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Sareeta

@sareeta

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#51

@Aarti - Muskaan's effect!!! I see , I see... main bhi acchi bacchi hoon haar! Aaj come hell or high waters, asthma ya migraine... will fight them all and finish this story jus phaaaaaar ya!

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Aarti

@..Aarti..

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#52

@ sareeta...hell or high water is fine...don't push the asthma and migraine...

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Sareena

@Sanaya_86

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#53

Amazing..is all i can say..i know tht ur creative mind needs rest but when r u updating the next part?? 😆
plzzzzzzzzz update soon*hands joined-on my knees* 😳

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MrsKaranGrover

@MrsKaranGrover

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#54

Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! 😳 di 😳 ...u knw u create such a beautfiul essence in ur posts that ive started to read it from the beginning! 😉 😳 ...mwahhhhh! 😳

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Gina Karthik

@ginak

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#55

Awesome. The description in the oceanside part, one almost feels oneself at the oceanside feeling the breeze and watching the sun go down with the waves crashing on the rocks.

It is like a story with scenes flashing by.

The narrative style is nice and easy, very intimate.

Liked the easygoing but warm relationship between the characters, the concern for her on the doctors side and his effort to get her wish fulfilled. The way he enjoys her liveliness, her joie de vivre is nice.

and then the Suspense is thrilling but killing........

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Sareena

@Sanaya_86

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#56

u made my day!!
BEAUTIFUL!!MUAAAH! 🤗

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Gina Karthik

@ginak

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#57

The last part put up is touching. You feel like reaching out and ruffling her fringes yourself.

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Sareena

@Sanaya_86

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#58

u know Sareeta..i just want to come there n ruffle ur fringes rite now..LOVED IT!!!
im taken aback by ur narration..EXCELLENT!! 🤗

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Gina Karthik

@ginak

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#59

Hi Sareeta jaan 🤗 loved it. So sweet 😃. The girl is really cute 😊. Dr. Armaan is so hawt 😍 hai mein mar jawan! He is so caring and cute na. He is a sweetheart❤️. Thank you for writing on my sweetheart 😳 😳. Vaise so long as he is just treating Niha I am fine with it 😉Warna Woh sirf mera hai you see 😳 😃.

I just loved the story, so cute and sweet (I shud also get the fringes done if he likes them so much btw hai hai 😳!

Great effort Sareeta 👏 👏. I love the way you write. So beautiful. the story is so perfect 👏😃 👏[:D/] 🥳

Waiting to read more on my hottie Armaan 😍 .....Haai he is sumun I love so much. 😍 😳😳. Hinal bachke rehna.... Tumhare Armaan ab mere kabze mein. ❤️Mein use uda ley jaoongi!😳😉

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Gina Karthik

@ginak

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#60

Very nice and easy style. Warm, cozy relationship between a caring doctor and his carefree patient with the underlying gravity subtly potrayed. Liked the way her fears are revealed and how she is comforted when he is around. The trust is brought out so well. The doctor-patient relation as well as the affection. Great job.

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