Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 25

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

It's awesome, I'm waiting for your story everytime. This update make me feel sad😭 at the end but precap...😃 Its awesome😉. Thank you😊

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

Res..
Unress..

Love can not be measured how long you wait .It's about how well you understand WHY you are waiting
So true! 😳
Suman bumped school so that she can talk to Shravan and ask his forgiveness for the mistakes that she made but he didn't call back (we know the reason but she didn't)..
Nah she didn't. It wouldn't be wrong on her part to assume he didn't forgive her or didn't care.
Time can heal a broken heart, but it can also break a waiting heart

Word!
If they don't talk quickly then surely very quickly sumo's waiting heart can be broken
Though suman is heartbroken that he didn't call back but she thought he might be busy the reason for which he didn't call back..

Her wait is going to be slightly longer buddy...
Eric is such a sweetheart and true friend of Shravan. Oh God Eric's Hindi 😃..
Shravan's monologue is right, Eric is such a good friend.. .

He's a darling...
Sumo's talking to herself is so much fun 😃.. Finally she showed the courage and sent the Email, ab jo hoga dekha jayega 😉

Ji bilkul...
Amanda is having a crush on Shravan now 😉 The way She said how she will take care of Shravan is probably showing her innocent nature her..

You got that right! You're one of the very few that got her character correctly😛
Eric realising Shravan how good he is and any girl can have crush on him..
How quickly and easily nanu knew in few seconds that he was not well.. Beautiful Shravan and nanu convo. .

Haina...
Another beautiful diary scene..

Shukriya!
Never give up on something you really want it's difficult to wait but it's worse to regret
I think sumo will do that...

Amen!

Precap is a cliff hanger, excited to know what will happen

Me too!
Thanks for pm
You're welcome...
Love
Smita

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

awesome..

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

RES
~~~~
UNRESS
OMG yaha bhi RES...
Di I think you shold add the No.1 late latif award in the awards...That will make justice to me😆
Nahi I think Resh would beat you to it😆 Ab tak res hai uska😉

Really I am so so sorry for not unressing this magical piece...

Oh that's okay hon... No issues!
Loved the title❤️
Me too😛

Sumo bunked school because he was gonna callSho shweet...

Haina...
Indian food in foreignIts logging in on the forum after a looong time😆
Well that's a perfect analogy!

Eric is such a chum😃

Oh yes he is...

So finally Sumo hit SEND...!!!!Thank god she did...warna maine khud jaake email bhejna tha...😆
Hahaha😆

She was so desperate to see the reply...Awesomely penned that para di...👏
Thank you...

Amanda🤣
Fed him read him sung lullabies oh my...!!!shez sho sho cute...par afsoos...😆

Ji afsoos😆 Afsoos hi rahega...

Would you also bathe and clothe him?"

🤣🤣Eric is tooo 🤣🤣

He's the man😆

Shravan's cough🤣🤣

Typically him...

Shravan's thinking...Its true yaar...Good Guy's definition according to him😆So now he'll start thinking that hez handsome and then come back being our bigger shravan...😛

Hell yeh!😎

nanu and shravan convo❤️

Baes for life!

Last para...Yaar sumo ke liye mujhe bhi bohot rona aa raha hai...Shravan bhi na...uska account stalk karta tah na...inn 2 dino mey kyu nahi kiya??😭

In my story he hasn't stalked her profile yet... Lost password you see...

All in all di mindblowing update...!!!mai toh aapki fan hu😳😳

Shukriya aapka bohot😳

Sorry for late unressing...

No issues...

Love,

ANU😃

Usne call kiya aur Sumo ko icecream yaad aaya...😭😭Kyu di aapne aisa kara??😭

Because I'm a sadist😆

Originally posted by: vimikrao

A friend in need a friend indeed this proverb suits Eric well.. he is such a darling.

Friends are so important na...

😛 Shravan was unwell but nobody is there for him all alone. 😭 but Eric was there for him he brought Indian food for him.

Finally someone that cares...

Sumo finally sent mail & waiting for his response but her phooti kismat. 😡 Shravan forgot his password let's see after retrieving his password will he respond to it or not. 😲..

For that we will have to wait and see😉

Amanda stay away from Shravan don't u dare come closer to him. 😡 he is taken. 😉 but I know Shravan won't agree for this. 😉

She's a darling and will be a constant.. You'll like her eventually...

Sumo couldn't get chance to speak to Shravan & she is upset.. 😭 ..

Emotional update.. 😭 thanks for PM
You're welcome...
Vinu

Originally posted by: priety.priti

Zoya Zoya Zoya mera sashtang pranam sewwkar karo pahale to kash koi emoticon hota yaha esake liye

Ji pranam swikaar samjho, with or without the emoticon 😆

man i was wating till ene ke ab padhega tab padhega but shucks and now you put preview man curiositywill eat me whole man better you give next update soon 😔

Sorry to have kept you waiting...

Eric is such a sweaty i loved him really...true frien for shravu he owe him ❤️🤗

Yup!

and blushing amanda ☺️ aww ready to help him in bathe and clothe too and shravu expression 🤣🤪

Hahahahaha 😆

booker prize milna chahiye aur bhi ek award milna chahiye despo ka school bunk kar diya baat karne ke chakkar me aur jab call aaya to gayab😆😲

LOL.. true that!

poor girl waiting for his reply and dont how many days she need to wait and her mail will remain unattended in mailbox 😭

Umm... quite a few bro...

so zoyi i think you are on the way of completing your PHD in cliffhangering ppl bcoz masters to already complete kar liya hai😉

Hahahaha... Shukriya!

awesome amazing mind blowing update "muntazir" ka pura meaning samaz me aaya in this update 👏

I'm glad I could dirve the point home...

you are a gem yar ⭐️

Thanks!

love

priti

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

amazing update

absolutely loved it

continue soon

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Zoya ...I am absolutely in love with the way Sumo waits for his call, missing her school, her appetite and her peace in this process.

That one moment where she was ready to take the phone to the school as well, showed her desperation.

It very much did... She was desperate...

That one moment when she made this solemn promise to God that this time when she gets him back she is going to value him as he deserves to be valued, showed her determination.

And she will make good of her promise...

That one moment when she finally sent him that mail after hundreds of thoughts just so that she gets him to forgive her, showed her dedication.

Haina..

And that one moment when she assumed that he read her mail and still didn't forgive her , showed her despair.

Well, of the many things that can ruin relations, "Galat fehmi" tops the list...

Beautiful is the word. Loved Eric here. I am so glad that at this point Shravan has someone who's just there for him. At times presence is enough, purpose need not be defined.

I know right!

Shravan has girls falling for him and still doesn't consider himself worthy of all that attention just because Sumo didn't find him good enough. He is so far away, but he still belongs to her. Melting moment!!

Haina! Always and forever ❤️

'Ahsaas e Mohabbat ke liye bas itna hi kaafi hai,

Tere bagair bhi hum Tere hi rehte hain.'

Wah wah! Kya likha hai... Keep these coming man!

Another touching update makes its way to us from your pen, and boy I loved it. .and how😳

I'm so glad you liked it so!

Absolutely arresting piece Zoya!!

Shukriya🤗

P.S.- You asked me last time if I wrote those lines in my last reply. I didn't , all these lines are the ones I hear at different times and places and just stay with me 😃

Brilliant stuff! Keep procuring it! 😉