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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
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Zo! Zo! Zo!...i so so so much love u ray...🤗🤗
i am defo not wrong whn i say..U R THE JAAN OF THIS FORUM!!
wht a phenomenal piece!
u knw wht i skipped my dinner to read it n tht time i was hell hungry not for the food but for update😳

Oh God!!stupendous yar..👏👏
Shraman Moments were enchating❤️
Nanuuu❤️...the most adorable person..hero of the day..really he saved the day😆
the revelation was enthralling n so was his outburst👍🏼...broked Shravan into more pieces though...it really hurt seeing him in pain😭
ending was really delightful!
loved it to core..thnks for such a tremendous TS..Zo🤗
U r really making me fall more n more for Shraman..n thnks for tht too😳

Love
Sunain.
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
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Awesome!
...
Unress

How come I forgot this?! 😕

Silly me!! Anyways...

Most of us if not all disliked the track and ShraMan moments around PreeKar wedding!

So coming to the chap...

Yes! THIS is the Shravan Malhotra! The one that we lost somewhere after Madam Sumo started ignoring him...but a man can only take so much

At least Pushkar here showed some concern for his Bhai and Preeti too and even Sumo panicked...!

But somewhere here, I could relate to and empathize with Sumo...how the 'responsible' ones are always made to sacrifice their happiness for the others...

"To him just breathing in the same vicinity as she did was healing."

ShraMan the best-friends didn't loose each other because of ShraMan the 'srar-crossed'(?) lovers...

They 'talked'. That's what's important. Well not technically but still yaa know...

"Sumo, hum dono.. Hum.. humko shabdon ki kabhi zaroorat nahi padi. Bas ek doosre ki aankhe padh liya karte the hum. Tumko kabhi meri aankhon mai tumhare liye py..."

Yes! This is what I was saying!! And a song comes to me that's so apt for this situation...

"Lafzon se tha jo pare
Khaali dil ko jo bhare
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan

Rishte ko kya naam de
Naata yeh jode le
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan

Benaam rishta jo
Bechen karta jo
Hona sake jo bayaan...darmiyaan"
(Lyrics may vary 😕 )

But you get the gist right?! Yaa sooo...

Sumo ab pighal bhi jaao naa...itna mat pareshaan karo hamaare hero ko!!

I too cracked when she said "Dost the..." 😭

What do you want to do to that chep?! Beat the crap outta him?! 😡

RaaMini breakup!! The only one that makes me go ROFL every time I read the various versions of it!! 😆

And HE comes back.

For ones Raghuvar Tiwari is acting like he really was once upon a time an invincible lawyer!! 😛

Aditya!! Chomu ko uska raasta bhi dikha diya!! 😆

Sahi hai Tiwari Ji! #TheBoss

Yes Shravan! Don't let any of them off the hook so easily! They have earned it!

Par taste bhi change ho gaya?! 😕

But I loved your ending!! 😳

Man keep writing like this Zoya!! 🤗

Waiting for more

With lots of ❤️

Cas
Edited by Castile2 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
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Will come back with detailed comment but can't go without shouting out a "WooHoo!" to celebrate the uncorking of the creative spirit... Muah...

Unres...

Zoya, ever think of writing scripts? there'll be takers for sure buddy... 😳
You depict Shravan's turmoil really well (thinking back to the recent few pieces)... there are so many scenes that I wanted shown differently in the show, so I'm glad that you're revisiting them...
My fave bits in the OS were the scene in Sumo's room when Shravan drops by at night... Dost? Tha? That was killer!
Keep writing Zoya... U know you have a fan in me... 😊
Edited by an_chau - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
wow
mind blowing
absolutely brilliant
loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Finally there is a version of shravan I like and it convinced me too. it is natural and logical I never liked rotlu loser shravan.
It was a well wRitter fiction and the focus was to the point. like he went to suman at night was justified, he should confront his childhood friend for what ever she has done to them and suman's answers were unexpected ofcourse but she had to reply like that in order to push him away.

The best thing about it was both the parts were present here. . . Oh waO that was cherry on the top.
I thank you for this and for portraying shravan as a better person I didn't liked a vulnerable huge man. a man should shape his life loser ki tarhan us ki shadi plan kurna was worst according to me. .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Remarkable!!! Outstanding!!!
Seriously, how do you manage to portray emotions/thoughts so beautifully???

Excellent.. Hats off...

Looking forward to reading more of your works...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Zoya...khub likha hhain..just loved it...all emotions so raw it os just too good
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I HAVE TO READ IT

I HAVE TO READ IT

I HAVE TO READ IT

I HAVE TO READ IT


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapphire3

Unressed on pg 1 😛

Prii🤣
Your comments are life bas!
You put Damon and fawad! damn you're good🤗
Shyam manohar jha as well🤣
Bloody hell😆
Too many gifs?
Girl you're the only one that's allowed to put as many as you like!
😆
You missed out klaus..
I belive it's saved for your comment after second read!
Detailed comment later..

@others will reply soonish! thanks!!
Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: orion23


Prii🤣
Your comments are life bas!
You put Damon and fawad! damn you're good🤗
🤗
Shyam manohar jha as well🤣
His expressions are hilarious 🤣 Chomu's expressions would have been the same😆
Bloody hell😆
Too many gifs?
Girl you're the only one that's allowed to put as many as you like!
😆
I know 😆
You missed out klaus..
I belive it's saved for your comment after second read!
Oh yes . I've already put too many today . Klaus in next read ...pinky promise 😳
Detailed comment later..

@others will reply soonish! thanks!!


Bye Zo!!!

Tab tak ke liye isse kam chala 😆

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