Revenge Chapter 5 updated on page 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: MadhuGupta

Awesome Update . I like . Who is Ray? What is relation between raghav & Ray? Where is kalpi ? Waiting next part .



Thank YOU sO MUCH FOR SUPPORTING , RAY IS SAMMY N MAYA'S 6 MONTH OLD BABY 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Because he likes kalpi so wants live nearest chawl . Waiting next part.

Edited by MadhuGupta - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Superb update he wants to know about kalpi why she is not with her family waiting for next plz update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome dear Story is Progressing good And Kalpana is the mystery behind Raghav staying near Chawl.I think soo ...
A request Chapter thoda sa bada likho plzzz😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update. Raghav wants every information about kapoor's. They are back to india. Waiting for kalpana entry.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: pratibhas5

Awesome dear Story is Progressing good And Kalpana is the mystery behind Raghav staying near Chawl.I think soo ...

A request Chapter thoda sa bada likho plzzz 😉


I will try next time 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It's ok
Happy t help
Nice update
Waiting for more
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 3
Early Morning ,
Prem kapoor's getting to many calls , congratulations calls as all his flats have been sold out within the time of his launch. Everyone including kapoor's thought that the sole reason being Prem . They news of Kapoor construction lates housing project getting a best ever response , all the flats sold out . Well Prem Kapoor's business knowledge shown up. Source told that they soon will come up with something new for the people of Mumbai . Was the headlines of business times ,Though it was neetu who had given a ransom amount for this headlines and she was the hole n only source the article mentioned.
Well Kapoor's were yet to know the secret .
Delhi , Raghav's house
Rags was enjoying his day with Ray and was working only on phone , no personal meeting.
Maya was in India , n had joined the business.
" So Rags did go read this news about Kapoor constructions , it seems they r doing preety will in the business . If this is so , it's gona be quite difficult for you ,I see ? Maya's worry was so right .
"Maya the article is incomplete , did they mention that the flats were bought by customers itself? smirked rags .
"So u say that the news fake , they r lying ?
"No maya the news is true , all the flats are sold out , but who do you think can buy all the flats at the same time. Too costly you see . sarcasm wa just pouring out from rags talk.
This was enough to explain maya the game "Hmmm too costly , but I know someone who can pay it off , well played the first move , but now you have to sell all of these flats.
"That's not a concern , I will surely gain a profit in this deal .
" So u did this to gain profit n make money . Maya just couldn't stop laughing.
The Raghav Singhaniya did all this for profit.
"Maya its not about the profit , I am not leaving any stone unturned , not a single chance to be given to Kapoor's. They have to pay for there dead . This is the revenge and no one will be spared from that ,no mercy no matter what ever I have to do for that , how much far I have to stretch my self. The game is on.
Raghav was very much into this revenge n nothing was going to stop him from that.


Mumbai , kapoor's house.
While Kapoor's were still unaware of all the karma coming back to them Neetu was busy hosting Pakkhi's birthday party.
"Kamla , kal Pakkhi ka birthday hai , aur tumhari chutti , kal aneki koi zarurat nahi hai . Haam kal party manane hamare farmhouse pe jaarahai hai . Aur haan , ye bat na pakkhi ko bataneki koi zarurat nahi hai .
Poor kamla , she had no work to do other than pakkhi n no one to talk other than pakkhi. But orders r orders.


Delhi , Rags house
" I will be leaving for mumbai tomorrow . It's the perfect time .
" Hmmm leaving early morning tomorrow , so that you can attend the birthday party rags .
"sammy you r get better day by day , I am going bez its Pakkhi's birthday but I am not attending the party , I don't go uninvited nor do I party with my enemies.N I am leaving in the evening . I have a really important meeting to be attended I will finish with that one first .
"Off course , it's the important day tomorrow n your presence is valuable .
Sammy did understand but maya " Rags what the meeting about , that too in Delhi , whom r you actually meeting ?
Rags is quite mysterious at times. Different style of working u see.


Next day , Mumbai
At the party pakkhi was very sad that kamla maa didn't turn up , nor in the morning nor is she present for the party . She did call kamla but the calls were not answered. Now pakkhi had lost her control , she was not ready to cut the cake without kamla . And on asking Neetu did confess that she had asked kamla to stay away from pakkhi for the entire day.
With his very confession Pakkhi jusy left the party. Her car speeding , she also tried calling kamla . And eventually the call was answered .
Pakkhi was crying on phone and the kamla heard a loud noise after which phone was disconnected.
Pakkhi met with an accident , no no she is still alive , just hanging to a brach of tree which is dried , with on leaves , weaken n soon to be separated from the tree. And the branch brook off , poor pakkhi could do nothing than yelling for help.
And Than the dashing Rahgav Singhania held his hand to save the girl. He just had landed on ground from his chopper , creating a dusty , strom like environmental which did help pakkhi to have an accident . Most say perfect timing .
He pulled pakkhi on the cleft , made her sure that she was breathing , was trying to calm her , till that time kamla had reached the spot , must say what a timing, as she was informed by sahil kapoor to be there .
Seeing her Rags had to leave , while pakkhi was asking him his name , rags got a bit emotional seeing kamla after such a long time.
Kamla did also check on rags , kon hai ? Pakkhi ke sat kase ?


Raghav finally did succeeded in his first move , after all he did impress pakkhi kapoor .
N got a bit emotional too .
Next he reached was chawl , it was quite dark outside , no lightings , no music , no celebration , chawl was very quite , surprised to see so . People who always scream n shout n celebrate all the time r so quite today. Well he did wait for a long in his car just outside the chawl . He did see kamla returning home alone midnight . Might be leaving pakkhi home she did come back he thought and drove away to his house in mumbai .

Finally chapter 3 is done.
Sorry for my mistakes , spare me.
And the question
What was the important meeting rags was takin about ? Has it something to do with his revenge plans ?
Plz let me know what you all think about it .
And also who r you finding the story , is it interesting or not ?

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update where is kalpi
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very nice update Where is kalpi ? Waiting next .

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