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Posted: 8 years ago
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Resh 🤣

Zo 🤗
Firse late

For 2mins I was like Preeti school bhi jati ?😆 fir yaad aaya abhi they are all kids . school me nail art classes kaha hoti 🤣
She bunked her classes to talk to him ..haye dil le liya ladki ne!
Aww Sumo is thinking he might be busy aur idhar toh janab ka khasta haal hai


Queen Elizabeth 😆
I love him already
He got him Indian food in a storm ❤️
#FriendshipGoals
Yeyy ! Sumo finally sent the email

Amanda 🤣
She would have sung him Lullabies 😲
Bache ki jaan logi kya ?

"Aww.. That's so sweet of you! Would you also bathe and clothe him?"


Mujhe Shravan wo Akbar jaise dikh rha, jaha kaneez usko nahla rahi 🤣
Aww poor boy, he thinks he isn't good enough for a girl 😔
Kya Sumo tune kya kar dala
Dear diary 💔
Update ekdam dhinchak !

Precap - Ek number !!
He's gonna check his email
Ab intezar nahi hoga Malik ...jaldi update karna please 😳

Loads of love 🤗


Edited by sapphire3 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pehle toh sorry
For such a late



Zoya di kya chapter tha
Itne intense ..hii
Aapko toh book lekni chahiya 😳

Love in unconditional in shraman case
Never said anything but is clearly shown and vidible

Sumo is hurt ...her heart is broken
But this is necessary somewhere to realise shravan imprtance
She try every possible way but she is also nervous at the same time
But finally she wrote the mail

Eric is such a true friend
Shravan is poor soul ...he is lonely
Without family and without his sumo
Eric is such sweetheart
But yeh Amada kaha se aa gayi
Aiii shravan is only for sumo

Nanu is understanding person
Ek. Baar mein hi samaj gaye
That shravan is not welll ...awww

Bu awww 😡 shravan forget his password
Ab kya hoga di

Update soon
Waiting for next update

Hug and luv



Luv ya
Tii se tinnna
Edited by Tinna28 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update. Again...learnt a new word. ..
Both miss each other...one is guilty...the other feels unwanted.

Eric is a good friend.

Amanda stay away.. .. shravan ka sumo and sumo ka shravan. No third angle allowed.

And yes precap was tantalizing. ...wonder if shravan will respond or dither for a few updates.

You are building this very well.

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wo jo kehtey they intezaar fitrat nahi unki,,muntazir-e-jawaab-e-yaar baithey hain..!
Wo jo sochtey hain zamane ko khwahish nahi unki,,bekhabar-e- khat-e-yaar baithey hain..!


Given she didn't want to be the first to call, but she could be the first to apologize... sumo is sumo..! ! She plays in her own way..! #MyApology... #MyRules. .!

But before that she would gorge on the delicious Sev ki Sabzi, her Lamboo's favourite... how sweet is that..! #MissingMuch #Deriving Power... #Vibes..!

Shravan is sick and away from home! #AbondonedChild #Heartbreaking..!

Eric!! Eric!! No less than Queen Elizabeth ! !🤗
Masala Magic!!
There is to food that became 'ghar ka khana',,by a friend who turned into family! ! #Cheers!

That ten year gap,,was never explored in the show... it's really nice to get a sneak peek of it..! It's not just one experience which made them what they are..,rather there must have been many with one taking the centre stage..!


While sumo was in conversation with her diety this song played in my head..!

Dear diary! !
Low se bhi low self esteem! ! 🥺

Nanu n him in ur series are just the love! !

Precap nahi teaser hai ye! !
Open the email,,recover a friend !! It's worth the effort !!😳
These cliffhangers! 😲



Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fantastic writing.
I was a little bit disappointed to know that Shravan didn't respond to Sumo's mail...
Let me see if he responds after retrieving his password..
Will be waiting eagerly for your next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Zealous si Zoya..🤗
Muntazir...Awaiting..❤️
I didnt knew the meaning...N am glad I have learnt one 😃
Perfect title bro... ⭐️

The way you have written Sumo 's wait is just awesome ya...That eagerness, anxiety, excitement, sadness, dissapointment...Everything is brilliently penned down 👏

How Sumo waited n waited n waited...Was dissaponted n sad but she stuck to that one hope that he'll reply soon..Beautifully written !!❤️
Poor baby..!!

Sumo n cooking... ⭐️
Her escape from harsh realities of life... ❤️
I so loved that she thought about him there...if he gets to eat home food there or not 😊
Sev ki sabzi...Shtavan's fav and now Sumo's fav!!
Shravan in Sumo n Sumo in Shravan... ⭐️

Ill Shravan...Away from home..away from homely feeling...My heart goes out to him ❤️
But here came ERIC!!.. 😃
Shravan's angel send by Zoya... 😆

What a lively character ...❤️
He bought Shravan Indian food that too in storm...Aww!!
Such a true frien he is...Am loving your Eric Zoya..❤️

Shravan ate Ghar ka khaana or should I say Garr ka Kaana.. 😆
No one did that for me back home!... 😕
This one line gives many feels!!

Can imagine Sumo in her typical dramebaaz avtaar...Talking to almighty 😆
This is Sumo thing... 😆

Her contemplation over sending email...!!
Sumo, who never hesitated over anything or everything related to Shravan, her chashmish is now thinking so hard just about an email..whether to send him or not...Its just a matter of time!!

Her hope n her dissapointment...Her wait!!
Beautifully penned down dear..❤️

Kar dega na tu shaam tak reply?...
Loved it ya...❤️

Amanda n Eric... 😆
She was hiting on Shravan 😲

Eric was so damn right...Why wont a girl be interested in Shravan?
Eric's words made Shravan think about himself ...To make him realise that he's not worthless shit!!
good guys are used and thrown like you were..... 😭
You were Shravan...You were by everyone!!

Soo loved Nanu-Shravan talk...❤️
The bond that they share is unique n rare... ⭐️

Haan mere bacche so ja....For some reasons..I loved it!!❤️ ❤️
There is different kind of affection in it...Dil se direct waali ❤️

Shravan's talk with his diary...My one of the fav ❤️
Its necessory for his self confidence n self love...!!

Sumo missed his call... 😕
Loved the way Nanu tried pacifying her...❤️
This man is soo sweet.. 😳

Dissapointed, dejected, sad Sumo... 😭
Loved loved Sumo's talk with Shravan's photo...❤️
It gave a feel like shes talking to Shravan himself!!

Precap...oh my my!!
Zooyyyaaa!!
Password bhool gaya 😲
Lagta hai Shravan ko sach mein almonds ki sakht zaroorat hai!! 😆

All in all ..awesome n brillient work bro... 👏
Super exited for next one now...
Thanks for the pm n cont soon 😊

Loads n Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik ❤️
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh wow... another lovely update..
Finally sumo sent mail to shravan...
Poor shravan missing" gharka kaana " ..he is not well too..
Eric is such a good friend...
Oh so shravan has (girl) fan following but he didn't consider him worthy...oh oh...
Will shravan reply or not??? Biting my nails and waiting...
Plz update soon...
Love.,.
LavSriya
Edited by amlavs - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing Update!👏
Poor sumo waiting for shravan's call!
Eric is so sweet!
Finally sumo sent her mail!
Got tears at the end😭
Shravan gonna read her mail, what will happen?? Update soonish!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Zoyi 🤗
Ab toh shama maangne mein v sharam aa rhi
*hides face*
Muntazir ❤️
Awaiting for forgiveness, hope to rekindle the lost friendship or for just an assurance if a certain someone can still recognise ur voice ❤️
Beautiful it is 🤗
I really love this sumo🤗
Like u promised, I do feel happy, sad and bad for her 😆
School bunk for shravu 😳

Eric is love ya
Too cute ❤️
He brought him garr ka gaana
Much like sumo. Difference itna k woh khud banati thi.
I m just loving this guy 😳 aur tu v I knw😆

Finally mail bheja sumo ne
Booker nhi Nobel prize hi de de usey 😆

Amanda want to sing lullaby to shravan 🤣

Eric-shravan convo there reminds me so of Harry-Ron

Shravan talking to himself 💔
And that diary note 💔

Sumo missed the call after waiting for so long 😭
Next update pe baat kra dena re.

I m just loving the flow Zoyi 🤗
This is Amazing updates.
Each of the convos are so wonderfully written 👏
Again an amazing amazing work 👏
Ab tere taarif mein sabd kam parne lge hai 😳

Aur precap mere se inspired hai kya 😆
Password bhul gya 😆
But finally humare Eric ji DEVta swarup bnkr humare shravan ji se password retrieve krwake mail padhane ka shubh kaam krenge 🤣
Uske liye unka avi se dhanyabaad 🤣

Can't wait now. Loved it and love u 🤗



Edited by Perpetuity - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
😕 What was the need to deliver that precap in the end????
Now, I'll have to wait for the next updt!
How could even forget the password??🤪
Now the poor... poor Email is waiting for him too. 😭😭

(sighs) But I guess Sumo kinda deserves it.
Redemption and all.😈

And you - Zoya girl, you have mastered in the arts of cliffhangers.
👏👏👏 🥳
The title was apt too.
Updt soon now, will be eagerly waiting.

Love,
Lara.



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