Plethora - A ShraMan TS - 27/11 - Page 4

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow

mind blowing

absolutely brilliant

loved it

Originally posted by: Uroojj

Finally there is a version of shravan I like and it convinced me too. it is natural and logical I never liked rotlu loser shravan.

I'm glad you think as I do!

It was a well wRitter fiction and the focus was to the point. like he went to suman at night was justified, he should confront his childhood friend for what ever she has done to them and suman's answers were unexpected ofcourse but she had to reply like that in order to push him away.

Shukriya😃

The best thing about it was both the parts were present here. . . Oh waO that was cherry on the top.

I thank you for this and for portraying shravan as a better person I didn't liked a vulnerable huge man. a man should shape his life loser ki tarhan us ki shadi plan kurna was worst according to me. .

Why you're welcome!

Originally posted by: pisces17

Remarkable!!! Outstanding!!!

Seriously, how do you manage to portray emotions/thoughts so beautifully???

I really don't know... I pen my thoughts that's all...

Excellent.. Hats off...

Thank you!!

Looking forward to reading more of your works...

Looking forward to write...

Waaaooo beautifulllyyy penned..😆 this was soo good ...i adore our angsty shravu...but i was really sad to see him sad...already kitna kuch saha h bichare ne show me😭😭 ...but you wrote the angry side also do well... his dialogues were just fantabulous. ..."tu akela hi h killed" me...but in last when they met and became friends again...i was like awww finally...sumo was ready to wait for him lifelong...sachcha pyaar...😆😆...thanks for writing...and for pm too...keep writing more

Originally posted by: Joyness

Zoya...khub likha hhain..just loved it...all emotions so raw it os just too good

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

I HAVE TO READ IT

I HAVE TO READ IT

I HAVE TO READ IT

I HAVE TO READ IT

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Bye Zo!!!

Tab tak ke liye isse kam chala 😆

Nahi le le.. Tu le hi le jaan! Klaus ☺️

Originally posted by: Akriti12

hey zoya...A big round of applause for u dear..👏

Hey Akriti! Thank you!

seriously dear, u have left me speechless...don't have perfect words to describe ur awesome imagination power and writting skills...This TS is beyond perfection dear..loved it to the core..❤️

A totally different take on story..."naya chehra" of Shravan malhotra with strength and positivity..:)

I'm glad you liked it so!!!😛

loved the way how u described the emotions and inner turmoil of shravan coz of wedding announcement...but the best part was ShraMan's convo..❤️ they are always each other's saviour,knowingly or unknowingly..Shravan's dialogues are so heartbreaking yaar...💔

but at the same time,sumo's pain was much evident unlike in actual episodes..

So true, they are for each other...

yaar..thank u for kamini n vandy scenes...bada maza aaya..😉

Hehe.. You're welcome!

n then our very own Ramini...tit for tat for ramnath bhaisaab...👍🏼

Ramu se kaka tak🤣

And Shravan's entry & outburst was really really very painful..but love the way how he stood up for himself this tym..👍🏼

It was high time...

An another round of applause for 2nd part exclusively...👏👏

this part had given me a feel of season 2...A point where each n everything is very much clear to Shravan and a new beginning is expected..

Aww thanks so much!

Shravan-Nanu bonding is really awesome...u depicted it very well..👍🏼

loved the way how nanu took matter in his own hands and handled it so well...😊

Shravan's dialogues at this point were so so befitting...loved his take..and that line with nanu"bahut haar liya main,ab nahin"..has shown both his strength & vulnerabillty..👏 for u..

Shukriya shukriya!

yaar it's so heartbreaking that shravan now don't want to listen anybody's explaination not even of sumo...😭..he really had enough of all..but again shravan is shravan..a man with golden heart..have feelings for all in the deep corner of his heart as nanu said..

He was always very forgiving... Uske jaise bande bante nahi real life mai...

sumo-shravan's dinner meet was awesome...to the point...shravan's take for himself is so honest..

he's not denying his love for sumo..but demands time for himself...

Sumo-the fighter got his friend back and 'll soon get his love also..

sumo ka shravan-shravan ki sumo..❤️

So true!!!

Thank u zoya for such a beautiful piece...😊😊.

You're welcome!!

Originally posted by: Gurveen

This is the Shravan I wanted in the show
Too good

Originally posted by: Safire

A marvellous piece of writing!!!! shravan's emotions have been brought out so nicely!!And i loved this obstinate ( or maybe I felt that way) Shravan much!!! Thank you so much for this lovely story