SS - Eyes of the River...(Wrapped Up!) - Page 8

Awesome again. There you see me blinking to avoid the afternoon sun glinting from the ocean water and breathing the salty air deep in and hearing the roar of the waves in the distance. Perfect setting for Armaan and his Pari.

@Gina: Thank you. I never realized that my comments might prejudice other ppl to think in that direction as well. I will definitely take care in the future to relay my thoughts via PM instead.

Originally posted by: nureat01

@Gina: Thank you. I never realized that my comments might prejudice other ppl to think in that direction as well. I will definitely take care in the future to relay my thoughts via PM instead.

Thank you for understanding my viewpoint and being such a good sport!

i beg you please contiue
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz 😆

.....And its a wrap!!!

Am sorry for the delay and my apologies for keeping ya'll waiting...

Typo errors being edited, do bear with me... Oh the woes of a wandering mind and weak hands and a tired brain!😆

-Sareeta

hi
ohhhhhhhhhhh that was so sweet i loved it 👏 well done that was the best ff it was so emotional and touching it made me feel so real its a real point of view i really thing it was great 😳
i hope you make more fanics of peoples point of view, that was the best ever
😉 swansea 😉

Just finished reading it..
will comment later.. Gotta restore my pc rite now!

hey sareeta just caught up with the story and i just loved its really a fab story and really superbly written........... 👏
u really deserve this applause i was really felt tat i was kinda of reading a poetic explanation of events........ 😃 😃 😃
the story is fab and dying to know wat happens next.......... 😆 😆
i will be waiting for u to update it.......... 😉 😉

Hi! Awesome as usual.

Just wanted to say the Armaan potrayed in your SS reminded me of this song:

When you're weary
Feeling small
When tears are in your eyes
I will dry them all

I'm on your side

When times get rough
And friends just can't be found
Like a bridge over troubled water
I will lay me down
Like a bridge over troubled water
I will lay me down

When you're down and out
When you're on the street
When evening falls so hard
I will comfort you

I'll take your part
When darkness comes
And pain is all around
Like a bridge over troubled water
I will lay me down
Like a bridge over troubled water
I will lay me down

Sail on Silver Girl,
Sail on by
Your time has come to shine
All your dreams are on their way

See how they shine
If you need a friend
I'm sailing right behind
Like a bridge over troubled water
I will ease your mind
Like a bridge over troubled water
I will ease your mind

Like a bridge over troubled waters by Simon and Garfunkel.

Originally posted by: vaarti

glad u took my idea about giving the readers a vote on which ending to use....its a popular technique and always makes the reader feel valued!!

Aarti, Thank you soooo much for helping me out on that confusion. Most people sent in their vote or preference via PM and incidentally, their preference was the same as mine and I stuck to my original theme and the ending as well...

And yeah, I do understand the bit about the reader being valued...

Thank you sooooo much!!!