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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update...waiting for kalpi entry
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Nice update. Where is kalpi...
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Hey dear when are going to update...
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Chapter 4
kapoor' House
Prem's phone ringing early morning , " Hello sir , we have an emergency , plz do come to office as soon as possible.
Prem and Sahil reached the office, dut they were completely clueless.
Manager " sir we have been dodged , our inside sources have received information about this .
"What is it , you people just keep freaking out unnecessarily, its time to celebrate. Prem was still in party mood .
"Sir it' that the person who bought all our flats is none other than Raghav Singhania . It was he who had asked someone else to do that for him.
"How's that possible, I did meet that man personally .
"Sir now Raghav Singhania will sell it for much higher price and will earn profit .
Prem was very angry now , he called in the business association to know the new owner of his project and the kapoor's finally understood that coming back of Raghav Singhania has to do something with them definitely.
Now its Prem's turn to do something , and it seems he already has one. "It's alright dad , we will make upto it soon.


Late Night
"Raghav tu sare staff members se mila na ?, any problem ? Aur vo new interns bhi join honge , applications aane chalu hogaye hai . Usmese hai kuch selected kara hun.
"Sammy , jo karna hai kar bass Pakhi Kapoor mujhe office me chahiye . Make sure u do that.
" Haan baba ho jayega , aur vo vidyaniketan university se bhi to kuch interns join ho rahai hai na , u had a talk with their principal right.
"Ya Sammy I had a talk , might be Vinod uncle will send one or two interns, the toppers of the college. So they will come , why r u so excited about them , they still have to do with their exams.
"Rags u know its one of the best university, and these students are the best too .
"Sammy focus on Kapoors , we are going to Pakhi's college tomorrow.


Kapoors house ,
"So dad how did u find my plan , isn't it just superb , dekhana abb raghav singhania ko samane ana hi padega , aur vo kuch nahi kar payega . Singhania chawl ke jagepe abb Kapoor's mall banega.
"Plane accha hai prem , pur kya ye chawl wale chawl khali karenge ?
"Dad kal subhe chawl valonko notice bhejenge , they have to leave the chawl.


Next day early morning a advocate arrived at the chawl with the notice from the Kapoor's . Chawl people were shocked, they had no idea why Kapoor's had sent them notice, chawl did belong to Singhania's .
After reading the notice, Vitthal explain all the chawl people that the chawl now is owned by Kapoor's and they r asking them to leave their homes within next 7 days .
Now chawl people were tensed about all this . They all requested kamla to have a talk with kapoor's regarding this and she did agree to set this matter with them.

Raghav till now had already received the news about all this . And he was expecting something of this thought from Kapoor's . And now the game has become more interesting he thought.
Many new things will come in to light bez of this now .



Delhi , Girls hostel
Cell phone ringing , "Kalpi phone bajraha hai tera uthale na ... yarr kalpi , she wakes up to find that her roomie is not in the room . "Kaha chali jati hai ye subha subha ? .
"Sonal abhi tak sorahi hai tu ! Uthja college nahi jana kya aja . Aja completion lena hai pata hai na.
"Yarr Kalpi , kaha gayi thi tu , I am not coming to college today , Ohaaan u had a phone from your dad .
"Baba ne call kiya , vo bhi abhi , ok thanks.
Well it was quite certain that something was wrong, and after talking to Vitthal kalpi got to know about all that happened and now she was worried.
Her exams were just about to start , she had to perform well to get a job plus this , she was under tremendous pressure but she know that she will score good in her exams , that was totally in her control but crawl matter it was in someone else's control.


While Raghav had got the news, he still kept silence about it . No movement from his side at all . Might be he was waiting for someone else to do something about it.
"Raghav , so now what r we going to do , this was unexpected.
"Sammy this is what Kapoor's can do , target the poor .
"Yay so we should help them .
"No Sammy , its not possible , they themselves have to find out a way to this.
"Common Raghav u know u r the only one who can help them ,after all chawl does belong to you .
"Sammy I am not sure about the chawl , I don't have any documents related to it .
"Big deal Raghav , just say it and we will get all that we want .
"Sammy its not that easy, after dad Mishra Uncle did look up after this , I have no idea what did he actually do. I have to meet him first, talk about this.
"So what r u waiting for , just meet him na .
"I am waiting for chawl people to do something.
Well Sammy did not understand what Raghav was waiting for.
"Sammy I have to leave for the interview...
"What interview are you giving now , why do you we need an job !
"Shut up sammy , I am going to talk interview of the interns joining us .
Ray did find this conversation funny "See even Ray laughing on you Sammy .
"Ray why r you laughing, this is not funny ok.
Well baby Ray can't even do anything other than laughing on their talks.

College
After an hour on talk interview Raghav was bored and irritated of the stupid answers given by the applicants.
And then She entered , after looking at her Raghav did gain a full attitude.
Pakkhi look quite confident and had a huge smile on her face .
The only thing Raghav asked her was to make a cup of coffee for him . After all that was the only work she could do and she had to pass this interview. It was necessary for Raghav that she chooses to work with him.
Even Pakkhi was quite confident that she will definitely get this job, she just had to do it because she was interested in Raghav and Raghav was interested in his revenge.

Chawl people had failed for a stay order from the court with the help of a advocate which Kalpi had told them about.
Now they were waiting for a miracle to happen.
So will a mircle happen ? Will Raghav save the chawl ?


Sorry for such a late post. And again it's a small one.
I am actually quite busy with my internship, I have just started and I had back to back night duty as I am posted in emergency duty, so its quite difficult for me to manage . But I will try my best to give updates regularly .
Plz ignore my mistake. Do like and tell me how did you find the story .
Thank you for baring with me.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Finally an update but yaa short too...
I was expecting kalpi's entry to be grand or you know shocking but you must have something different in your mind I am sure about that dear...

Update was really nice keep updating👍🏼
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Waiting what will kalpi reaction when she meet with raghav.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Revenge chapter 5
Day started with a good news for the chawl people , the stay order was finally granted by the court they got 5 days stay order in which they had to do something to save the chawl , but non of the chawl person knew what actually they had to do. Vitthal called Kalpi to tell her about the news , "Hello , Kalpi haan beta vo stay order milgaya hai 5 dinka , parr abb karna kya hai ?, "Haan baba abb app bass mujhe vo notice jo Kapoor's ne bheji thi aur chawl ke koi bhi paper agar app ke pass ho jase koi agreement ya light bill to mujhe send kardena , fir me batatihun kya karna hai .
So now Vitthal was busy searching for the documents if he had any . Kamla was busy in motivating people in going on strike.

And Kapoor's were busy dreaming about their Kapoor mall , they were a bit concerned about the stay order as now their dream project will be a bit delayed , but they were very confident about it. "How did this stupid chawlwala people manage to get a stay order .
"Ohh come on Prem , stop being so anxious , all this will take some time .
"Dad , not some time , just 5 days , that's it , after that even that chawl will not exist on that place , I will myself nock that chawl down .They have to leave that chawl .
Raghav was looking after Ray that day . It was his turn . Sammy and rags use to take turns for looking after Ray as Maya had to return back to US for her work .
"Ray why don't you lesion to todays headlines , I will read it out for you , Elections does have an impact on Indian economics ...,
RCB again looses against...,
Temperature reaches 42 in Mumbai ...,
A teenager committee suicide after he lost in PUBB G ...,
Medical Neet PG results out ...,
"What are you doing sammy , why r you reading out news for Ray , I told you to read a story for him not news .
"Ohh , Raghav I am just giving him general knowledge , he should now at least the headlines na , what if he is invited in coffee with Karan it will be so humiliating for us.
"Shut up sammy , he is just 6 months old , just ready that..., fine I will read him that book , my turn to look behind him .
"Ok than , I will leaving for office, but Ray is going to miss me a lot , but Ray don't be afraid I promise I will come to rescue you soon .
"Right now Ray is thankful to me for rescuing him from you and your news Sammy .
"Well leave that , I have a news for you , chawl people managed to get stay order for 5 days , but after that they will be forced to leave the chawl Raghav , do something , atleast pay back to kamla bai .
Now Sammy had hit the target but still , Raghav was not into saving the chawl. Even Sammy was thinking what is Raghav waiting for .
"Common Ray lets read out a story book , which one would you like to read today , pick one , pick one ...
Well Raghav was certainly waiting for someone thing, his turning deaf ear to wards chawl people definitely had a reason. But the question was what?

Vitthal did finally find out the old documents of chawl which had Mr Singhania's [raghav's dad] sign on it . He did send those to Kalpi . He had full believe on Kalpi .


Pakkhi had called Kamla to tell her about her new job , when kamal told her that she is not working for Kapoor's now as she is on strike. She also told Pakkhi about the notice that Kapoor's had send and about the stay order .
Pakkhi was now worried for Kamla and other chawl people. She decided to talk to her dad about this when he comes home. This was the only way she could help kamla.
Pakkhi left to meet kamla as she couldn't spent a day without meeting her and even Kamla could not stay without Pakkhi what so ever is the situation.
After meeting Pakkhi Kamla felt better, "Pakkhi , abb me thik hun beta , bohot der ho gayi abb tujhe ghar jana chahiye.
"Haan Kamla maa me nikalti hun abbhi , me ghar jakar dad se batth karti hun . App apana khayal rakhana . Good night.


1 day amount 5 days was gone . 4 days and still chawl people had no idea what to do . How to save chawl.

Next day ,
"Dad , u know ki chawl people r staying there since decades, n they don't have any other place to go . You should think about all this .
"Pakkhi , we had enough loss due to Raghav Singhania , now its time ki we make some money, you just stay out of all this.
"But dad ...
"Pakkhi behave your self ,shouted Prem , "Kamla is just your nanny that's it . You belong to this family and now start behaving as Kapoor's , enough of this chawl wala people behaviour.
Hearing this Pakkhi left her home with anger.
"Mom , we should seriously think about Pakkhi , she won't let us work if she is here .
"Prem ,I have a plan for the same , I have asked your Rolly aunty to call Pakkhi to Pune as its her birthday day after tomorrow.
"Good job mom .Finally we all will have a peace of mind .
On her way Pakkhi got a call from her Rolly aunty and she invited Pakkhi to her birthday party which she was specially hosting for Pakkhi . Pakkhi was a bit reluctant about leaving Kamla in this situation but latter she did agree to go to Pune.

Sammy was again giving a try to convince Raghav to help Kamla and chawl people.
"Raghav 1 day down , 4 left .
"Sammy to subhe subhe kya bolraha hai , kisbat ki countdown hai ye.
"Kuch logonke ghar tutane ki .
"Yarr Sammy , tu phir chalu ho gaya , chod hum donoko usse bhi kuch jaroori kam hai , we r leaving to Pune tomorrow. Mr Mehta se milna hai aur vo plot bhi dekhana hai.
"Parr Rags u would have met in Mumbai itself ,as it is we r not starting that project so early, and you r more needed here in Mumbai.
"Sammy believe me , I need to go to Pune , and if anyone needs me let them come searching for me than .
"ohhh so now you want chawl people to beg you to help them haan , this is not done Raghav .
"Sammy we r leaving to Pune today itself, so get Ray ready, all this stuff and all and that too ASAP.

Delhi
Girls hostel ,
Kalpi is going through all the documents regarding the chawl , and suddenly she gazes to the Mr. Singhania's signature which seem different from the notice that was send to the chawl by Kapoor's which said that Kapoor's had bought the chawl from Mr Singhania , and now Kapoor's were the owners of the chawl.
Kalpi immediately called Vitthal and told him to one again check Mr Singhania's signatures to confirm her doubt. Now she was waiting for Vitthal's phone call.
As her exam were about to start from the next 10 days , she was not able to concentrate on her studies. She was worried about both , she had to score good in order to get her scholarship for next year and she also had to save the chawl. One was her career, her mother's dream and other was her house again her mother's dream . She had spent her entire childhood just fulfilling her mother's wishes and following what she says without even asking a single question, still it was her who was sent to hostel at such an tender age , away from all and not even once she had visited her home, not even in vacations . She used to do part time job with some academic courses in vacations and Vitthal used to visit her once in two to three that too only when she was in School in Panchagani , after that she did not meet Vitthal as she was doing her college from Delhi. Very rare Kamla used to talk to her on phone , on occasions like her Birthday, Diwali etc.
Kalpi missed her family a lot , she never understand how it was to growup in a family, all she was used to was hostel rules and regulations but still her 2 best friends made her life a little better.
Kalpi , Sonal and Aayan , they all meet each other in School in Panchgani , Sonal was Kalpi's partner and from then they became best friends, Sonal was the only child, her parents separate 2yr after her birth , her custody was with her mom and her mother was a working women.
Aayan also was their school friend , he was a son of a rich business man . His dad stayed in London with his stepmother , Aayan was also the only child. It was Aayan's choice to stay in India after his mother's death. Aayan also look after his dad's business in Indai . He was the owner of the multiple 5 start hostel's all several metro cities like Mumbai , Bangalore, Delhi , Pune etc.
After pass from school they all together took admission in the college in Delhi .
"kallu , kallu oyyy kallu, Aayan was knocking the window of Kalpi's room while Kalpi dozed off waiting for Vitthal phone . Aayan used window for entry and exit in Kalpi's room as it was a girls hostel and boys were not allowed inside.
"Aayan , Kalpi got up hearing the knock , she opened the window, "kallu were u sleeping? Did I just disturb you ?. Aayan used to call Kalpi Kallu and even Sonal had started calling her Kallu now a days even when she did not like that name at all.
"No Aayan , u did not disturb me , you just took away the peace of mind .
"ohhh that's so cool , by the way I have a uncool news to , I have a meeting with some Mr. Sieverth, and he is dads business partner in London , so I am leaving tomorrow might be , so can you plz do my assignment and submit it.
And Kalpi phone rang , It was Vitthal , "Kalpi , tu sahi thi beta vo signature alag hai . Kuch gadbad lag rahi hai mujhe .
"Haan baba , Kuch gadbad to jaroo hai , par app iske bareme kisiko kuch mat batana , aai ko bhi nahi , bakki sab me dekh lungi , ok baba.
Kalpi did tell Vitthal to not tell about the signature to anyone.
"What's the matter Kallu , chal kya raha hai , keeping secrets from aai haan .
And then Kalpi finally told everything to Aayan.
"Basss , that's it , yarr abbhi batata hun ki ye signature asli hai ya nakali.
"And who's that possible.
Aayan made a phone call , but it did not help.
"Dekh kallu , ye jo advocate hai na advocate Bakshi , ye mere dad ke ache friend hai , see its his signature on the power of paternity, so we will just ask him if he actually did this agreement or not .
"What really, so can you just ask him this , plz Aayan , it's really very important.
"They are saying that right now Mr Bakshi is not in Mumbai , he is on a holiday and apparently Mr Bakshi does not answer any calls when on vacation.
"But I need to meet him ,it's really urgent.
"If it is so then you have to accompany me , lets go together meet Mr Bakshi and Mr Sieverth and also all our problem.
And Knowing of the door was heard , Aayan quickly skit under kalpi's bed , just in case it was anyother girl or rector and Sonal entered the room .
"Kallu Aayan aya tha naa , kaya bola vo , jaroo apani assignment karne bola hoga vo , mujhe bhi call kiya tha usne , mene uski assignment karnese mana kadiya , vo ghoomane jaye aur me uska assignment karoo...
"Actually Sonal tujhe shayad Aayan aur mere , hum donoka assignment karna padega .
"What ?
"Haan vo me bhi Aayan ke sat jarahi hun , mujhe bhi kuch Kamm hai , jaroori hai thoda .
"You both r leaving me and going for a trip, not done , I am not doing your assignment.
"Ek kam kar tu bhi chal hum dono ke sath , kya bolti hai ? and Aayan finally came out and asked Sonal to joint them as he knew she won't let them go without her.
"Mujhe bohot sarre kam hai , assignment submit karna hai , exams ke liye padhana hai , par agar tum log itana bol rahe ho to ok chalega mujhe , I will accompany you guys.
"Pata tha mujhe ki tu bhi chalegi , chal abb have to get ready, we are leaving today itself. But Aayan hum jaa kaha raha hai ?
"Jahan Mr Bakshi vacation par gaye hai aur Mr Sieverth aane vale hai .
"Goa , hum Goa ja rahi hai Aayan , OMG kallu hum sab finally Goa ja rahi hai .Sonal was now super excited
"Nahi hum Pune jarahai .
"What Mr Bakshi Pune me Vacation manate hai . Asked Kalpi.
"Haan , aur vo bhi mere resort mai .
"Ohh so we r going to ur resort again. Sonal was a bit bored with that place as the keep visiting it again and again for some work , or party or vacations.
"Yes my resort again , be ready, we r leaving today it self . I will book the tickets.

So why is Raghav visiting Pune , just to run away from chawl matter or something else ?
Plz do tell that all you think about this.

Ok so done with this chapter,
Sorry for so late update but plz bare with me and my mistakes.
Plz do comment and like and plz mention how did you find story till now , and changes to be made , any suggestions plz be free to tell.
I will try to update next chapter soon .

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update just love it plz update soon
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Originally posted by: naharkhan123

Awesome update just love it plz update soon

Thank You for the reply, plz keep reply about the story line , it does help me to write further 😊
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Thank You for the reply, plz keep reply about the story line , it does help me to write further 😊

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