Veeba Tagathon:Suhaagraat ki SIYAPPA! !:Part-14{1},page-65 updated! - Page 42

Originally posted by: sparkle2985

wow roshini fabulous update dear

i liked each and every line u wrote its beautiful 👏

and u stopped very aptly ab sina likhegi hot hot update😳

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

Awesome Update Roshini 👏
Thanks for pm Sina dear !! 🤗

Originally posted by: whitelily

superb update 😛

Originally posted by: a4aarsh

this is amazing Roshni ,i absolutely loved this update it describes the extent to which baldev loves veera,god i want someone like him ,the dialogues were perfect ,the ranvi-veera was 2 gud...i was like this ,i guess ranvi knows baldev better then veera 😆,in short this is a bang-on update Roshni ,very well done 👏

p.s:hopes are high 4 the nxt chapter coz,Sina is the writer 😳

Originally posted by: Lovelyvb

Awesome!!!! Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! Loved it to the core!!!! 😳 u r superb writer Roshini di ⭐️ love u... 😳

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

Very nice...

Originally posted by: Nikki36

Great update

I think you covered how we all wanna see her appreciate and understand baldev reaally well.

Originally posted by: PotterHeadAMP

Nice tagathon going guys!! Keep it up! 😊

[NOTE:Plz dnt kill me for dis rotten update!I swear i dnt know wat crap i wrote!Just had to get rid of da thought block dt had settled in my mind..Nd I hope it's not too bad..Nd plz forgive my crappy hindi dialogues..I suck at dm..]

Part-11(By RoshiniManeet),page-56:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/112012550

Part-12: Locha-e-ulfat ho gaya!!!

(By TehsinaJFJ..😳)

As soon as her warm moist lips closed over his,Baldev was lost..

Warm,hot yet sweet sensations were already coursing through his body,as his hands sank into her thick hair,and pulled her face closer to kiss her back with all the love and passion that were ready to burst out from within him..

His lips moved along with hers,tasting and rejoicing every moment at the same time,as he felt her hands move to curve round his shoulder,and hold him tight..

He moved a bit,to relax the hold on her,but the impossible unpredictable girl he was going to get married to,took it as another indication,and head suddenly pushed him lower,and had rolled on top of him..

Her soft lips moved on his,while Baldev went still,as he felt her hands move under his kurta,and spread along his flat stomach..

He pulled his lips free from hers,and inhaling a sharp steadying breath,as her fingers moved upwards,and touched his soft chest hairs,making his muscles tighten with need..

"Veera..!Ye tu ki-..

[Veera..!What are you-..]"He could not finish his sentence,as she placed her finger on his lips,making them tingle even more..

She shook her head slowly at him,indicating not to talk,and as she did so,Baldev could not help but notice the way her heavy locks fell across her face,and gulped a knot of tension as his body tightened with need..

He inhaled a sharp breath when her soft slim finger traced the outline of his lips slowly..His heart raced fast,and his body craved for more..

He watched the teasing glint in her beautiful dark eyes and his heart raced faster,as he felt his reasons getting overshadowed by the need that was coursing his body..

Her finger on his lips was burning them up,and he looked hungrily at her soft swollen lips suddenly wanting to taste them again..

He moved his hands to pull her down to do just that,when she moved both her hands,to push him back down,and trapped his hand between their body as she looked at him dangerously from bove..She was warning him not to make a move,baldev understood taking in another raspy breath..

Had she any idea what she was doing to him..?!

She moved downwards,her long tresses fell like a dark curtain round their faces as she moved down..

She was so close that he could smell her sweet smell,and also feel her sweet warm breath against his face,and he stifled the groan of frustration that rose in his throat.

The silky locks teased and tickled at his face,and helplessy he waited for her to take the next step,as the fire burning in his body increased in intensity..

She only moved closer,and Baldev gritted his teeth,and clenched his hand into tight fists,to keep himself from overpowering her,which he could easily do if he wanted do..But this once he wanted her to have the control,to do as she pleased..Even if it meant he had to die with the hot unbearable yearning and need clawing at his insides..

She moved her lips to his ears and whipered out his name,her warm breath tickling there too,and Baldev closed his eyes taking in another steadying breath..

And before he knew it,she was kissing his earlobe,biting and nibbling there,and he nearly rolled her over,took take control again..Barely able to hold himself,but he clenched his hands tighter to hold on some more longer..

She moved her lips to kiss his jaw,and was moving her soft warm lips towards his..And Baldev waited with bated breath for nirvana to set in and set him up on fire again..

Her lips wer now grazing his bearded cheek,and Baldev felt his muscles tense up waiting for her to-..

A knock on the door stopped Veera right there,and Baldev went still too..

"Agar tum dono ki ladna khatam ho gaya ho to,Beeji ki waste natak ke liye chale..?Warna unki janam din khatam ho jaane par humein unhe aai surprije dena padhega..

[If you are two done with your fights,then can we go for the play for Beeji..?Or else we will have to surprise her after her birthday is over..]"The familiar teasing voice of Ranvi whispered from the other side of the door..

Veera quickly got up from above him,and tried to fi he clothes and hair,and Baldev followed queue..Uncomfortable at his body's condition,as he sighed out stifling his frustration..

The skit had gone on successfully and surprised birthday party for his future mother-in-law was over..

As dusk set in Baldev sat by the tea stall with his favourite glass of tea in his hand..

The tea was forgotten in his hand,as he thought about his upcoming wedding night only after one day..

Tomorrow was the mehdi and then the much awaited day..

And he had still not come across a solution to his problem..He needed to think the steps properly..He had to ensure everything was just perfect for her..What was he going to do..?!

"Aarey Paaji aap iththe ho?!Hum dono aap ko kaabse dhund rahe the!

[Oh Paaji you are here?!We two have been looking for you for a long time now!]"Baldev looked up at the arrival of his two best pals.Or to be precise his two problem creators..

He quickly got up to leave not willing to stay and listen some more of their stupid ideas and make himself fall deeper in the mess he already was in..

"Paaji aap kiththe jaa rahe ho..?!

[Paaji where are you going..?!]"Jaggi called out in surprise.

"Kaam hai mainu bauhot..Shaadi hai parsu mera..!

[I have lots of work..Day after tomorrow is my wedding..!]"

As he strode away to his dismay his pals followed him..

"Aarey paaji usiki baarein mein hi to aap se baat karne aaye the..Ek jabardast idea aya hai mainu..!Aap sunenge to ekdum khush ho jayenge,aur phir Parjaiji bhi khush ho jayenge..!

[Paaji we came to talk to you just about that..I have a fantastic idea..!If you hear it,you'll be the haapiest,and then Parjaiji will also become happy..!]"

Baldev went still suddenly which made both his pals bump into him..

Slowly he turned angry eyes to both of them and then his gaze fixed on Jaggi.

"Iss baar kaunsa idea hai tera..?Aab ki Sunny Singh ko dulhan banake practice kawaega..?!

[What is this idea of yours this time..?Now will you make Sunny Singh my bride and make me practice..?!]"

"Nai nai paaji..!Aab koi practice nai..Seedha-..

[No no paaji..!No more practices..Straight-..]"Baldev did not let him finish the sentence.

"Seedha ki?!Seedha meri Suhhagraat pe tum dono ake mainu mere biwi ke saamne sikhaoge ki ghunghat kaise uthate hai..?!Main-..

[Straight what?!You will come straight into my room on my wedding night,and teach me infront of my bride how to raise the ghunghat..?!I-..]"

"Paaji aap sun to lijiye..!

[Paaji first listen..!]"Baldev angrily pushed Jaggi against a nearby wall..His face a maks of anger and frustration,as balli looked from one to the other not sure how to calm him down..

"Ki sunu mai..?Haan..?!Tum logo ki bara steps yaad karte karte mera dimaag ka dahi ho gaya hai..!Aab ki lassi banake piyoge uska?Haan?!

[What should I listen to..?What..?!My brain has curdled into curd by trying to remember your twelve steps..!Now do you want to make lassi out of it and drink..?!]He snapped out in anger.

"Ki tha wo-..?Haan..EK-Aahista aahistan ghunghat uthana..,DO-Akhon mein akhon daalo..,TEEN-Haat pakro aur paas kheecho..,CHAR-Vaddiya sa haasi do..,PAANCH-Haanske kaho ke doodh ka glass le aye..,CHE-Doodh ane ki baad piyo aur phir kaho ki achche nai bana utna,SAAT-Phir apne mooche maroro,mardo ki tarha..,AAAT-Batao ki hum iss ghar ka malik hai aur aasli sher,aur yahape bhi sirf humara chalega..!,NAU-Koi mardo ka shaan wala gana gao,DAAS-Usko baithne ko kaho,aur paid dabane ko kaho,mard ki tarha..,YAARA-Usse apne mardaangi ki kisse sunao..,BARA-Wo ki tha..?!

What were those-..?Yes..1-Slowly slowly raise the ghunghat...2-Look into eyes..,3-Hold her hand and pull her close..,4-Give an awesome smile..,5-Smile and tell her to bring you a glass of milk,6-After she brings that glass of milk,drink it and then tell her it did not taste that good,7-Then twirl your moustache,like a man..,8-Tell her I am the owner of the house and a true lion,and even here only my command will reign..!,9-Sing a song of man's praise,10-Tell her to sit,and order her to press your feet,just like a man..,11-Tell her stories of your courageous deeds..,12-What was that..?!]"He frowned trying to remember..

"Paaji wo-.."

"RUK!Mainu yaad karne de..!Ye bara wala hi hamesha bhul jaata hu main..

[WAIT!Let me remember..!I always forget this twelfth one..]"

"Paaji wo-.."Jaggi tried to say something again.

"Maine kaha na ruk..!

[Didn't I tell you to wait..!]"He snapped out irritatedly.

"Paaji wo aap-.."This time it was Billa,who never got to finish his sentence too,as baldev went on..

"Haan!Yaad aya-..!Ussko sulado,aur ek hi saath mein batti bhi bujha do,taki subha ho jaye..!Ek hi saath mein batti kaise bujhau main..?!Main ki koi jaadugar hu,ki main sochunga aur batti bujh jayega..?!Tainu pata hai na mere kaamrein wich switch kiththe hai..?!Main kaise-..

[Yes!I remember-..!make her lie down,and at the same time turn off the light,so that it becomes morning..!Am I some magician that I'll think of it,and the light will go out..?!Don't you know where is the light switch in my room..?!How will I-..]"

"Baldev puttar!Ye ki keh raha hai tu?!Aai?Paanch,che ,saath,doodh ki glass,Batti aye saab ki hai..?!

[Baldev puttat!What are you saying?!5,5,7,milk glass,light,what is all these..?!]"Baldev gulped and went pale as he slowly turned to face his frowning Beeji..

"Beeji..Aap..?!

[Beeji..You..?!]"He asked with wide eyes,literally sweating now,as he wiped off some sweat off his face..

"Haan!To main ki tainu teri Beeji ki bhootni lag rahi hun?!Kaahi tu uss Veera ki barein mein..

[Yes!Am I looking like your Beeji's bhootni to you?!Are you by any chance talking about that Veera..]"

Baldev let out a forced laugh,trying to evade the issue...

"Nai nai Beeji!Main to baas aiwei..Kuch kaam yaad kaar raha tha..Wo Jaggi aur Billa ko kuch niyam sikha raha tha..Ke kaise apne dimaag ki batti jalaye..

[No no Beeji!I was just..Just remembering some work..Was just teaching Jaggi and Billa some rules on how to enlighten their mind..]"He said the last part in between gritted teeth,staring daggers at the pair..

"Ki matlab?!

[What do you mean?!]"His mother frowned deeper,amking him more tensed.

He gave another forced laugh and pulled her towards their house away from his pals.

"Aap chaddo na aai saab Beeji..Chalo ghaar chalte hai..Saath mein chaye peete hai..!

[You forget all this Beeji..Let's go home..We will have tea together..!]"He mumbled as he pulled her away..And sighed in relief as she complied..

Baldev did not look back and see the look exchanged by his pals as they mutually decided to tell him about their plan,later that night..

After all there was only one dy left before the wedding,and they had to teach their Paaji all they could..Tonight itself..

Baldev had just entered his room,and was shocked at the sound from his window,and his heart thudded fast as he realized it was her..

Hot memories of earlier in the day flooded his mind,as he gulped..And then he remembered the fair warning his mother had given him of not seeing her anymore before the wedding itself..

And for once he wished he had not given in..How was he going to resist the temptation and also follow his mother's order at the same time..?!What was he going to do?!

He just saw her jumping in,when the knob on his door turned..

"BALDEV PUTTAR!!!"Helplessly he turned from her and indicated her to hide behind the curtain,while he turned towards the door..

His mother had come with a container of oil,all ready for a massage and night time chat with her son..

Helplessly he turned back to his fiance who indicated him to see her..And explained by sign that she had little time in her hand..

What was he going to do?!He thought helplessly as his Beeji called her to sit infront of her for that massage..

He was pulled between the two woman that mattered most in his life..And then he stared out the window..What was he going to do in this dark dark night..?How was he going to see her?!

Baldev stood still unsure what to do,again looking at his mother,and then again at Veera who was making frustrated faces from behind the curtain,unaware that two other shadows had crept into his room through the window..

And on seeing bansuri,they too quickly went to hide behind the curtain,and in their hurry did not notice Veera hiding behind it..And by mistake stepped on Veera's feet,and made her yelp out in pain,while they both yelped out in surprise too..

Baldev nearly had a heart attack,at the combined scream,and he quickly looked at his Beeji,who had dropped the oil container from her hand,as she stared pale face towards the window..From where the sound seemed to have come from..

And now Baldev perspired even more,wondering what had happened and scared of thinking what his Beeji would do if she saw her in his room so late at night..!And that also when their mehdi ritual was tomorrow..!

He started perspiring when she slowly started walking towards the window and the curtains..

Tagging:I Tag Bidzie..

Part-13(By _Bidzie_),page-63:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114462315

omg Sina these were the steps for SR!!!!!😆,u really did cracked me up and nw towards the end u made it all scary,if bansuri sees her she'll definitely cancel the wedding...,gud job