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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

Rehne de!
Kyu? Why why?
Bombay Hindi terko waise hi suite nahi karti šŸ˜†
Arey I know that.. tabhi use karti
Uske haath pair todne mein bada Maza aata hai šŸ˜†
Tera time aaya aur mai dekhi, chal kamti ho idhar se ...
Kab aaya? Kab dekha? Baat karte ho! Huh!
And nahi hoti kamti.. Kya Kar loge?

@Bold *shows Battisi*

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Posted: 6 years ago
Ek nikka sa comment..
I really loved how you've shown three love stories at their different stages in a single update without overdoing it or something. It was perfect and beautifully Penned down.
I felt all the emotions in there.
Pushkar-Kiara: Finally he got the love of his life. I loved Kiara and yes she's way better than Preeti. šŸ˜›

Aditya-Divya: Oh boy! I freaking loved him. And yes you did exactly that , jitna show mein giraya tha usko utna hi uthaya hai aapne.
I understand Divya's reluctance n he r insecurities as well as I felt hurt cos of Adi.
He's hurt, so am I. Karo uska kuch ab.

ShraMan- These two are ā¤ļø
Bas! Khatam!

I Love Love Loved it!
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Posted: 6 years ago
Apu, Taru, Nik šŸ¤—
Thanks, lovelies.
I shall respond soon!
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Posted: 6 years ago

The contents of this thread have been moved to Wattpad. Please consider this an apology and see you all on Wattpad!

Edited by orion23 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Hello!

Though terribly late.. sorry again ... but here I am for Ba- Dastoor... madly in love with Shravan and his life. ā˜ŗļø

This endearment of his kinda grew on me... he is so sweet and loving... Shravan!ā¤ļø

First things first.... Aditya is getting cuter day by day... Damn! If only he wasn't Aditya by name... šŸ˜‹ In love with his character growth... Divya is lucky girl.

That whole conversation between those two.. so mature and heartfelt... it shows Shravan's growth as a person and also the strength of Shraman's own relationship.

"That fighting with the one you love for your love." .... beautiful!ā¤ļø

"One who loves a body is a boy. One who loves a soul is a man."

"You have, in every cell of my body"

Damn! There goes my heart! Shravan you are precious. ā¤ļø

That sipping on you part and the rest of the conversation though ... not at all subtle ... poor Sumoā˜ŗļøšŸ¤£

Shravan pampering and helping this version of Aditya would be such an endearing sight... these two are just so adorable.... especially that intentionally bringing up the seriousness of his accident by Shravan... and also that subtle taunt to Divya... our man is on missionsmiley39

"You cannot fly with one wing anyway!"

Ohh! Just take my heart already... Infact that whole big para of his after this too is just so heartfelt. ā¤ļø

Pushkar and Kiara are also so adorable... Pushkar and food is still a better love storyšŸ˜‰... Bhukkad Pushkar reminds me of this another beautiful story... šŸ˜†

Although pushkie always remember she have an extremely comfortable sofašŸ˜›šŸ˜‰

You know this story started with me being in love with Sumo like madly in love... I was so in awe of her and her strength... but your Shravan grew on me... with all his endearments, not so subtle humour and his never ending love for her. He is just so imperfectly perfect... infact they both are.... Shraman

How am I ever gonna live without them?🄺 I will miss you Alfaaz!ā¤ļø

Also there is this little something I have had in mind for quite some time now... and as we are already down to #4 ... so I might as well just say it. I don't know if you remember or not but Shravan used write these diary entries in initial updates as a teenager. So I was just wondering that in your head is he still writing it?

If yes... I would love to read a part of it if possible.... any thing will do. I loved them... they were really essence of Alfaaz initially... no pressure at all though... only if possible.

Loving it much more every single time.

Apoorva

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Posted: 5 years ago

@Apu Itna amazing reply... I will have to go back and re-read what I wrote cause mujhe yaad nahi :p Lol. I'll respond to this and hopefully soon publish something...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

@Apu Itna amazing reply... I will have to go back and re-read what I wrote cause mujhe yaad nahi :p Lol. I'll respond to this and hopefully soon publish something...

Hehe.. take your time!😳

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hello ji

Edited by Nik03 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Reply karna Bada tedha kaam ho Gaya hai idhar

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Posted: 5 years ago

I am here.. in an hour or two ...okay Alfaaz!?😳

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