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Posted: 8 years ago

#201

hello!!

how are you Zo di?

pata hai iss wale chapter name ka meaning kahan se pata chala darkhuaast gaana hai na shivaay ka uske lyrics main hai: par then when i looked under the photo pata chala main galat thi

muntazir and mutassir are different😛 (wait and influenced respectively😛)

man! i must say, amazing urdu you write.👏

coming to the chapter

this was so nice!!

aww! my poor Sumo, nanaji ka phone le kar ghum rahi hai😃

par sumo, sumo hi rahegi school nahi jaana madam ko🤣

Shravan malhotra is running into temperature😲, but then eric's a life saver. sacchi when you stay abroad, you literally yearn for home made food, mil jaaye to gareemat hoti hai.😆

i am developing a liking towards eric, he shoved amanda off Shravan...good boy😳 bathe him, clothe him, damn amanda what are you even dreaming about, don't you even dare😡

shravan malhotra doesn't think himself to be worth the attraction...don't worry darling you are gonna realize how amazing you are once Sumo tells you😆

your Sumo has some sense in her brain...finally she posted the mail

but why is not Shravan checking his id, last update main he was waiting for her mail and ab jab bhej di hai, check hi nahi kar raha...ironic😭

i'm excited 'bout the pre-cap

that means they'll be talking😛😆

chalo then

will be waiting for the next update😃

love

arpita

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#202

Oh, another thing I forgot to mention -

I freaking love Eric! ❤️

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Was excited for this update, now I am double excited for the next one!😆 And this precap!Arghhh! 😕Hope I could ask you to update the next chapter, now like nowww! But!!! Okay, koi nai, will wait (sulking)! 😕

Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#204

Jahanpanah 😊

Each update you make, makes me sigh in the end as your words are so carefully picked and placed to bring out pure feelings. Signature Zoyaness!!

Har alfaaz me dabi ek alag hi uljhan ho jaise,

jazbaat jo lagte saade hain par tees hai jo mehekti rehti hai.

One is bound in guilt awaiting her freedom locked in a response. And one is bound by insecurities awaiting to be free from it but one who can do so is too far out of reach now.

In spite of the underlying complications of how they both are trying to put behind their problems you maintain their character true to the original. Teenage impatient, still a bit bossy but lonely Sumo. And the original nerd inside. Upar se kitna bhi tough bane, badal jaaye par hai wahi.

Loved Erics Gaar ka kaana !! and yeah his Accent adds to the fun 😆

Shravan and Nanu...❤️ an elder to confide into but not everything. How parent like😊

Awaiting eagerly for that password to reset. 😆

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Harshi Arora

@Harshi_ta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#205

It's awesome, I'm waiting for your story everytime. This update make me feel sad😭 at the end but precap...😃 Its awesome😉. Thank you😊

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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Res..
Unress..

Love can not be measured how long you wait .It's about how well you understand WHY you are waiting

Suman bumped school so that she can talk to Shravan and ask his forgiveness for the mistakes that she made but he didn't call back (we know the reason but she didn't)..

Time can heal a broken heart, but it can also break a waiting heart
If they don't talk quickly then surely very quickly sumo's waiting heart can be broken
Though suman is heartbroken that he didn't call back but she thought he might be busy the reason for which he didn't call back..
Eric is such a sweetheart and true friend of Shravan. Oh God Eric's Hindi 😃..
Shravan's monologue is right, Eric is such a good friend.. .
Sumo's talking to herself is so much fun 😃.. Finally she showed the courage and sent the Email, ab jo hoga dekha jayega 😉
Amanda is having a crush on Shravan now 😉 The way She said how she will take care of Shravan is probably showing her innocent nature her..
Eric realising Shravan how good he is and any girl can have crush on him..
How quickly and easily nanu knew in few seconds that he was not well.. Beautiful Shravan and nanu convo. .
Another beautiful diary scene..
Never give up on something you really want it's difficult to wait but it's worse to regret
I think sumo will do that... Precap is a cliff hanger, excited to know what will happen
Thanks for pm

Love
Smita

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#207

RES
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UNRESS
OMG yaha bhi RES...
Di I think you shold add the No.1 late latif award in the awards...That will make justice to me😆
Really I am so so sorry for not unressing this magical piece...
Loved the title❤️
Sumo bunked school because he was gonna callSho shweet...
Indian food in foreignIts logging in on the forum after a looong time😆
Eric is such a chum😃
So finally Sumo hit SEND...!!!!Thank god she did...warna maine khud jaake email bhejna tha...😆
She was so desperate to see the reply...Awesomely penned that para di...👏
Amanda🤣
Fed him read him sung lullabies oh my...!!!shez sho sho cute...par afsoos...😆

Would you also bathe and clothe him?"
🤣🤣Eric is tooo 🤣🤣

Shravan's cough🤣🤣

Shravan's thinking...Its true yaar...Good Guy's definition according to him😆So now he'll start thinking that hez handsome and then come back being our bigger shravan...😛

nanu and shravan convo❤️

Last para...Yaar sumo ke liye mujhe bhi bohot rona aa raha hai...Shravan bhi na...uska account stalk karta tah na...inn 2 dino mey kyu nahi kiya??😭

All in all di mindblowing update...!!!mai toh aapki fan hu😳😳

Sorry for late unressing...

Love,

ANU😃

Usne call kiya aur Sumo ko icecream yaad aaya...😭😭Kyu di aapne aisa kara??😭

Edited by anukulgr8 - 8 years ago

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#208

A friend in need a friend indeed this proverb suits Eric well.. he is such a darling. 😛 Shravan was unwell but nobody is there for him all alone. 😭 but Eric was there for him he brought Indian food for him. Sumo finally sent mail & waiting for his response but her phooti kismat. 😡 Shravan forgot his password let's see after retrieving his password will he respond to it or not. 😲.. Amanda stay away from Shravan don't u dare come closer to him. 😡 he is taken. 😉 but I know Shravan won't agree for this. 😉 Sumo couldn't get chance to speak to Shravan & she is upset.. 😭 ..

Emotional update.. 😭 thanks for PM

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#209

Zoya Zoya Zoya mera sashtang pranam sewwkar karo pahale to kash koi emoticon hota yaha esake liye

man i was wating till ene ke ab padhega tab padhega but shucks and now you put preview man curiositywill eat me whole man better you give next update soon 😔

Eric is such a sweaty i loved him really...true frien for shravu he owe him ❤️🤗

and blushing amanda ☺️ aww ready to help him in bathe and clothe too and shravu expression 🤣🤪

booker prize milna chahiye aur bhi ek award milna chahiye despo ka school bunk kar diya baat karne ke chakkar me aur jab call aaya to gayab😆😲

poor girl waiting for his reply and dont how many days she need to wait and her mail will remain unattended in mailbox 😭

so zoyi i think you are on the way of completing your PHD in cliffhangering ppl bcoz masters to already complete kar liya hai😉

awesome amazing mind blowing update "muntazir" ka pura meaning samaz me aaya in this update 👏

you are a gem yar ⭐️

love

priti