ff:Only Mine Part 21 pg 46(08/07/2017) - Page 23

WOW!! wonderful updates ...loved them dear...

Lol im sooo sorry for commenting late. Im sure you feel like killing me but i know you wont as you are the best sis 😳 i'll stop blabbering and come to the updates. I know you already know what i'll say but i'll say this as many times as i can. The updates were absolutely amazing. I loved them to bits and pieces they were amazing. Everything was written beautifully. It had every emotion from love to guilt, betrayal and what not. You did a fabulous job. Thumbs up. I have no words to tell you how much i enjoyed reading all three chapters. The first part of part 13 was beautiful. It was such a sweet scene. From the part where manyata walked out of the hospital like a robot to her convo with vijay, everything was written perfectly. The rollercoaster of emotions was displayed brilliantly. The bond manyata and vijay share is sooo nice. Loved how vijay consoled manyata. He is such a caring brother. Now coming to Uday and manyata's scene, as usual i loved it. I could imagine this scene esp the part where uday was circling her. I feel bad for manyata. Shes soo guilty and it can be seen by her apology. I found it funny how uday said are you done? Poor manyata. She'll have a hard time seeking forgiveness. Overall you totally nailed this part. I hope uday forgives her soon. Hes not wrong in his place. But manyata does deserve her a chance. But make her work for this apology and show how sorry she is. Now coming to the hospital room scene. That was also fabulous. it was one of my fav parts as manyata proved to be a true friend. She didnt save raj although she loved him soo much. The convo of raj and manyata was simply mindblowing. Im starting to hate raj even more now. I hate his guts. That guy isnt even guilty. He deserves a slap from manyata. Manyata gave him a good piece of her mind. Hes soo disgusting. Manyata is a bomb. Loved how she answered back to him. Poor girl. I feel soo bad for her. I hope shes able to overcome this. She needs uday right now 😆 but the hottie is busy ignoring her.
Chapter 14 and 15 were also amazing. Everything about this chapter was very nice. Vijay is soo understanding. Its good how didnt tell brij the whole truth. Raj is such an idiot. Im hating him to the core. Happy he got arrested. He deserves to rot in jail. Uday is sooo stubborn. Im glad rajveer is trying to knock some sense into him. I know Uday is hurt but he should forgive manyata. The scene of rajveer and Uday was very nice. I love their friendship. The temple scene was one of the best. Manyata is leaving no chance to seek forgiveness. Loved everything she said to Uday. Rajveer is really naughty. I seriously love this guy now. Im glad manyata told unnati. That whole scene was superb. Unnati is such a sweetheart. Shes soo understanding. Manyata blamed her bro and she knew this since a year but didnt say anything. Thats soo sweet of her. Loved how shes supporting and helping manyata. The last scene of rajveer- manyata- unnati was awesome. It was really sweet. I hope rajveer is able to do something. These three idiots will make great partners in crime. Overall loved the updates sooo much. Thank you for such a terrific gift. Love you.

Hey love your 2 updates
Very good
When will the next updates been

Hey Preya
I am back
I read the chappys from 9 to 15
And they are awesome
Finally sach samne aa gaya
I hope Uday jaldi manyata ko maaf karde
I am looking forward to ki Manyata Uday se maafi lene ke liye kya kya karegi
And what will raj do next
Update soon
And thanks for the uninterruped PMs

I just read all the chapters in one go and there is only one thing that I have to say... I am in love with this story 😳 seriously everything is just amazing...
pls pls pls do pm me next time you update

Hey di, how you? 😊

HEYYY SONALI DIII HOWS U..😊 WELLL DII I WANNA ASK THAT WHEN R U UPDATING CHAPTER 16... PLZZZ UPDATEEE PLZ... AND HOW MUCH U WILL KEPT US WAITING... 😔 DIII REALLY MISSED UR STORY PLZZZ UPDATEE...

sonali when u gonna update 😭