Aj Jaane Ki Zidd Na Karo - A ShraMan OS - Page 20

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jassie_17


You know I'm slowly catching up on ur stories one at a time...
I'm glad you are! 😛
You never fail to bring a smile on my face. Now this is the kind of stuff..which I'd like to call as real stuff which connects with the audience...Some things won't ring a bell to u until long when it's really gone...we were blinded by affection and love we intensely showered upon the show..I know but now I feel there are so many blips that we so often overlooked in our love for EDKV...thanks for this shot Zoya!!
Aww I'm glad you liked it so! Thank you so very much! 😳
The dialogues were intense and really relatable...there was so much Shravan truly intended to pour out but he was never given a true chance in life. Through this medium, I see him wavering and finally reconnecting with his Sumo, pouring out his crushed hopes, his eternal unresolved feelings for Sumo let out in the open. His character had so much of unexplored depth which you breathed life into.
That's so nice of you to say!
Shravan indeed had a lot of unrequited love...
It's sad the makes chose the conventional path of butchering the mail lead...
The death was a defining moment of his life. All his life he had been contemplating of going far away from Sumo,not expressing his true self. In the end, his wish came true in the most unlikeliest form but it was in the reverse, bringing both Sumo and Shravan to the realization that their love story was a success. Death was away means of uniting them, relieving both of them of any more painful torments!!!
So very well put Jas!
Brilliant stuff 👏
You should consider writing!
Cheers,
Jassie

Thank you so much Jas for the brilliant comment!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Gosh Zoya! That was such a beautiful story. The sad one got me into tears, and mind you! I don't cry all that easily. You're right. Life is so unpredictable. The last part reminded me of the final scene in Ghajini. So touching. I have happy "sad" tears in my eyes, right now. You write so well and you know it. I don't have anything else to say. I need to recover.
Nuts
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Gosh Zoya! That was such a beautiful story.

Thank you Nuts!!!
The sad one got me into tears, and mind you! I don't cry all that easily.
Well apologies to have made you cry but I will take this as a compliment 😉
You're right. Life is so unpredictable. The last part reminded me of the final scene in Ghajini. So touching. I have happy "sad" tears in my eyes, right now.
Shukriya!
You write so well and you know it. I don't have anything else to say. I need to recover.
Thanks hon!
Nuts

@Bold Nuts 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Highly emotional 👏
Speechless dear especially confrontation part 👏

Write more
Eagerly waiting

Maria 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wat n OS 😳
Rula diya 😭
Wat an heart wrenching OS 💔🥺

But we have to face it
Life is full of both Happy and Sad ending

Well said well executed 👏

Keep writing more

Maria 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NiMikFan

Highly emotional 👏

Speechless dear especially confrontation part 👏

Write more
Eagerly waiting

Maria 🤗

Thank you so very much Maria!
I'm glad you liked it..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NiMikFan

Wat n OS 😳

Thank you!
Rula diya 😭
Sowwiii...
Wat an heart wrenching OS 💔🥺
It was a bit too melancholy...
But we have to face it
Life is full of both Happy and Sad ending
Haina...
Well said well executed 👏
Thank you!
Keep writing more
Sure...
Maria 🤗

Thanks so much Maria 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ShaanuH

Loved both of the endings!!!

It is awesome

Hey there...
So good to hear from you!
Thank you so much!
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Posted: 8 years ago
A lottt 🤗

Originally posted by: orion23

Thank you so very much Maria!
I'm glad you liked it..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Waiting

Originally posted by: orion23

Thanks so much Maria 🤗

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