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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 6 years ago

#481

Thank you so much Apu and Taru!

You two never fail to comment..

Glad you'll like it. I will reply in detail soon-ish..

Until then, much love 🤗

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#482

Hey Zoya!

Aapne count down start kar di 😭

Just five more🥺

But This is so dreamy

I love it so much!

Though we need a all Shraman update 😳

I miss reading just them!

First things first!

Eric and Amanda are married

But that also means no more Braemar 😔

I will miss you the most Braemar!

That proposal!

Finally one from Shravan 😳

Forget Sumo... I need this Shravan 😳

Those words... heart felt!

I may be flawed, but, whatever I am, .. whoever I am, I am yours. Yours, body and soul.

Bass! I am a goner! This! 😳

How far have these two come!

Pushkar and Kaira... Yay!

No Preeti... double Yay 😆

Though I thought it was going to be Aditya and Kaira somehow... no offence to Divya 😆

Pushkar and Aditya's conversation... is so sweet... so mature.

Ab bass... kiara ki haan ki der hai 😉

Pushkar also didn't like Aditya.

And I am happy again 😆

I love you more pushkar😆

Shravan calling Aditya .. chotte 🤔

Hmm! We need to sort this one Shravan!

Only Pushkar should be Chotte.. call him chotu .. If you want 🤣

Again so less of Shraman... kuch toh socho 😳

Though that scene is beautiful!

Emotions so pure!

And since we have three more weddings to plan .. we need to re think about you know what😉

Also we need to negotiate the number of Epilogues now... you can choose any number other than 0-5.😆

Loved reading it!

Don't continue soon!😆

I don't want it to end... 🥱

Apoorva

Edited by akrocks77 - 6 years ago

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: akrocks77
Hey Zoya!
Hey, Apu!
Aapne count down start kar di 😭
Just five more🥺
Yes Ma'am! As promised...
But This is so dreamy
I love it so much!
I'm so glad you felt so...
Though we need a all Shraman update 😳
I miss reading just them!
Hahaha I hear you :D

First things first!
Eric and Amanda are married
Yes, Ma'am!
But that also means no more Braemar 😔
I will miss you the most Braemar!
Aww, baby, it's served its purpose, don't you think.

That proposal!
Finally one from Shravan 😳
Ji! It was long due...
Forget Sumo... I need this Shravan 😳
Hahaha we all want one!
Those words... heart felt!
Yeah!

I may be flawed, but, whatever I am, .. whoever I am, I am yours. Yours, body and soul.

Bass! I am a goner! This! 😳
How far have these two come!
How very far, indeed.

Pushkar and Kaira... Yay!
No Preeti... double Yay 😆
I hated that bimbo 😆
Though I thought it was going to be Aditya and Kaira somehow... no offence to Divya 😆
Hahaha you'll see more of them.. Tying loose ends

Pushkar and Aditya's conversation... is so sweet... so mature.
I know right
Ab bass... kiara ki haan ki der hai 😉
You sure she will say yes?

Pushkar also didn't like Aditya.
And I am happy again 😆
I love you more pushkar😆
Hahaha that poor chap was just hated for no reason, in this series at least.. I was like give him a chance, kya chalu hai?

Shravan calling Aditya .. chotte 🤔
Hmm! We need to sort this one Shravan!
Only Pushkar should be Chotte.. call him chotu .. If you want 🤣
Chottu? Lol, basically its a way of showing he is now legit fam. Pushkar and Adi are the same to Shravan...

Again so less of Shraman... kuch toh socho 😳
Though that scene is beautiful!
Emotions so pure!
I was like aur kitna Romance? Hahahaha They will get enough screen time, don't worry... Just got to wrap some stuff up before that

And since we have three more weddings to plan .. we need to re think about you know what😉
Honestly, I won't be planning three 😆
Also we need to negotiate the number of Epilogues now... you can choose any number other than 0-5.😆
Lol.. how about -1?

Loved reading it!
Don't continue soon!😆
I am planning to continue soon
I don't want it to end... 🥱
Aww man..

Apoorva

@Bold Thanks, love 😳

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#484

Here I am..

And here's my res 😆

Kar du Zoyi? Ijazat hai?

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: Nik03
Here I am..
And here's my res 😆

Kar du Zoyi? Ijazat hai?

Na doon toh kya nahi karegi res?

Aadhe tere res IF kha gaya, baaki maine stories hi move kar di..

Tu rehne de, behen. Tujh se na ho payega 😆

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: orion23
Na doon toh kya nahi karegi res?
Aadhe tere res IF kha gaya, baaki maine stories hi move kar di..
Tu rehne de, behen. Tujh se na ho payega 😆

Kon bola mujhse na ho paayega?

Kon bola? Kon bola?

Apna time aayega..

Mere jaisa shaana laala tujhe na mil paayega..

aayega, apna time aayega 🤣

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: Nik03
Kon bola mujhse na ho paayega?
Kon bola? Kon bola?

Apna time aayega..
Mere jaisa shaana laala tujhe na mil paayega..
aayega, apna time aayega 🤣

Rehne de!

Bombay Hindi terko waise hi suite nahi karti 😆

Tera time aaya aur mai dekhi, chal kamti ho idhar se ...

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#488

Ohh! I love this one!

I love every thing about it!

But I love you more for writing this!

This is so beautiful... love that you potray here for all three of them.. their insecurities, selflessnes, helplessness and how they are both hopeful and hopeless all at once.

It's just out of the world ❤️

This one touches somewhere very deep😳

I am left speechless!

I feel so strongly for all 6 of them ...it's like I can relate to all their inhibitions.

This is one of the best in Alfaaz 😳

I will come back to this one in evening... but I just had to tell you this I couldn't wait till then.

Love you! And thank you for coming up with this beauty!

You will be missed Alfaaz!❤️

Edited by akrocks77 - 6 years ago

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Tarushi

@tarushiv

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#489

I think that the beauty of such pieces is that they are supposed to end at some time or another , leaving with a sense of longingness which adds up to their beauty.

Love in reality always can't be sort of fairy tale , right? There are things which we all goes through mainly our insecurities which often leads us to a path which forces us to question ourselves that are we really made for this.

You'll be missed Alfaaz ❤️