Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 24

Originally posted by: Nik03

Res 😳
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Unres
Zealous si Zoya..🤗
Nikka sa Nik 🤗

Muntazir...Awaiting..❤️
I didnt knew the meaning...N am glad I have learnt one 😃

I'm glad you did😛

Perfect title bro... ⭐️
Thank you!

The way you have written Sumo 's wait is just awesome ya...That eagerness, anxiety, excitement, sadness, dissapointment...Everything is brilliently penned down 👏

I'm glad you liked it so!

How Sumo waited n waited n waited...Was dissaponted n sad but she stuck to that one hope that he'll reply soon..Beautifully written !!❤️
Poor baby..!!

Both our poor babies 😳

Shukriya!

Sumo n cooking... ⭐️
Her escape from harsh realities of life... ❤️
Hainaaa...

I so loved that she thought about him there...if he gets to eat home food there or not 😊
Sev ki sabzi...Shtavan's fav and now Sumo's fav!!
Shravan in Sumo n Sumo in Shravan... ⭐️
Yeh baat! ❤️

Ill Shravan...Away from home..away from homely feeling...My heart goes out to him ❤️
But here came ERIC!!.. 😃
Shravan's angel send by Zoya... 😆
Hahaha yes! And that angel is here to stay!😃

What a lively character ...❤️
He bought Shravan Indian food that too in storm...Aww!!
Such a true frien he is...Am loving your Eric Zoya..❤️
How I wish he was mine😆 He's pretty perfect!😉😉

Shravan ate Ghar ka khaana or should I say Garr ka Kaana.. 😆
Loads of more firangi hindi in store😆

No one did that for me back home!... 😕
This one line gives many feels!!
He was always neglected, this one bit conveys it...

Can imagine Sumo in her typical dramebaaz avtaar...Talking to almighty 😆
This is Sumo thing... 😆
Oh hell yeh!

Her contemplation over sending email...!!
Sumo, who never hesitated over anything or everything related to Shravan, her chashmish is now thinking so hard just about an email..whether to send him or not...Its just a matter of time!!

Iss baar badi galti thi na, toh thoda soch li woh😳

Her hope n her dissapointment...Her wait!!
Beautifully penned down dear..❤️
Thank you!

Kar dega na tu shaam tak reply?...
Loved it ya...❤️
So them na

Amanda n Eric... 😆
She was hiting on Shravan 😲
Kamal ho gaya nahi😆

Eric was so damn right...Why wont a girl be interested in Shravan?
Eric's words made Shravan think about himself ...To make him realise that he's not worthless shit!!
good guys are used and thrown like you were..... 😭
You were Shravan...You were by everyone!!

WORD!

Soo loved Nanu-Shravan talk...❤️
The bond that they share is unique n rare... ⭐️
Absolutely is bro!

Haan mere bacche so ja....For some reasons..I loved it!!❤️ ❤️
There is different kind of affection in it...Dil se direct waali ❤️
It's pure love, that one little mere bacche, put so much into perspective haina...

Shravan's talk with his diary...My one of the fav ❤️
Its necessory for his self confidence n self love...!!

That's why it's there, self-realization ⭐️

Sumo missed his call... 😕
Loved the way Nanu tried pacifying her...❤️
This man is soo sweet.. 😳
I loved him and still do!

Dissapointed, dejected, sad Sumo... 😭
Loved loved Sumo's talk with Shravan's photo...❤️
It gave a feel like shes talking to Shravan himself!!
Yey!!! So happy you felt it!

Precap...oh my my!!
Zooyyyaaa!!

Nikaaa!!!!
Password bhool gaya 😲
Ji😆

Lagta hai Shravan ko sach mein almonds ki sakht zaroorat hai!! 😆
Bohot zyada...
All in all ..awesome n brillient work bro... 👏
Thank you so much hon!

Super exited for next one now...
Makes two!

Thanks for the pm n cont soon 😊
You're welcome! And sure thing!
Loads n Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik ❤️

Originally posted by: amlavs

Res

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Oh wow... another lovely update..

Shukriya😛

Finally sumo sent mail to shravan...

Yo!

Poor shravan missing" gharka kaana " ..he is not well too..

Eric is such a good friend...

That he is...

Oh so shravan has (girl) fan following but he didn't consider him worthy...oh oh...

It's only a matter of time he sees himself for who he is...

Will shravan reply or not??? Biting my nails and waiting...

Well, I'll give it to you straight, he won't reply to the mail 😆

Oops!

Plz update soon...

Will try!

Love.,.

LavSriya

Originally posted by: crazyparrot

Amazing Update!👏

Thank you Parrot😛

Poor sumo waiting for shravan's call!

Yes, inteha ho gayi intezaar ki...

Eric is so sweet!

Haina!

Finally sumo sent her mail!

Ji...

Got tears at the end😭

Aww man.. Just a little bit longer 😛

Shravan gonna read her mail, what will happen?? Update soonish!

I shall try my best!

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

😕 What was the need to deliver that precap in the end????

I'll be honest with you Lara, two words, one need, Sadistic Pleasure 🤣

Now, I'll have to wait for the next updt!

Haw! You wouldn't wait otherwise is it?

How could even forget the password??🤪

I do😆 So my Shravan does!😉

Now the poor... poor Email is waiting for him too. 😭😭

The wait might just be longer than suggested by the teaser 😆

(sighs) But I guess Sumo kinda deserves it.

You are just as sadistic as me!

Redemption and all.😈

That was the whole point of password recovery, buys time 🤪

And you - Zoya girl, you have mastered in the arts of cliffhangers.

👏👏👏 🥳

I've learnt from the very best (Read you)🤗

The title was apt too.

Shukriya!

Updt soon now, will be eagerly waiting.

Soon now...

Love,

Lara.

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Oh, another thing I forgot to mention -

I freaking love Eric! ❤️

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

hello!!

Hey Arpi!

how are you Zo di?

I'm good.. how are you?

pata hai iss wale chapter name ka meaning kahan se pata chala darkhuaast gaana hai na shivaay ka uske lyrics main hai: par then when i looked under the photo pata chala main galat thi

muntazir and mutassir are different😛 (wait and influenced respectively😛)

Yes they are...

man! i must say, amazing urdu you write.👏

Thanks hon 😳

coming to the chapter

this was so nice!!

Shukriya!

aww! my poor Sumo, nanaji ka phone le kar ghum rahi hai😃

Haan bechari ...

par sumo, sumo hi rahegi school nahi jaana madam ko🤣

The core traits never change 😆

Shravan malhotra is running into temperature😲, but then eric's a life saver. sacchi when you stay abroad, you literally yearn for home made food, mil jaaye to gareemat hoti hai.😆

Kasam se bro! Home sickness at another level!

i am developing a liking towards eric, he shoved amanda off Shravan...good boy😳 bathe him, clothe him, damn amanda what are you even dreaming about, don't you even dare😡

He's Shravan's rock and Amanda is comic timing... Aur koi scene nahi hai😆

shravan malhotra doesn't think himself to be worth the attraction...don't worry darling you are gonna realize how amazing you are once Sumo tells you😆

Umm... he might just figure it out without her saying...

your Sumo has some sense in her brain...finally she posted the mail

but why is not Shravan checking his id, last update main he was waiting for her mail and ab jab bhej di hai, check hi nahi kar raha...ironic😭

Hahaha... Bhool chuka hai woh iss liye😆

i'm excited 'bout the pre-cap

Yo!

that means they'll be talking😛😆

Who knows?

chalo then

will be waiting for the next update😃

Me too!

love

arpita

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold Thank you so much Tabi!

My pleasure! 😊

I just love your couplets in every comment 🤗

Exclusive edition's! !🤗

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Was excited for this update, now I am double excited for the next one!😆 And this precap!Arghhh! 😕Hope I could ask you to update the next chapter, now like nowww! But!!! Okay, koi nai, will wait (sulking)! 😕

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Jahanpanah 😊

Ji kahiye 😆

Each update you make, makes me sigh in the end as your words are so carefully picked and placed to bring out pure feelings. Signature Zoyaness!!

Hilaa! Thank you ya... Signature Zoyaness, I like the term

Har alfaaz me dabi ek alag hi uljhan ho jaise,

jazbaat jo lagte saade hain par tees hai jo mehekti rehti hai.

Kya baat keh di👏

One is bound in guilt awaiting her freedom locked in a response. And one is bound by insecurities awaiting to be free from it but one who can do so is too far out of reach now.

Is he? I have my doubts 😉

In spite of the underlying complications of how they both are trying to put behind their problems you maintain their character true to the original. Teenage impatient, still a bit bossy but lonely Sumo. And the original nerd inside. Upar se kitna bhi tough bane, badal jaaye par hai wahi.

Ekdam correct. And thank you...

Loved Erics Gaar ka kaana !! and yeah his Accent adds to the fun 😆

Lots more accent hindi to come😃

Shravan and Nanu...❤️ an elder to confide into but not everything. How parent like😊

I love that man! He's a darling...

Awaiting eagerly for that password to reset. 😆

Mai bhi😆