Veeba Tagathon:Suhaagraat ki SIYAPPA! !:Part-14{1},page-65 updated! - Page 2

Awesome story ... this Tagathon really interesting something like Kho - Kho.

Seems like we are going to have more & more fun while reading😳

This one was damn cute, Sina😆

Baldev scared of SR 😆
I'm sure Veera's gonna teach him everything 😛

ohhh this is a brlliant idea!!!! and the concept 2 Baldev is so naive huh...😳,well lets see 😉,and i'm sure that RM will rock !!!⭐️

[Hello all u lovely ppl!🤗Guess u r still in Veeba world..?😉Nd m sure Ballu's askn Veera to see him in her dreams,has md u all do da same too,hai ki nai..?😆Okay so my partner Roshini has PMed me da story and m updatn it on her behalf..😳M sure she has done a beautiful job!Nd dnt forget to press ur likes and comments plz!Nd of course she hads tagged sm1 at da end too!So da next writer dnt be lazy,and in true sportsman spirit tk da story ahead,and tag sm1 else..😉🥳
So that our Veeba Tagathon goes on..😛]🥳


Part-1(by TehsinaJFJ),page-1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110663684

Part-2:Impression jo jamana hai..!

(Author:RoshiniManeet⭐️.)

(Veera came in search of Baldev. It was Ratan Bheeji's birthday the next day and she was planning to present a small comical skit along with Veerji, Gunjan , Baldev and Chaiji to surprise her...Soon she found Baldev walking out of the teashop...She has planned practice tonight and asked Gunjan Bhabi to inform Baldev...but since she was nearby she thought she too will remind him once...(Unfortunately Gunjan was so busy with Ranvi that she forgot her Veerji...)

Veera: Baldeva...ruk na..

[Baldev wait..]

Baldev: haan haan bolo...ki baat hai Veera

[Yes Veera..Tell me what is it..?]

Veera: Accha tho aaj raat pakka practice ke liye aa jayega na...ghar aakar tujhe utana tho nahi padega mujhe???

(Well you will be coming tonight for practice right, you will not need me climbing in to your room again)

Baldev: (Totally sweating and stammering) ki...practice Veera..???

Veera: arre...Just come ok...Its gonna be fun...and don't come home...it is a little risky there...come to the place behind the fields..OK bye... I have lots to prepare for...

Baldev: (Almost dizzy with her last line) oye...ruk..tu bhi tayaari kar rahi kya?

(Hey you are in to preparations as well???)

Veera: haan haan...sherni hun...peeche thodi na hatungi mein...

[Yes I am a Sherni..Why should I step back and take the coward's way out..]

Baldev had literally fallen down with a mini attack...

Baldev: Rabji...yeh ki ho raha hai mere saath...yeh kudi tho suhagraat ki practice ke liye mujhe sach much bula rahi hai...Mera jhi itna gabra hai ...itna gabra hai ki..poochiye mat. Abb mein ki karun

(Oh my God..this girl is inviting me for practice ...that too for our first night...I am hell scared..what the heck should I do now)

He slowly walked back to his jaggi and co...

Jaggi: ki hua praji...kuch kaam yaad gaya tha kya...woh Veera kahan bula rahi thi aapko?

[What happened Praji..?Did you remember something..Where was Veera calling you to..?]

Baldev: Jaggi...Poocho mat...Gor kalyug aa hi gaya hai

[Jaggi..Don't ask..It's ghor Kalyug going on right now..]

Jaggi: Yeh ki bol rahe ho paaji...kahan aaya hai???aaj release hua hai ki? Hum dekne chale?

[What are you saying Paji..?Where has it come..???Has it released today?Shall we go to watch it?]

Baldev: Arre chaddo...Kalyug mane...chal ab rehne de...aap logon ki bas ki baat nahi hai

[Oh leave it!By kalyug I meant..Ok let it go..You will not get it..]

Jaggi: Paaji..kya problem hai...meinu batayiye

[Paaji what is the problem..Tell me..]

Baldev discloses what transpired between him and Veera.

Jaggi and Billu are shocked but soon were grinning away much to the irritation of their paaji...

Jaggi: Baldev paaji...aap na phikar hi mat karna...hum banenge aap ke Love Guru

[Baldev Paaji..Don't you worry at all..We are going to be your Love Guru..]

After 3 hours of mindboggling and strenuous practice sessions with Jaggi and Billu, Baldev looked like a frightened puppy just out or water...

Jaggi: paaji...just remember- Confidence...ek dum se hero wala confidence dikni chahiye...aur tho aur...joh bhi imprission aap aaj jamenge na wahi rahega hamesha...woh bolete hai na "First imperission is the best imperission"

[Paaji..Just remember-Confidence..You should be as confident as a hero..And also..Whatever impression you are going to create tonight,will last forever..Isn't it said"First impression is the best impression.."]

Baldev: Haan Jaggi...what come it may I will make my impression today...Fine it is almost time now... Let me go to Veera...

Jaggi: Paaji...woh 12^th wala step bool mat jayiga...thoda difficult tha aap ke liye

[Paaji..Don't forget the 12th step..It was a bit difficult for you..]

Baldev: Haan Haan teek hai...

[Yes yes alright..]

Baldev reaches the small cottage near the fields only to find Veera already waiting there...

Baldev: Yeh kudi tho kamala ki hai...dek mujhe ...sher hokar bhi kitna tension ho raha hai aur Veera tho ek dum bindaas hai ...

[This girl is amazing..Look at me..I am a Sher and yet so nervous,and this Veera is completely tension free..]

Baldev just enters the cottage when it starts raining cats and dogs...

Veera: Baldeva...kithe reh gaya tha tu...kab se intezaar kar rahi hun...

[Baldeva..Where were you..?I have been waiting for you for so long..]

Baldev: Veera...thoda tho sabar rak...abb mein aa gay hun na...imperission tho jamake hi wapas jaunga..

[Veera..Have some patience..I am here now..I will return only after making an impression now..]

Veera: tu yeh ki bol raha hai Baldeva...tujhe script tho mila na...

[What are you saying..?You got the script right..?]

Baldev: Sciript...woh kya hai

[Script..What is that..?!]

Veera: Script...yani ki ...joh karna ha...joh bolna hai...uska guide..tu samaj raha hai na???

[Script..That means..Whatever you have to do..Whatever you have to say..A guide of that..You are getting it,right?]

Baldev: (Had the shock of his life)... Veera do you mean to say you had a guide of what is to be done????

Veera: Haan...hai na mere paas...

[Yes..I have one too.]

Baldev: you should have shared it with me...See... Jaggi wasted three hours and I am still not confident enough...tub hi na Veera...

Baldev: Accha chal... Abb aur time waste nahi karthe...where is the bed?

[Okay let's go..Let's not waste any more time..Where is the bed?]

Veera: ki...Bed??? What are you searching a bed for?

Baldev: (Sees a bench) ...Fine lets adjust on this bench for now...Come sit...

Baldev makes Veera sit down ...pulls out her dupatta and places it over her head making a ghunghat...

Veera all the more stunned...Yeh ki kar raha hai dev??? Veerji aur Gunjan bhabhi...

[What are you doing Dev???Veerji and Gunjan Bhabhi..]

Baldev: Arre tumhe hamesha apni Veer aur gunjan ki phikar kyun rahthi hai...unka "O Rabba" tho kab ka shuru ho chukka hoga...chal abb meinu apna kaam karne de...

[Oh!Why are you always worried about your Veer and Gunjan..?Their "O Rabba" must have started way back..Come on now let me do my job..]

Baldev: Abb ready haan...Step: 1 ---Ahista Ahista Gunghat utana hai...

[Now ready,yes..Step:1---Slowly slowly raise the Ghunghat..]

Veera thought she will faint any time now...

Requesting/Tagging ElireEli alias Eliza as the next writer...

[Eli love!😛GO on wid da story please!😆Roshini md an excellent choice!🤗Come on show da Veebaians ur talent!😃I love ur writings a lot!Nd plz dnt forget to tag another writer at da end of ur story?!😉

ND PLZ DO CHEER OUR WRITERS FRIENDS!😡😛🥳]

Part-3(By ElireEli),page-9:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110855569

🤣🤣🤣Damn Roshini partner,I wish i cud like this post!!!😆But I cn comment SUPER DUPER LIKE!No like, Love!Love u 100!😆This was so awesome!🤣I cannot wait for Eli to continue wid dis!😆God I cud never drema of dis situation!M I glad started dis tagathon..!It will be an awesome journey!Nd partner u r a true ⭐️!!!🤗

p.s.M scared to imagine wat r da things he learnt!😆🤣

🤣 Hilarious, funny chapter!