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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you so very much guys for all the appreciation!
Means the world to me!
I'll reply individually eventually!
For now take 🤗
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UNRESSED on 28
Sorry for being late...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Unresed @ pg 26
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P.S Thoda mujhse likha nahi jaata 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Unresed on Pg 26
*Chullu bhar pani detected *
Acha chalti hoon duaon me yaad rakhna
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this story is awesome m enjoying
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
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Unres
Resh 🤣
Prii😆

Tum dono😆

Zo 🤗
Prii 🤗
Firse late

Waise toh it's okay par har baar agar Neil Caffery ko la rahi hai toh bolte reh sorry😆
For 2mins I was like Preeti school bhi jati ?😆 fir yaad aaya abhi they are all kids . school me nail art classes kaha hoti 🤣
LMAO! 😆 Pehle normal hi thi, achanak pagla gayi 🤣
She bunked her classes to talk to him ..haye dil le liya ladki ne!
Haina!
Aww Sumo is thinking he might be busy aur idhar toh janab ka khasta haal hai
Haan haal hai khasta 😆

My gosh! That GIF🤣 I think I'm giving you the GIF award😆
Queen Elizabeth 😆
I love him already
Me too😳
He got him Indian food in a storm ❤️
#FriendshipGoals
Ji haina ... Mera Eric hai, pyaar toh hona hi tha aapko😉
Yeyy ! Sumo finally sent the email
Yes!

Amanda 🤣
Woh bimbo hai garib bechari... But a darling, you'll see her around...
She would have sung him Lullabies 😲
Bache ki jaan logi kya ?
Plan toh yehi tha 😆
"Aww.. That's so sweet of you! Would you also bathe and clothe him?"


Haye Barun❤️
Mujhe Shravan wo Akbar jaise dikh rha, jaha kaneez usko nahla rahi 🤣
Shit! I imagined! 🤣 Kahan se laati hai tu yeh sab 😆
Aww poor boy, he thinks he isn't good enough for a girl 😔
Kya Sumo tune kya kar dala
Ab kar diya hai toh prayashchit bhi wohi karegi... Uska mail jab next update mai padhegi na toh Ganga naha legi tu 😆
Dear diary 💔
Update ekdam dhinchak !
I love the Dear Diary bits! It gives me a chance to write Shravan's inner turmoil. Something that was lost like a black hole on the show...

Baal ki dukan 🤣
Precap - Ek number !!
Haina!
He's gonna check his email
Oh you have no idea!
Ab intezar nahi hoga Malik ...jaldi update karna please 😳
Koshish yehi rahegi...

Haye! Tu jaan leneka plan banayi hai kya? Itne saare feels wale bande ek saath
Loads of love 🤗
Loads of love back!

Prii my love, you rock!
❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

Lovely update. Again...learnt a new word. ..

Hey Worm! Thank you... I'm glad you guys are enjoying the Urdu titles😛
Both miss each other...one is guilty...the other feels unwanted.
Not for too much longer...
Eric is a good friend.
Oh he is!
Amanda stay away.. .. shravan ka sumo and sumo ka shravan. No third angle allowed.
Hahaha.. poor girl.. She simply has dibs.. Aur koi angle nahi hai😆
And yes precap was tantalizing. ...wonder if shravan will respond or dither for a few updates.
Well, you'll see. Wait to be surprised. 😉
You are building this very well.
Thank you so much!
Thanks for the pm
You're welcome!

@Bold Thanks a ton!
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Originally posted by: sapphire3

Unresed on Pg 26
*Chullu bhar pani detected *
Acha chalti hoon duaon me yaad rakhna

I'm laughing too hard at this😆
Chullu bhar paani detected 🤣

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Wo jo kehtey they intezaar fitrat nahi unki,,muntazir-e-jawaab-e-yaar baithey hain..!

Wo jo sochtey hain zamane ko khwahish nahi unki,,bekhabar-e- khat-e-yaar baithey hain..!
Oh my God! Like literally! Please keep writing!
Mehfil loot li bhai 👏

Given she didn't want to be the first to call, but she could be the first to apologize... sumo is sumo..! ! She plays in her own way..! #MyApology... #MyRules. .!
Always bro! Always!😎

But before that she would gorge on the delicious Sev ki Sabzi, her Lamboo's favourite... how sweet is that..! #MissingMuch #Deriving Power... #Vibes..!
I wonder actually, 10 years how did they manage? Matlab who can stay away for that long? I don't understand...

Shravan is sick and away from home! #AbondonedChild #Heartbreaking..!
I feel that's the most difficult time for a person, unwell and away..

Eric!! Eric!! No less than Queen Elizabeth ! !🤗
Masala Magic!!
He's a darling haina!
There is to food that became 'ghar ka khana',,by a friend who turned into family! ! #Cheers!
Amen to that!

That ten year gap,,was never explored in the show... it's really nice to get a sneak peek of it..! It's not just one experience which made them what they are..,rather there must have been many with one taking the centre stage..!
Word! And that's simply why I'm doing this FF... Cause I wanted to know how it would have been... Greedy much 😆

While sumo was in conversation with her diety this song played in my head..!

Oh hell no! Sanam Puri! And this song! I just love it!

Dear diary! !
Low se bhi low self esteem! ! 🥺
Near dead self esteem...

Nanu n him in ur series are just the love! !
Haina.. Yey!

Precap nahi teaser hai ye! !
Call a rose by any name, it remains just that, a rose 😉

Open the email,,recover a friend !! It's worth the effort !!😳
Well put 😳
These cliffhangers! 😲
Maza aa raha hai na?
Mujhe bohot aa ra😆

@Bold Thank you so much Tabi!
I just love your couplets in every comment 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Safire

Fantastic writing.

Hey Saf! Thank you😛
I was a little bit disappointed to know that Shravan didn't respond to Sumo's mail...
Yes cause he hadn't seen it at all...
Let me see if he responds after retrieving his password..
Well word of caution, this is my Shravan, brace yourself 😉
Will be waiting eagerly for your next update.
Me too!

Thank you so very much Saf!
🤗

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