki nahi ladka hein ."(this is boy not gal)
Baldev :kya ladka ??oye nalayako mein ladke ke saath chi and was abt to punch him then jaggi said "nahi paaji yeh mera dost hein parmindar usne ek ladke nu behosh karva ke uske haath payr aur muh baande ke usko ghoongat aur yeh lehenga pehnadiya."
( my friend parminder made one boy unconscious and tied his hands,legs and mouth and drape this lehenga and covered the veil )
Aap na suhaag raat ki pehla step agar acha tareeke se karoge toh voh ki kehte hein paaji "First ispression is best ispression (impression)" voh agar aap ghoonghat theek se uthake bhabhi ji ke aako mein pyaar se dekha toh bhabhi vahi fida hojati aur do char pyaari baate toh aur bhi zyada kush hojati .
Baldev thought what jaggi saying is right..
Billa:paaji aap ghooghat utha kar pyaar se do baate karne ki practice toh karo .
Baldev:ha rukh mein ghoonghat uthata hu
Baldev lifted and ghoonghat and saw the face he was uttermost shocked,scared and covered the ghoonghat again
Jaggi:paaji yeh kya kiya aap ne ek baar ghoonghat utane ke baad use phirse se nahi daalte yeh galat step hein.
(once u remove the veil u shld not put it again this is a wrong step)
Billa:yeh kya paaji aapne pehle hi step galat kardi(first step itself is wrong)
Baldev who was furious and scared with what these guys did went and started punching them.
Both jaggi and billa dint understand why baldev is behaving like that.
Baldev very slowly abbey nalayako yeh kya kardi tum logon ne dekha nahi voh kaun hein vaha .(stupid idiots what have u done have u not seen who it is)
Jaggi "nahi paaji voh mera dost ne ek ladke ko behosh kiya aur dulhan ke ghooghat aur lehenga pehna diya ghonghat toh aap ko utana hein na humne chehra nahi dekha kyu paaji aap aise pooch rahe hein"
( my friend tied someone and we dint see his face y u r asking like tat)
Billa:"paaji voh nahi chudail hein,naagin hein ya bakri hein toh aap kyu darr rahe ho??"
Jaggi:was laughing and sarcastically said "paaji kya voh chimpangee hein ki.??"
Baldev slapped jaggi and said tu jaake dekh voh kaun hein.
Baldev was thinking" ab mein ki karu usne mujhe dekh liya ab yeh kya naya siyappa hein inn nikkamo ne kya kardi ab mein ki kara"...
Jaggi went and saw and almost fainted seeing and baldev quickly went and was untieing the rope and was beating both jaggi and billa for what they did and went and made baggi fall on that persons feet and tell sorry and ask for his forgiveness.
Both baggi was begging tat person to forgive them and save their friend from embarrassment they said
"Paaji ko humne dulhan ki kapde mein dekha ham chahte the ki aap ko bhi ek baar.. unn kapdo mein aap ko dekhe paaji ki shaadi ke baat hai toh veera bhabhi hi unke dulhan hogi na ab shaadi se pehle ek baar aap ko dekhna tha "
they dint even complete their words... both were attacked by baldev and ranvi as the person who was made to sit in dulhan attire was ranvi.
Baldev thought"ab yeh chudail,naagin,bakri yeh sab theek hein lekin ranvi patanahi aur kya kya aur kitna bada siyappa hoga mera suhaag raat se pehle" ...
"Iss ranvi nu sawaal poochne ka samay bhi nahi doonga ya moka bhi nahi doonga varna mein kya jawwab dunga.. usse acha hein ki mein jaggi aur balli nu aise hi maar te rahu jab tak ranvi mujhe rokhe tab tak ."
Veera and gunjan are waiting for baldev and ranvi as they have to do skit rehearsal atleast once before performing on stage.
Tagging:Me tagging Saffa,i.e. Lovelyvb⭐️ as next writer!
Saffa darling!Ambi made an awesome choice!😛I luk forward to ur take on da story sweety!Plz move it forward,and DO tag another writer plz!😡😃Best of luck Saffa!🥳
Part-10(By Lovelyvb),page-49:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111700120 Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago
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