Revenge Chapter 5 updated on page 6

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Revenge
Chapter 1
In US
In an lavish study room , a green board on the wall having photographs of many people all of them candid , real candid as they didn't know they were clicked. A tall , handsome figure looking at those photos and making notes , quite confused scratching his head and muttering to him self zaaldi kar varna aaj to tu gaya , vo pakka "
And suddenly he is interrupted by a husky voice from behind quite loud, dominating and anger "vo pakka kya Sammay , aaj bhi tu apne information ke sat ready nahi hai kya ? Kitne din pehele bola tha ki ye poori info chahiye karke , Itana time nahi hai hamare pass you should have done the homework till now.
"Aacha kam tera , aur homework me karu ! Kyu har time me hi kyu ? Tu kudh karna apana kam Raghav .
"Ok sammy chal abb bata ki tune kitana kam kiya hai , vese dikh raha hai ki kam to tune kiya hai iss barr .
"Dekh Raghav ye kam karna asan hai tha . Pure 4 mahine lage hai ,aur mere 2 trip hogaye India tere iss kam keliye . Bohot sabhal kar karna pada mujhe . Unko bina iss bat ki khabar lagye.
"Dekh start unse karte hai jo tere liye sab se important hai This is Mr Kapoor , tujhe to pata hi hoga. Said sammy pointing to sahil kapoor's photo on green board " ye abbhi vahi ghar me rehete hai with Mrs Kapoor " pointing to her photo .
Well Raghav was not really interested in them even though they were truly important in his plan of REVENGE , he did now how they look like and was not interested in seeing who they look after getting old . So showing quite a disappointment on his face "sammy me janta hu ki ye dono kon hai , time waste ... and he was interrupted by sammy pointing to the young man's photo " Prem Kapoor , he is soon gona enter the real eastate and joint his dads buissness .
" So he haven't jointed yet . No sceams by his name ? Nothing in business till date ? What was he doing till now ?
"MBA from Londan.
" So finally someone to look upon as a challenge haan sammy . Nice , not bad.
" Well not bad is this kapoor's princess too Raghav . he said pointing to pakki's photo " she has really grown up to be a beautiful , rich spoil brat , too difficulty to handle . I think this is gona be more challenging . Hahahhaha . Well sammy couldn't stop laughing out loud .
While Raghav was much busy staring at the pakki's photo. Thinking some think to himself .
"And then your favourite off all Kamla bai , ye abhi bhi kapoor's keyaha kam karte hai .
Raghav became a bit emotional , sammy could clearly see it in his eyes , so wasting no time " Vittal Jadhav , he still has not got any job , poor fellow , and Prakash Jadhav he is working in some IT park as an engineer . Chal atlast ye intro to khatam hogaya na , chal abb sone jate hai , I am sleepy bro , Good Night. Saying so sammy was about to leave the room when he was hit with a paper ball made by Raghav in anger during the intro .
Sammy turned around like abb kya ? And saw a very curious and frowning Raghav , like he was missing something and we was drawn attention by a loud laughter of an 6 months old baby , lying in his baby car . He was laughing as he saw Raghav hitting sammy .Sammy was amused by this while raghav was happy that baby like hitting sammy so he did that again " Hi Ray , you like that right , once more just for u.
" ok Raghav , bass , not in front of ray haan . What's wrong now ? "
" Whats wrong ! First off all you give incoplete info and then u ask that . I told you sammy I want a complete info and photos off all the people related , didn't I ? Its very important to have ...
" Raghav I have given you a complete info ok , this is all that I saw when I went to India and you have it all . That's it I am sleeping now . Anything you need find it you yourself. Chalo Ray time to do nini And sammy left behind a confused raghav .

Sammy kudh India gaya that , so how is that possible ki he miss her , strange? Thought raghav .
While sammy was also thinking that what did he miss this time . He took lot of time , went to India , did all research , clicked all that he saw and still he missed something .
Well did sammy really miss something ? Do mention in your comments beloy and plz give your valuable feed back so that I can make necessary changes. Thank you for reading , liking and commenting.




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Posted: 6 years ago
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Guys can someone plz explain me how to post the chapters in the same message . Do I have to post it as an reply to the very first introduction or something ?
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Posted: 6 years ago
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You go to your first post and click edit .
This way you can edit the title and say which chapter is updated.
Nice story line
Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice start...Raghav wants to know abt kalpi..😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice start continue dear update soon
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Wow another great concept. Very nice start and looking forward for the next chapter
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Ineteresting start... raghav wants to know about kalpi but why kalpi is missing. And who is ray? Update next part soon.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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👏 Awesome dear lovely start...
But who is the Baby...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet1308

You go to your first post and click edit .

This way you can edit the title and say which chapter is updated.
Nice story line
Update soon

Thank You 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: naam11

Ineteresting start... raghav wants to know about kalpi but why kalpi is missing. And who is ray? Update next part soon.

Ray is maya n sammy 6 months old baby 😊. Thanks of you reply .

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