Aj Jaane Ki Zidd Na Karo - A ShraMan OS - Page 8

Originally posted by: Akriti12

hey zoya..another bang on update...👏👏

totally loved it...😊

detail wala comment next week..abhi exams hai..😭

bye bye..😊

Originally posted by: arshuaar

marvelous as well heart wrenching...
loved it...
beautifully written...

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Amazing update..👏Aapse toh updates ki baarish ho rahi hai lagta hai...

Hehehe... Ya well best escape route...
Title was so cute...I was studying..par title dekh kar raha hi nahi gaya...😆

Aww man, disturb kar diya maine...
truly marvelous...Par no sad ending ha..😳

Originally posted by: sapphire3

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Okay I was going to re read it later at night n then unres my comment but the impatient me won't wait
N LADY BOND(you know who 😆) was cooking in the kitchen so how could I miss this golden opportunity 🤣
Clear coast is to be made the best of!! Good job baitu!

Tissues to pehli bar padh ke hi khatm ho gye ...ab? 🥱
Ab rumaal le le, aur kya! Kuch bhi...

Now change the Tatasky channel no. 809 😆
Lol😆
Let's come to the update
Yes let's!!
Coming Home was a Mistake !!
#TheVampireDiaries
Damn it! You just had to!!!!
Zo don't kill me for bringing this *hides face*
I couldn't help 😆
Kill you? The hell would I do without you bro!
Poor shravan maybe if he stayed in London he would have been 0.1% less hurt
But his heart his life was here in India

Agreed...


Damon's love was crazy but then so was Shravan's😆
Seeing her name how worried he was . How can someone love so much?

He was dying inside but all he cared was if she was in some trouble . This man is a Gem ❤️
This man is beyond love ya! Such people are nearly impossible to find...
Tum ruk jao jaate jaate, sajhde mai jhuk jaaon.."

Sumo ko chodo malik ye @mehboobkenaam aap ke sajhde me jhuk gya !!!
Hatt pagal.. Gale lag🤗

You add Zoya's effect( I think it should be added in physics textbooks...what say??) to edkv dialogues .
Hahaha.. Idk why you say this.. It's literally the same dialogue...
Sumo said I love you !!!! 🤪 *nonstop khushi me aansoo*

Hahhaha.. Fuzool ek duje ke waaste, she didn't even say I love you on the show... CVs ne bada wala banaya 🤣
Haye aaj to Rapti me baadh aa jayegi 😲 😆
Ab yaha ganga kaha se laun? 😆
Shit😆
ACCIDENT!!!!!!😲
Nooo!!!! 😭 😭
Damn!! Why is fate so cruel?
Cause it just is...

They were going to get their happily ever after n then this... 😭 😭
Last time I read i stopped right here. I thought maybe this time it would hurt less
But no ...it still hurts like hell!!!! 💔
It kills so much that I haven't read it after posting...

"Aur mai tumhare, hamesha. *hiss* Jab bhi thandi hawa tumhare baalon ko sehlaye, samjh lena mai hoon. Jab bhi barish ki boon tumhe chooaye, ah.. samjh lena mai hoon. Jab dhoop kuch zyada tez ho, samjh lena mai hoon. Jab mujhe mehsoos karna chaho, apne dil par haath rakhna, dhadkano mai mai hi miloonga."

I wish I could hug you in real but ...so sending you a virtual hug 🤗
You slayed it bro!!!!!

Thanks my love! Hugs back!
You are the best dialogue writer!!! Add this category to the next award post 😳
Hahaha, then it would give people a chance to say I'm rigging it🤣 category rakhoon hi iss liye ke mai jeetoon😆

Kismat ko mat rona Sumo, woh jo dikha jaye, usko bata dena tum meri Sumo ho. Kismat can't break you. You're stronger than that.."
Shravan Jaan le le tu humari 😭
One of these days le hi lega!

"I love kids! Have at least three..."
Arey! Ab mere toh ho nahi sakte." He let out a pained laugh. "Toh tumhare sahi

My weak heart can't take it more 💔
Neither could mine. I can't tell you how many times I just left the laptop and walked off, I just couldn't write... But then the story had to be told...

Sumo, I can't see... Mujhe kuch dikhaye nahi de raha..."



Shravan aankhen band kar lo, mai wahin hoon, darna mat. Ab koi dard koi takleef tumko nahi chooegi. We will have three kids, we will be happy, you will be with us, and jab mai thak jaaon mujhe apne paas bula lena please. Bulaoge na?"

Mai khud aaonga tumhe lene.."
😭 😭 😭
You do know you dialogues are killer !! I used to whistle at every dialogue
But today you deserve *izzat wala salute*
I'm so so proud of you😃
These were the most difficult set of dialogues I've ever written. Rote rote, cause it's impossible not to sit and imagine Shravan like that.. I'm glad I could do justice and not go overboard or not convey the point...
Aman , Ammar, Ammara cute names ❤️
As promised he is always with her. Kabhi roshni, kabhi Hawa ka jhonka, kabhi barish like boond ban ke.
True love I believe, never ever dies!
You are my Nicholas Sparks /John green ❤️
Arey! Itna bhi sar pe mat chada behen!

Itni der se type Kar Rahi, do I need to tell how much I loved it ???

No you don't, it's beyond evident😆
Now my lacrimal glands need a rest . Becharo to raat me fir se mehnat Karni hai 😆
Lacrimal glands 😆 ROFL. Your scientific references are the best!!

Bye !!!!!
Take care!!!!!!

You too!
Oh did I tell you I love you? You know that❤️

Of course!

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Loved both the versions of the OS ❤️

Originally posted by: sptrno

This a bit different from your other writings but still so beautiful & emotional love it hun...

Originally posted by: bmegha

you made me cry by writing this story, so please don't write a sad story its request otherwise its a beautiful story but i like happy ending.

and seriously your a good writer you write fabulously story.

Originally posted by: Safire

Not so happy ending!!!!

That was it!!!! Zoya,you marvelled it👏 This one was way more beautiful than the happy ending one!!! most emotional!!! Usually i don't cry while reading, but today you get the credit for making me cry!!!!!

Originally posted by: Nik03

When i see ur update , i was in dilemma whether to read it or not coz am very sensitive n emotional...but then i was like no will read it as i dont want to miss ur writting
N damn!!!!u made me cry literally 😭
Apologies...

Even though shravan was dead in d end of story but still i felt like he was there in every scene with his sumo 😕 ...
Cause he was! True love never dies...

i cant n havent read a sad story before coz i cant handle it...but i really loved this one👍🏼
Loved ur note at d end..sooo true 😊
Superb!!! 👏
Thank you so much!

A big hug 🤗
Hugs back!

Love
Nik

Originally posted by: vimikrao

lovely OS Zoya...
yesterday one OS & today another one...if we get daily like this we r the most happiest reader of forum...

in the show after this bachelor party Shravan has came know that Nirmala is Aditya's foster mother...but here we got something different here Shraman's confession was superb...

keep writing