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Aarti

@..Aarti..

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#41

kataraa kataraa miltee hai
kataraa kataraa jeene do
Zindagee hai, behne do
pyaasee hoon main, pyaasee rehne do
rehne do naa.. ..

putting son to bed, if i don't see this completed by the time i return....hell hath no fury!!!

Edited by vaarti - 17 years ago

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Gina Karthik

@ginak

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#42

Is pyaase ko paani kab milega 😊

Edited by ginak - 17 years ago

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Aarti

@..Aarti..

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#43

gina do me a favour...please...since you are in the same city and all...can u get someone to go over to sareeta's and whack her torturing us like this???

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Sareeta

@sareeta

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#44

Aaarti: Muahahahahhahha!!! I am stepping out for a while... and now... Part 5 is updated!!!

Aapko sataane mein bada mazaa aa raha hai aaj!!! I cant believe the great Aarti is acutally waiting helplessly for the next update... wo bhi from me!!!

Oh blessed is this day... !!!

Accha main baahar jaa rahi hoon... 2 ghante mein will be back!!!

Gina Ji: Update kar diya hai and you said you love the suspense... toh ye lo... aur suspense isssspecially phaaaaaaaaaaaar you!

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Gina Karthik

@ginak

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#45

Inteha ho gayee intezaar ki, par kya karen majboor hai! You know inclement weather and all, not good for health! and then we have the goons lined up too!!

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Aarti

@..Aarti..

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#46

the choicest galis spewing outta my mouth now!!

gina....what to do???

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Sareena

@Sanaya_86

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#47

oki question:have i missed anything before this..is this the whole thing u've wrtten so far??

Sareeta dear,,ur too gud at this..i was feeling a bit low today for some stupid readons n i alwayz disconnect myself frm evryone n connect myself wid sumthing only im interested in..ur ff made me do it..i have my headphones on wid highest volume possible..u wo'nt believe it but i do this twirl thing n the way u wrote it just brought a smile to me..i could sumhow relate to the girl's character..not totally ofcourse..i dunno if im making any sense 😕 😳
Loved it sweety...plz do'nt take long to update now..will be waiting for it anxiously!! 😊

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Aarti

@..Aarti..

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#48

yaar hua nahin abhi tak??? am waiting for all of it so i can read it at one go!!

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Sareeta

@sareeta

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#49

Aarti: I didnt want to put it up it all of it was over... I jus happened to add in afew things again impromptu and was editing when I had requesting pouring for a quick update so I jus obliged.

Am sorry... I wanted to hold on till I finished it , to update it in one go!