Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 22

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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya ...I am absolutely in love with the way Sumo waits for his call, missing her school, her appetite and her peace in this process.
That one moment where she was ready to take the phone to the school as well, showed her desperation.

That one moment when she made this solemn promise to God that this time when she gets him back she is going to value him as he deserves to be valued, showed her determination.

That one moment when she finally sent him that mail after hundreds of thoughts just so that she gets him to forgive her, showed her dedication.

And that one moment when she assumed that he read her mail and still didn't forgive her , showed her despair.

Beautiful is the word. Loved Eric here. I am so glad that at this point Shravan has someone who's just there for him. At times presence is enough, purpose need not be defined.

Shravan has girls falling for him and still doesn't consider himself worthy of all that attention just because Sumo didn't find him good enough. He is so far away, but he still belongs to her. Melting moment!!

'Ahsaas e Mohabbat ke liye bas itna hi kaafi hai,
Tere bagair bhi hum Tere hi rehte hain.'

Another touching update makes its way to us from your pen, and boy I loved it. .and how😳

Absolutely arresting piece Zoya!!

P.S.- You asked me last time if I wrote those lines in my last reply. I didn't , all these lines are the ones I hear at different times and places and just stay with me 😃

Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing...the story is building up.".waitin for ur next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
hey Zoya,
brilliant update as usual...loved it...u hv ur very special style of writing which keeps anyone just glued in till d end of d chapter...update d next chapter soon...

Rgds

Anuradha
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Posted: 8 years ago
Waiting is a sign of true love and patience. Anyone can say I love you, but not everyone can wait and prove it's true
(True meaning of True love)..

Sumo waiting for Shravan's Phone call but little she know that Shravan is sick after eating idhar udhar ka khanna ( obviously london mai sumo ka khanna toh nahi milega na)..
Sumo made excuse to herself that Shravan might be busy with his study but that's not the case though but she is consoling her own Heart..
Great to have a friend like Eric who went so far to bring "Garr ka Kanna" ( According to Eric) and feed Shravan. .
Actually he is a friend in a need. .
Sumo's talking to herself is really funny 😃 Aakhir kar sumo ne mail bhej diya chalo Aakhir mai madam ne himmat toh dikhayi 😃
Eric making fun of amanda 😉
Eric letting Shravan know how girls will be falling for him but Shravan connect everything to sumo and thinking if sumo didn't find him attractive then no girl can..
Wonderful Shravan and nanaji scene, Kitni asani se nanaji ko patah chala gaya that Shravan is not well. .
if you really love that person, learn to wait. maybe you're not meant to be together today but meant to be in the future.. .

Love
Shrujani
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful chapter..
Eric is such a sweet friend
"Bathe and clothe him" Shravan's reaction at this was hilarious😆
Shravan and nanu's bond❤️
And finally Sumo sent the email but she still have to wait some more😒.. Hope her wait will come to an end soon
So excited to see Shravan's response😃
Edited by Jerry2308 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
beautifully penned.
read all parts in one go...
loved it...
eagerly waiting for next update.
will Shravan reply to Sumo's mail...
Will be waiting
thank you for the wonderful writing...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoyaaa🤗
Muntazir❤️
Omg !!! Thank you so much for this yar
I was really sad when he did not call but after knowing the reason😭😭
She finally mustered up the courage to send the email
this is too good...it's like a dream coming true we all missed the details of the 10 years and by writing this you're making a dream come true 😆😆
Eric is such a sweetheart man! He made him feel loved❤️
And that girl🤣 poor soul she did not know vo sumo k alawa kisi ko ghas nahi dalega🤣
But then he thought himslef incapable of the love😭😭😭 hayeee rula diya😭😭
But the way she waited was
Nanu understood that he wasn't well by just two words..now that's some kind of a bond⭐️
But the last scene...she was so hurt...so dejected😭😭😭
And the precap...made me smile...looks so promising ...please update soon😃
Dolly😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am gonna sit with a cup of coffee and read this ff in one go
😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -AnnieQueen-

I am gonna sit with a cup of coffee and read this ff in one go
😃

Oh my Gosh!
Riyu!
Aj hi yaad kia, and tu aa gayi!
I should have nominated you earlier!
I'm so happy to see you here🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Muntazir.

I see a long update. And how I love it already.😆

Taking an off from school, keeping the mobile continuously with her so that she doesn't miss the call. Muntazir indeed.

Eric is just.❤️ Garr ka kaana. 😆 How cute.

So finally a mail has been sent. Ek kadam toh liya. That one step towards him, not at all easy for the Sumo we know, but for him she took, keeping aside all her ego.😳

Sumo is Shravan's biggest critic. Feeling insecure because he thinks Sumo does not find him appealing.🥺

And then the guy calls and she misses it, yeh intezaar ke pal na jaane kab khatam honge.

Without Shravan everything felt meaningless, everything felt bland and she hated it.

#FeelsWaliLine 😳


Precap. Why Zoya why, it just increases the anxiety level tremendously.

Stupendous Update. ❤️

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