Aj Jaane Ki Zidd Na Karo - A ShraMan OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Reading for the 4th time in a day !!!!
Woah I'm crazy!! 😆
Aaj fir rone ki tamanna hai 🤣
Meri chunnu munnu si eyes aur choti ho gyi ro ro ke
Haal kaisa hai janab ka? 😆
Okay me signing off!
Shabba khair!!!


Don't be scared of Damon overdose 😆
I promise it is last one 😳

Originally posted by: pal655

Res .wooohooo me first but zoya di it will take time to unress. My exams are there. Hey its raining posts from your side. I will ask you this if you don't mind?? Is your cousin brother better now?. Hope he is! 😊

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
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Unress
Zo🤗

Priii🤗
Yesterday we got a mast fluff Honeymoon update n today a somewhat dark OS
Apni to nikal padi !!!

Agreed! Nikal toh padi😆
I wish malik aap humpe aise hi meherbaan raho 😳
Hahaha...

The title is ❤️ so many feels!!
Oh it damn well is!
All her life she kept running, from fear, from hate, from the love she was deprived, from loneliness, from her own mistakes, she ran.
So true . Poor sumo!! My heart goes out to her
It does, it did for a while on the show too.. Then I was like ja na behen, paka mat😆

Damn!! I was so scared.
It was shravan ?😲
Ishhh!! Shravu turned Anjam wala SRK 😲
Honestly I would have loved to see a mad streak Shravan, Namik would have slayed it!

That's the whole thing you know. Fear or otherwise you just don't know me."
💔💔 poor shravu

I wanted him to be more vocal ya, his woes on the show were reduced to crap...

Ban Jayenge Zehar Peete Peete
Yeh Ashq Jo Peete Ja Rahe Ho

Oh my! Jagjit singh! This is love!!!
With so many emotions buried deep inside he is like a volcano ready to burst any moment
Even when he is hurt he can't see her in pain. This is the shravan we fell in love with ❤️
This is the Shravan that makes me want to write more! What a character ya...
"Aj nahi Sumo! Aj nahi!"
I can bet no one has ever used edkv dialogues so well . You are the best!!!
Thanks ya bro!
Tum thik ho?
Ab thik hoon...
It's a simple sentence having so many feels .
He is her safe haven.
Yaar, all this makes me miss the show much much more!
Yar ye ladki kitna bolti hai !!!
I was like kiss her man or she won't stop playing KBC 😆
Hahaha... Pappi!!
First time I read I was okay but now I can't stop crying .
It's so heart wrenching to see him in pain💔
I don't blame you! I cried writing...

Thank God Sumo decided to be selfish for once than being MAHAN n sacrificing her love n in turn his life.
To hell with everyone without shravan there can be no sumo.
I know right! After a while I felt Sumo nahi Tulsi mayyia hai!😆
The confession ❤️
Much needed na!

You really like Eric , don't you? Uske bina aajkl story puri hi ni hoti 🤣
I wanted to see who this guy was, clearly important for Shravan, hence...

I love that you add light hearted moments in your every story in the end .

Hopeless romantic!
Humor always makes life better , isn't it?😃
Of course!
Oh I forgot to mention the song is perfect .
Thank you for making us cry n smile .

Anytime man! Haq hai tera, farz hai mera😎
N as always you know I loved it ❤️
Goes without saying😳

Will be waiting for the darker version .

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Res.

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Omg !

dark...passionate... and heart stirring !!

Since I stirred your heart, you decided to stir mine! Damon damn it🤪

Shravan had turned his humanity off (or tried to) ,,,and only SUMO could bring him back...!

So true!!

The park happening was damn,,,got a knot in my stomach ...n the confession...uff!! His love is so intense that it is in fact frightening...

It's the junooni kind of love! Make or break...

She chose to open the DOOR OF LIFE for Shravan... surely he would hv died otherwise!

Oh he would have!

So glad u changed the ending...it would hv keep killing otherwise!

Hehe.. I didn't restrain myself though, the not so happy ending is up as well...

And the song...cherry on the cake...😳

Haina!

Super loved it! ❤️

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

like it ... no loved it... 👏 Dark.. gripping ... emptional 😊 and hot😉

Originally posted by: Safire

Zoya,marvellous!!!!!I honestly don't have any words above that!!!! And thank God you didn't give a tragic end to the story...thum bach gayi mujhse!!!!(no offense please!!! Just fun...)