Plethora - A ShraMan TS - 27/11 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Zoya you can't even imagine how desperate I am to read this. Read a bit. This freaking schedule!😭

Arey re! Tujh choti si jaan pe itna pressure😔

Shravan's honesty was killing! OMG!Like he rushed in. Those eyes reading and everything seemed so natural and in the flow! I can see the Beginning of something huge! And that Half confession 💔

I'm glad you're liking it so far!!!!

Paapi Ramu! Janta Maaf nahi karegi!🤢

Never!!!

Originally posted by: --Amulya--

WOW Zoyi,

thanx for pm'ing me and this is too good. I just loved it.

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

Oh god such a big update. Thanks for the pm and sorry for being late. Loved it yaar. Happy wala stories bhi likhna please😊.

Hope your brother is doing good

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Waaaooo beautifulllyyy penned..😆 this was soo good ...i adore our angsty shravu...but i was really sad to see him sad...already kitna kuch saha h bichare ne show me😭😭 ...but you wrote the angry side also do well... his dialogues were just fantabulous. ..."tu akela hi h killed" me...but in last when they met and became friends again...i was like awww finally...sumo was ready to wait for him lifelong...sachcha pyaar...😆😆...thanks for writing...and for pm too...keep writing more

Originally posted by: an_chau

Res...

Will come back with detailed comment but can't go without shouting out a "WooHoo!" to celebrate the uncorking of the creative spirit... Muah...
Pappis and jhappis back at you!

Unres...

Zoya, ever think of writing scripts? there'll be takers for sure buddy... 😳

Hahaha not really.. the thought never crossed my mind 😆

You depict Shravan's turmoil really well (thinking back to the recent few pieces)...

Coming from you this means a lot to me!

there are so many scenes that I wanted shown differently in the show, so I'm glad that you're revisiting them...

I have an entire list bro!

My fave bits in the OS were the scene in Sumo's room when Shravan drops by at night... Dost? Tha? That was killer!

Mine too! Favourite scene!

Keep writing Zoya... U know you have a fan in me... 😊

Arey ya... Thanks so much!! I'm on channe ka jhaad now!😆

Originally posted by: Orion23

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