Plethora - A ShraMan TS - 27/11

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Akriti12

@Akriti12

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

hey zoya...A big round of applause for u dear..👏

seriously dear, u have left me speechless...don't have perfect words to describe ur awesome imagination power and writting skills...This TS is beyond perfection dear..loved it to the core..❤️

A totally different take on story..."naya chehra" of Shravan malhotra with strength and positivity..:)

loved the way how u described the emotions and inner turmoil of shravan coz of wedding announcement...but the best part was ShraMan's convo..❤️ they are always each other's saviour,knowingly or unknowingly..Shravan's dialogues are so heartbreaking yaar...💔

but at the same time,sumo's pain was much evident unlike in actual episodes..

yaar..thank u for kamini n vandy scenes...bada maza aaya..😉

n then our very own Ramini...tit for tat for ramnath bhaisaab...👍🏼

And Shravan's entry & outburst was really really very painful..but love the way how he stood up for himself this tym..👍🏼

An another round of applause for 2nd part exclusively...👏👏

this part had given me a feel of season 2...A point where each n everything is very much clear to Shravan and a new beginning is expected..

Shravan-Nanu bonding is really awesome...u depicted it very well..👍🏼

loved the way how nanu took matter in his own hands and handled it so well...😊

Shravan's dialogues at this point were so so befitting...loved his take..and that line with nanu"bahut haar liya main,ab nahin"..has shown both his strength & vulnerabillty..👏 for u..

yaar it's so heartbreaking that shravan now don't want to listen anybody's explaination not even of sumo...😭..he really had enough of all..but again shravan is shravan..a man with golden heart..have feelings for all in the deep corner of his heart as nanu said..

sumo-shravan's dinner meet was awesome...to the point...shravan's take for himself is so honest..

he's not denying his love for sumo..but demands time for himself...

Sumo-the fighter got his friend back and 'll soon get his love also..

sumo ka shravan-shravan ki sumo..❤️

Thank u zoya for such a beautiful piece...😊😊.

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

This is the Shravan I wanted in the show
Too good

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

A marvellous piece of writing!!!! shravan's emotions have been brought out so nicely!!And i loved this obstinate ( or maybe I felt that way) Shravan much!!! Thank you so much for this lovely story

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Zoya you can't even imagine how desperate I am to read this. Read a bit. This freaking schedule!😭

Shravan's honesty was killing! OMG!Like he rushed in. Those eyes reading and everything seemed so natural and in the flow! I can see the Beginning of something huge! And that Half confession 💔

Paapi Ramu! Janta Maaf nahi karegi!🤢

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Ammy

@--Amulya--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

WOW Zoyi,

thanx for pm'ing me and this is too good. I just loved it.

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phoenix_edkv

@phoenix_edkv

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Oh god such a big update. Thanks for the pm and sorry for being late. Loved it yaar. Happy wala stories bhi likhna please😊.

Hope your brother is doing good

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sapphire3
Res 😳
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Unres

Zo 🤗
Priii🤗
Your back to back updates are life !!!
To me your comments are life
Trust me I want to feel for sumo ...but I just can't 😆
She made our hero cry 😭
I'm fed up of her family prem ...Barjatya's ki heroine ban Sakti ye 😆
Itna to Dilli ki sardi bhi nahi tadpati jitna ye shravu ko 😆
Kya baat bol di! So true🤣

Cringe? Rather the opposite. He makes me feel things I never knew myself capable of. Disinterested? Yes in his talks, for there is much more I want to do to him.

OMG!!! OHHH! Whoa!! FAWAD!!!!!!! Priii I love you❤️
She needs a shrink asap!!
Oh she damned well dose😆 Paglet!

Baharo phool barsao mere Ramini aye hain *picks thaal and does aarti*
I legit cracked up crazy on this one. ROFL. And no Resh, if you're reading this, I do not need feviquick for the cracks😆 Fevikol hai 😎
Ishhh!!!!! Breakup of the loveliest pair 💔 😭
You ship them harder than you shipped ShraMan right 🤣
Aww Shravan witnessed the high voltage drama.
Oh yeh!
I swear I could imagine camera focussed on their faces n that classic kya kya kya expressions 🤣
Shay! Kuch bhi avaiy! Mai ekta kapoor nahi hoon🤣
Shravu's outburst well written 👏 👏 👏
I so like this new Shravan. This is what he meant by I'm no more a puppet .
Shukriya!!!
Show me to kya kiya
Show ki jitni kam baat ki jaye behtar hai😆 The more we talk the more ideas I'll get, the more I'll write and I can't.. I shouldn't be...🥱
Nanu called Shravan n Sumo ?

Catch..!!! Nanu is ultimate slayster.
Nanu did solid beizzati Chomu 🤪
Chomu chep ushi ke layak tha!
🤣 🤣
Shyam Manohar Jha! The flopest villain in the history of villains! I like! Chamat 🤣
Hey mhara ramji !!!Nimmo bhi aa gyi .
Arey Nimmo hamesha galat jagah galat time pe hi milti hai! Bloody daalmala😆
Too much emotional atyachar.
Pujaniya pitaji 🤣 pehli fursat me nikal li 🤣
I just had to! Starting wala Shravan aaisa hi tha na, sarcastic best!
Everyone giving him gyaan n he be like

Oh my my! Damon! Fits perfectly. Both were like f**k off bro!
Omg!!Let's torture Sumo is still on 😆
Toh aur kya! Itna tadpayi woh! Aaise hi maafi mil jaye😆
You deserve it girl. You literally crushed his heart
She did!
You can forgive someone but forgetting takes time.
Holds true with life as well na. Maaf toh aap phir bhi kar do par woh kasak hamesha ke liye reh jaati hai. Bharoosa kabhi phir poora nahi hota...
I love your write-ups n this one is no exception
Thanks hon!
P.s.- Itni sari gifs laga Di maine 😲 I'm

NOT SORRY 🤣
Best hai tu!!!!!
Aisi pagal ladki to friend banaya h ...Jhel ab🤣
Arey oh! Terko sab allowed hai! Mai kaunsi kam pagal hoon!

@Bold I love you ❤️

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Naamika
First part is just👏
But Where is part 2? i scrolled down but not able to find part 2

Thank you so much!!

Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: reshmanair356
Can I just hug you . ..for writing so beautifully...for being able to pen down emotions so immaculately and for giving such depth to your characters . ..you should seriously consider writing for a profession!!
Hehehe! Thank you so much! 🤗
P.S. - I could not find the second part even after scrolling down. can't wait to read it!!

@Bold Thanks 😛

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: an_chau
Res...

Will come back with detailed comment but can't go without shouting out a "WooHoo!" to celebrate the uncorking of the creative spirit... Muah...

Muah back!!!!

🤗

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