SS - Eyes of the River...(Wrapped Up!) - Page 4

@All - First part of the story has been finally updated...

The story has been long pending to be posted, but I guess... I felt it right today to finally put it. I only put up part 1 as yet, coz based on your reactions, I will put up the rest of it...coz I happened to pen two different endings... and well... popular choice wins doesnt it! 😉

Sorry for the delay and my apologies , for keeping this pending so long...

Itz rocking. When are you updating it 😃

Itz rocking. When are you updating it 😃

sareeta di..........meri khwahish aapne poori ki dhanyawaad n kissie...............

after seeing gina di's post i wanna sing this ong for first part

Itz rocking
yaara first part that rocking!!!!!!!!!! 😉

Sareeta, that was just beautiful!! 👏 👏 👏

I just LOVE the way you describe the little details, and the intimacy that you create among your characters...I find it truly unique!! And I don't know if I'm always looking for it and that's why I see it, or maybe it's just my imagination...but could see glimpses of you in this one as well for some reason. Could be that I'm totally off as usual😆. Either way, I LOVED it! Can't WAIT to read the next part!!

Thank you everyone for taking time to comment...

Part 2 has been updated...

are u kidding me???? what is this a form of new found torture??? put all of it up now!!! or be prepared to face the worst of my wrath!!!! in my most terrorizing voice.....

glad u took my idea about giving the readers a vote on which ending to use....its a popular technique and always makes the reader feel valued!!

Sareeta, LOVED part 2 as well!! The girl has such an adorable charm to her!! I find myself smiling and awwing while reading...and now waiting with bated breath for the next part as well! 😃

Originally posted by: vaarti

are u kidding me???? what is this a form of new found torture??? put all of it up now!!! or be prepared to face the worst of my wrath!!!! in my most terrorizing voice.....

glad u took my idea about giving the readers a vote on which ending to use....its a popular technique and always makes the reader feel valued!!

Yeah your idea really helped me decide what to do , with the two versions I had... I was quite troubled... in my head.... abt what to do....

Thank you sooooooooo much!!!!

nice concept sareeta...beautifully written...how many more parts to it? n wen will ya continue?