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I'm sorry for keeping u all waiting but right now I'm really busy as my other grandma is in hospital as she has a heart problem... and I'll be going today to see wt the docs say... she is getting too much back pains and belly aches so my times goes in looking after her... im sorry for not commenting on anyone updates yet but promise to read it soon and will try to update soon
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uday and manyata were at a party... uday was busy talking with some ppl while manyata was standing alone in a corner moving her gaze around the hall and also kept glancing in udays direction... some guy came to her asking for a dance and she declined feeling uncomfortable because of the way he was looking at her ...

man: come on beautiful one dance wont harm u he said sipping a glass of whisky and looking at manyata from head to toe making her uncomfortable.

Manyata: i said I don't want to dance so please don't force me said moving away from the guy a little and kept looking in udays direction but he was busy talking to others. But when she was busy looking at uday she didn't notice the guy come even closer to her and held her hand.

man: if u don't want to dance we can go somewhere else he said holding her hands tightly and dragged her away from the hall and taking her into another room While manyata was trying free herself but culdnt as the person was strong and kept looking at uday but no luck.


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Manyata: so it means u forgive me.

Rajveer: I guess so... friends? he said forwarding his hands.

Manyata: no she said smacking his hands playfully

Unnati: manayata?

Manyata: unnati I was always friends with rajveer its just that I came back to india due to pia and lost contact with him... I never had any problems with u rajveer.

Rajveer: haan but I did end the friendship from my side so friends again? He said forwarding his hands again... Manyata smiled and shook his hands

Jagat: what r u guys talking about he asked loudly... the three looked ahead to see j and jagat looking at them curiously.

Manyata: nothing just became friends with rajveer.

Meanwhile at the office uday was in his cabin but he was not able to concentrate as he was remembering what manyata said to him at the hospital yesterday and what she said to him today at the temple. His heart was telling him to forgive manyata but his mind was against it

Uday to himself: I don't know what to do for a sec I did feel like forgiving her but then her bitter words keep coming back to me... how could she blame me for something like that... yes I did flirt with girls but I would never take advantage of them in the wrong way... no I am not going to forgive u manyata not so easily.

Later on vijay came into manyata room with his phone and he looked at manyata before speaking

Vijay: manyata I just received a call from the police station and they told me that the police in paris arrested raj and now ... before he could continue manyata completed his sentence

Manyata: and now the police over here has arrested him. Vijay looked at manyata and caressed manyata hair before leaving her room while manyata looked on remembering pias word about wt raj did to her.

Around 18:30pm

At the singh mansion vasu had already came back with shanti long time ago but jagat, unnati and rajveer had stayed back with manyata and also uday and giriraj had come back from office.

Uday: mom where is rajveer, chotti and jagat

Vasu: beta they stayed back with manyata... but they should be coming soon.

Shanti: giriraj I think u should let uday have some days off from work so that even he could spend some time with manyata... what do u think vasu

Vasu: absolutely right otherwise bechari manyata has to wait for her husband attention like me.

Giri: ma I always tell uday to take some days off but he doesn't what can I do... and vasu ji I always give u attention he said looking at vasu lovingly... vasu gave a shy smile while shanti was trying to stop herself from laughing... she turned to uday smiling and saw that he was busy on his phone

Shanti: have a look at this here we r talking about uday thinking that he is listening to us but no he is busy on his phone... she then snatched the phone of uday and that's when she got his attention.

Uday: dadi please give me my phone back... I was looking at some important email

Shanti: uday bachu get use to of not having ur phone because after u get married u will have to give ur full attention to ur wife not this phone. Uday looked away uncomfortably

Uday : sorry dadi if u think I will give my attention to someone else then ur wrong.

Giri: oye that someone else is called manyata... right now ur acting like this but after marriage u will be eager to spend ur time with her 24/7 so stop pretending that ur not interested in talking about her. Uday smirked looking at giri while rajveer jagat and unnati walked in and jagat felt like teasing giri a bit.

Jagat: dad did u do the same thing.

Giri: do what he said looking at jagat

Jagat: be with mum 24/7

Giri: bachu if I was with ur mum 24/7 then the business I created wouldn't have gotten us onto this position.

Jagat: forget about that but when u were young did u have hair or had this shiny chand (moon) since then he said caressing giri head.

Girl: jagat ke bachien wait he said going after jagat while jagat ran towards the stairs. But turned around to say something to giri again making everyone laugh seen these two

Jagat: mere chand don't run too much u have become old now and im not married yet so I don't have kids he said and quickly went to his room while giri stood near the stairs and then went and sat on the couch

Shanti: what happened giri u r tired already she said teasingly. The others sat down as well. Rajveer thought this was the best chance so he spoke.

Rajveer: unnati I forgot to get manyata number of her can u tell me what it is he said taking his phone out of his pocket and pretending to type the number as he had taken her number when he was at her place.

Unnati: yah sure she said reading the number out and looked towards uday who was looking at rajveer carefully.

Vasu: come on everyone go and wash ur hands till then I will go and see if the dinner is ready all nodded and left to go to their room uday stopped rajveer when they were near their room

Uday: rajveer wait

Rajveer: what happened dude

Uday: y did u want manyata number?

Rajveer: not bad already feeling insecure that I took manyata number he said teasingly

Uday: rajveer he said sternly.

Rajveer: oh come on uv I just took her number and besides I told u I think she regrets for her past behaviour towards u. now if u don't want to forgive her then that's fine as its ur decision but I decided to forgive her because I can see how honestly she is feeling sorry he said looking at uday who was in a deep thought. With that he went into his room while uday looked into space and then went into his room trying not to think of what rajveer said. ..

Everyone came down to have dinner and sat down. While eating jagat remembered something and asked.

Jagat: unnati when we all of us were at the rathord mansion manyata Bhabhi took u to her room

Unnati: what about that she said putting a spoon full of rice in her mouth while looking at jagat

Jagat: no I mean what didu guys talk about.

Unnati: nothing she just wanted to tell me something

Jagat: and what did she want to tell u.

Unnati: something u don't need to know about she said looking at jagat while giri was smiling because of the way unnati answered jagat back he still was going to get jagat back for teasing him.

Rajveer: by the way chotti maa me unnati and manyata r going out tomorrow.

Vasu: that's gd... uday y don't u and jagat go with them... When vasu said that rajveer and unnati looked at each other with tensed face but soon that vanished making them relax

Uday: no mom tomorrow me and jagat would be busy as there in an important client coming to see us.

Jagat: by the way where r u going to go.

Shanti: jagat they will go wherever they want to stop asking too many questions. And finish ur food u eat less and talk more.

Giri: ur absolutely right ma he said glaring at jagat.

Vasu: and u stop glaring at jagat and eat ur dinner... after dinner wen everyone had finished eating the elders were busy talking while the youngster were together. However unnati was waiting for a chance to speak to rajveer about the next day but since uday was there she couldn't however to her luck uday received a call on his phone and he excused himself... she quickly saw this as an opportunity whispered rajveer name who looked up from his phone and raised his eyebrows asking her what? She looked at jagat to see him changing the tv channel and luckily he was sitting a bit far away and looked towards uday to see he was still on the phone.

Unnati: have u told bhai that me u and manyata r going to see pia 2moz.

Rajveer: no not yet but I know he will ask me 2moz where we went so I will let him know then

Unnati ; and wont he question how I found out.

Rajveer: its best to tell him the truth unnati because in that way he so he doesn't take manyata in the wrong way and think that she told u for her own benefit. He said looking into space while unnati looked on

The next day everyone was getting ready and doing their work like a normal day rajveer was getting ready he was happy to meet pia again as she was a dear friend to him but poor guy didn't know that his heart felt something else for her. Once he came down he was waiting for unnati to come as they were going to meet manyata outside the hospital.

Vasu: rajveer beta come and have breakfast rajveer nodded and sat down on his seat and looked up to see uday walking down with some file.

Uday good morning mom he said giving her a side hug and sat down next to rajveer

Vasu: gd morning beta. Uday and rajveer wished each other and both started having their breakfast. soon giri, unnati, jagat and shanti came... Everyone finished having their breakfast

Giri: uday, jagat we should get going so we can discuss some important matters before the client come both nodded while shanti unnati and rajveer were still eating uday got up and kissed unnati on her head before leaving, all of a sudden unnati received a call from manyata and she answered it

Unnati: hey manyata

Manyata: hey unnati I just called to say im about to leave in 5 mins so when I get to the hospital I will call u

Unnati: that's fine manyata even we r about to leave and if we get there before u then I will call u

Manyata: ok bye see u soon. Manyata cut the call and smiled still not believing how understanding and a gd friend unnati is.

She took her purse and left her room and was walking down the stairs

Manyata: ma I am leaving now

Komal: beta have breakfast

Manyata: no ma im getting late bye and with that she walked out of the mansion and got into the car. Manyata was stuck in traffic and was waiting for the signal to turn green and was looking at the builders do their work her hair was moving about due to car window been open and she kept putting it back behind her ears when she heard a small girls voice. She turned her face to the other side to see a small girl with so many flowers.

Small girl: didi please take some flowers

Manyata: sorry beta not today some other time.

Small girl: didi please my mum told me to sell all the flowers and if I don't then she will be upset... Manyata got angry hearing this how could parents make small age kids work like this

Manyata: beta y would ur mum get upset if u were not able to sell so many flowers.

Small: girl: because if I don't then we wont get enough money and then she will get angry and think I didn't sell these flowers on purpose

Manyata: can I ask u something

Small girl: haan didi... manyata looked at the traffic light to see it was still red she turned her attention back to the girl. She didn't know y but she wanted to know about this girl as she was too cute and so small to work like this.

Manyata: y don't u go skl

Small girl: we don't have enough money and my mum says girls don't skl they only get married. But I know my mum doesn't agree to that my dad makes her say all that.. manyata looked sadly at the girl

Manyata: that's not true ok tell me something if u r given a chance would like to study... the girl smiled at manyata and nodded her head... Ok then im ready to buy all these flowers. The girls smiled brightly and manyata took out about 15 thousand rupee out of her purse and wrapped it around a handkerchief so the girl doesn't lose it and also nobody can take it off her.

Manyata: here u go if I had more I would have gave u that.

Small girl: thank u so much didi she said getting emotional manyata patted her cheeks

Manyata: what is ur name ?

Small girl: munni

Manyata: ok munni now I have taken all ur flowers and now u go and give ur mum all this money and haan this is my card over here is my number so tell ur mum to call me ok

Munni; y didi?

Manyata: just I have some work for her ok now u go. Munni smiled and went away all happily while manyata felt she did something gd. Finally the lights turned green and she drove off... after 30 mins manyata car came into the hospital parking lot and she got out and thought of calling unnati when she saw a car coming in with unnati and rajveer in it. She waited for rajveer and unnati near her car. Once rajveer parked the car. He and unnati walked near manyata and she hugged unnati first and then rajveer.

Rajveer: shall we go he said looking at both of the girls and they nodded and headed inside the hospital. Three of them headed towards the lift. And got inside and after few mins they reached to the 1st floor and started walking towards room 101. Manyata opened the door followed by rajveer and then unnati. Pia and lalit who were speaking turned towards the door to see manyata. However lalit only knew manyata as he never met unnati and rajveer before while pia was thinking who is the other girl (unnati) Lalit got up and hugged manyata.

Lalit : how r u beta

Manyata: im fine uncle she said breaking the hug and smiled at him.

Lalit: hi he said shaking hands with unnati and rajveer.

Rajveer: hi uncle I am manyata friend. Manyata looked confusingly at rajveer thinking y didn't he take pia name.

Manyata: and this is unnati my friend.

Lalit: its nice meeting u all he said genuinely. Accha beta I'll get going and will come back later on he said to manyata and pia. And left from there once lalit went manyata asked.

Manyata: rajveer y didn't u mention that ur also pia friend.

Pia:that's because I had told him that me and u will act like we don't know rajveer and uday and if they find out if were at the same uni then we will say we didn't see each other because we were put in different campus.

Manyata: when did u lot decide this.

Pia: when I told u about raj truth and u left the room in shock. Manyata remembered that day and composed herself

Manyata: thank god I know that otherwise wt if I told everyone by the way pia this is unnati udays sister and here take this flower she said handing it to pia.

Pia: manyata said a lot about u. whenever she came to visit me she spoke a lot about u she said smiling at unnati.

Unnati: and u don't know how happy I am to meet u. pia im really sorry to hear about wt happened to u but I must say ur really strong. Pia looked at manyata and she nodded

Manyata: unnati knows the truth and she started telling pia how yesterday she was trying to tell unnati everting but only got to know that unnati knew about this since a year.

Unnati: but the main problem is bhai he doesn't even talk to manyata properly.

Pia: so what is this duffer doing then she said pointing at rajveer.

Rajveer: what do u mean duffer and what am I supposed to do he said confusingly

Pia: see u proved that ur duffer... rajveer u r uday best friend cant u try and knock some sense in his head.

Rajveer: I can but he wont admit it but don't take me wrong uday is right in his place and he would need some time to forget everything and forgive manyata

Pia: by the way unnati does uday know that u know wt happened

Unnati: not yet but rajveer said he will let uday know. Pia nodded

Pia: where is uday?

Rajveer: he had an important business meeting

Pia: ok...by the way manyata im getting tired of staying here I feel like going home.

Manyata: don't worry that day will come soon dr shilpa will check if u r fully ok and will get u discharged

Pia: I hope so. I just want to get out of here asap... after a bit dr shilpa came in with pias report and saw manyata along with rajveer and unnati.

Dr shilpa hi manyata

Manyata: hi dr shipa.. by the way pia wanted to know when she can get discharged.

Dr shilpa: well she can get discharged by tomorrow only if she promises to take rest properly

Pia: *phew* finally

Dr shilpa: so you can get discharged by tomorrow morning but before that I just want give u some medicines and yes I also would like u to come to hospital for regular check up

Manyata: dw doctor she would do everything u tell her.

Dr shilpa ok then I will leave u guys alone she said smiling at all of them and left the room.

Rajveer: shall we leave now. Manyata and unnati nooded and they all hugged unnati

Pia: it was nice meeting u unnati

Unnati: same here I could tell I have made another friend

Pia: same here I would love to know more about u.

Manyata: pia take care I will come tomorrow to the hospital to see u

Pia: arien but what time will u come I haven't got a phone on me... oh wait I wll take dads phone when he coms later on.

Rajveer: girls shall we leave otherwise ur talks would never end ... Manyata and unnati slapped him playfully and they said bye to pia and left the hospital. When they were outside they stopped near their cars

Unnati: hey manyata y don't u come to our place

Manyata: unnati I ... but she couldn't complete

Rajveer: no manyta come it would be fun plus we do need to do something that uday forgives u and starts talking even if it is small things... manyata thought for a while and agreed

Manyata: ok

Unnati: rajveer u go I will come with manyata. Rajveer nodded and he got in the car and started driving off while unnati sat in manyata car and soon they left the hospital parking lot. Manyata told unnati about the small girl munni and how she wanted to do something for her. After 30 mins both car reached to singh mansion and all 3 walked inside the mansion. Shanti who was sitting in the hall was reading a book while vasu was sitting next to her cutting vegetable.

Rajveer: we r back beautiful ladies. Vasu and shanti looked up to see rajveer and unnati walking in but they also were happy to see manyata along with them. Vasu got up

Vasu: u came back early. I thought u lot will come in the evening. How r u manyata beta she said hugging her.

Manyata: im fine aunty.. she went and took shanti blessing who also hugged her.

Shanti: manyata beta how is mrinalini

Manyata: she is fine dadi.

Shanti: by the way uday is not at home u will have to wait for him till he doesn't come back she said teasingly... manyata got awkward

Manyata: noo I came to see u guys... shanti smacked her forehead while vasu was stopping herself from laughing

Shanti: u and uday both r the same from inside u both r eager to meet each other but from outside both r not ready to accept it.

Manyata: no I seriously mean it I came to see u guys

Shanti: ok fine sit she said laughing. While manyata looked at unnati and rajveer who were also laughing at the way shanti slapped her forehead

Manyata: dadi can I say something

Shanti: haan beta

Manyata: u just looked like my dadi when u smacked ur forehead. She said talking about mirnjalini

Shanti: that's y we r best friends she smiling and shall I tell u one thing I can give u one guarantee that u wont miss any of ur family members once u come into this house because I will love u just like mrinalini... U will get parents love from vasu and giri just like how brij and komal love u. and a brother in jagat just like vijay and a sister in unnati who would love and adore u just how j does even though unnati is ur best friend... Manyata smiled when shanti was saying all that but soon her smiled slowly started to vanish when she heard the next bit... and a caring husband like uday who would love u a lot... manyata felt uncomfortable with that.

Vasu: u guys talk I will go and get juice and snack for u.

Unnati: mom can u send it to my room... vasu nodded and headed towards the kitchen. While unnati, rajveer and manyata left towards unnati room.

Manyata: rajveer thank u

Rajveer: manyata stop saying thank you and lets think of how we can make uday forgive manyata. They all were in a thinking mode when rajveer got a call from uday.

Rajveer: whats up uday already missing ur friend. Uday who was sitting on his seat smirked

Uday: no don't get to happy.

Rajveer: ok then what happened anything serious or u just called like that.

Uday: well today one of our clients called and they have invited us to one of their parties saying we could bring our close friends dad wont be coming but I told our client that I would be coming with u plus that client is a gd friend of mine

Rajveer: that's fun by the way when is the party?

Uday: day after tomorrow so u better be coming

Rajveer: that's fine dude.

Uday: ok anyways im leaving the office now as there is not much r u back yet or still out

Rajveer: im back he said not telling uday that manyata is at Singh mansion.

Uday : ok see u soon then bye

Rajveer: yep bye

Unnati: what happened what did bhai say.

Rajveer: he was saying that one of the clients invited us to a party that is held day after tomorrow and wants me to tag along unnati nodded and till then the food came and they started eating when unnati got a idea

Unnati: rajveer what if manyata also attends the party with bhai then she would be with bhai all the time I mean even though u will be there but u can pretend to be busy

Rajveer: not a bad idea unnati see by staying with me u have started to become intelligent

Unnati: how mean of u

Manyata guys wait how do u expect me to go to a party where I don't know anyone except uday and rajveer and on top of that rajveer will disappear from there.

Unnati: manytata to gain bhais forgiveness u have to start from somewhere.

Manyata: yeh but im nervous

Rajveer: manyata uday wont eat u he said smiling at her

Manyata: u think he will allow me to be next to him during the party

Rajveer: don't worry manyata I will also be there but just a little away from u both.

Unnati: rajveer how would u convince bhai to take manyata to the party. Rajveer smiled as he knew who could help them

Rajveer: I will be back guys just wait and with that he left unnatis room leaving the two girls confused when after 5 mins they could see him walking with shanti

Shanti: rajveer what is so important that u bought me here... rajveer made her sit down and sat in front of her

Rajveer: dadi we need ur help

Shanti: what help

Rajveer: well u know how manyata and uday rarely spend time together so what u can do is convince uday to take manyata to the party that uday and me would be attending

Shanti: so y cant u say this to uday urself

Rajveer; ufff dadi u should know how stubborn ur grandson is and if u say then he will take manyata along but if I say then he would just take it lightly

Shanti: ok I will tell him and with that she was about to get up when rajveer made her sit down

Rajveer: but dadi just say that when uday called me at that time I was sitting with u and I told u about the party and that's how u thought manyata should tag along

Shanti: ok baba now let me go and help vasu... once shanti had gone rajveer and unnati and manyata laughed..

After 30 mins manyata decided to leave and rajveer and unnati were walking downstairs to drop her off... They stood near the couch and manyata was facing them and talking to them when she was about to leave she turned around only to bump into someone making her lose her balance slightly and she had closed her eyes but when she didn't feel her head hit the ground she slowly opened her eyes to see someone looking at her so seriously but there was also concern in that eye which slowly started to vanish only to realise uday was holding on to her. He made her stand properly.

Manyata: thanks. But she didn't get any response from uday as he ignored her and went towards rajveer and unnati.

Unnati didn't like this and glared at uday completely ignoring him

Unnati: manyata u k?

Manyata: yah um I will get going now... unnati smiled and with that manyata left... unnati slowly turned around to see uday walking towards his room. Rajveer looked at her before going up to udays room once he entered he sat on the bean bag.

Rajveer: pia was asking about u. uday who was taking his tie off looked at rajveer

Uday: u went to see pia

Rajveer: haan y?

Uday: but unnati was with u then how? Before rajveer could answer unnati walked into his room

Unnati: because I knew about this a year ago when I was at manyata house I saw her diary but then ur name caught my attention and I started reading whats in her diary but I was not sure if that uday was u. however when u both met at the temple thats when I knew that u and manyata knew each other from before and when my doubt was correct I felt like confronting manyata and ask her how dare she accuse my bhai of something like this but I couldn't I didn't want her to know that I knew the truth because of the friendship we share bhai I was just not able to hate her. in fact manyata wanted to tell me everything yesterday and she even did as she was feeling guilty but bhai I think u should forgive her

Uday: chotti its best if u don't get into this

Unnati: i have already gotten into this and I wont back out u know y because manyata should get a chance and also I didn't like the way u treated her downstairs and with that she left udays room

Meanwhile manyata reached back to her mansion after a gd 30 mins but the only thing that was in her mind was that when she was in uday arms she could see concern in his eyes but then it seemed like he was trying to hide it. She was walking in when she saw brij and vijay sitting in the hall and discussing about some important deal. Manyata went towards them

Manyata: hey guys. She said sitting next to brij.

Brij: hey angel how was ur day.

Manyata: not bad papa it was ok.

Vijay: manyata where did u go he asked casually as he didn't know she went to the hospital

Manyata: I went to see a friend with unnati and rajveer. Brij nodded. after a while komal and mrinalini came back after doing some shopping and they also came and sat down next to them while imli came and gave them some water

Mrinalaini: manyata beta when did u come?

Manyata: just few mins ago... She looked towards brij who was still busy talking with vijay but after few mintues when they came to a decision vijay closed the laptop and sat on the sofa properly. While brij was looking at some files

Manyata: papa I need to ask u something.

Brij: sure manyata?

Manyata: today when I left to meet unnati and rajveer I was stuck in traffic when a small girl came to me selling flowers at that time she started telling me things I really felt sorry for her as she is too small and has to work at this age. And by her talks I could tell her mum is not happy with this but she is tolerating all this because of her husband. But I gave that girl my card and told her to tell her mum to call me. I don't know y papa but I want to do something for this girl I mean cant we give her mum a job somewhere and sponsor that girl for her studies.

Brij: ok beta but first we need to see what that lady is capable of doing and we can only decide this after she calls u. manyata smiled and hugged brij but soon she broke the hug

Mrinalini: brij what about we give the lady a job in the small business that me and komal started of making pickles and sewing

Brij: we could do that maa but we have to see if she knows any of this. Mrinalini nodded.

Later on at the singh mansion

Uday was sitting with his laptop however he still couldn't believe unnati knew everything. He was scrolling through some documents on the laptop and at the same time sipping some whisky. Rajveer and unnati were watching him from upstairs as they told shanti to put their plan into action now.

Shanti: uday beta what r u doing?

Uday: nothing dadi just going through some documents he said looking into his laptop

Shanti: arien haan I forgot to ask that u called rajveer while u were at office right... uday looked at shanti and nodded

Uday: yh y what happened

Shanti: no I asked him what u both were talking about as I heard him mention what time the party is and he said u have invited him for a party at a clients place

Uday: haan dadi he said I could bring other ppl along with me so thought y not rajveer plus the client is one of my good friend...till then giri came and sat down and was about to turn on the tv when he heard shanti speak

Shanti: beta y don't u take manyata to the party too u both will get to spend more time there with each other... uday looked away before answering

Uday: no I don't think so... I mean she wont enjoy as she would hardly know anyone there plus she might have other things to do

Giri: how can u say that without asking in fact I want u to ask her now... rajveer and unnati who heard this were happy as giri made it easier for them.

Uday: I will call her later.

Giri: no call her now I want manyata to come with u and that's it

Uday: fine I will call her now.. he took out his phone only to know he hasn't got her number he didn't know what to do for a sec when he decided to call vijay. After few rings vijay answered

Vijay: hey uday whats up

Uday: hi vijay can I speak to manyata.

Vijay: manyata? Vijay was surprised when uday asked about manyata... yeh sure just give me a min ill give her the phone. Vijay ran to manyata room and quickly gave her the phone when she looked at the caller id she was surprised tat it was uday and place the phone near her ears

Manyata: hello?

Uday: day after tomorrow I am attending a client's party who is one of my friend dad was asking if u want to come.. he said mentioning giri name so manyata knows he is not interested in taking her but because of giri he is asking.

Manyata: erm sure... before she could ask what time he continued

Uday: I'll come and pick u up around 7 be ready and with that he cut the call only to see giri and shanti staring at him weirdly

Giri where did the bye go.

Uday: I forgot to say it and with that he took his laptop and whisky glass and headed upstairs and when unnati and rajveer saw him get up they quickly ran

PART 17 IS ON THE NEXT PAGE

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The next day manyata woke up with a smile on her face but then she remembered tomorrow was the day she will be attending a party with uday and she was very nervous as to how uday is going to behave... would he introduce her, talk to her, forgive her ... so many questions like this was running in her head. She decided to have a shower after 15mins she came out in a robe only to see her phone ringing to see it was unnati calling

Manyata : hey unnati

Unnati: hey. By the way y didn't u answer ur phone before I tried to call u

Manyata: sorry I went to have a shower and just came out now only to see ur call.

Unnati: that's fine then. So u ready for the party

Manyata: to be honest no im really nervous

Unnati: don't feel nervous manyata rajveer will also be there but just away from u and bhai and if u really feel left out then just give me a call

Manyata; ok

Unnati: by the way have u decided what u r going to wear

Manyata: no not really?

Unnati: gd then don't because I have a perfect dress for u so I will come around 6 tomorrow to get u ready

Manyata: uhh unnati hold on a sec im getting another call from some other number... she put unnati on hold and answered the other call

Inspector; hello miss manyata this is inspector suraj speaking if u remember I took pia statement

Manyata: yes inspector how can I help u.

Inspector; well over here mr raj singhania is in our custody although he is trying to get a bail but he keeps on saying that he wants to meet u

Manyata: im sorry inspector but im not ready to meet a person like him

Inspector: we could understand but u also need to sign on some documents for the statement that u r going to give against mr singhania so maybe u can meet him one last time and knock some sense into him

Manyata: ok im coming now

Inspector: thank u so much and with that he cut the call. Manyata got back to unnati

Unnati: finally ur back but when she didn't get any answer from manyata she asked again... manyata u there ?

Manyata: yh I just got a call from the police station and she narrated the conversation between her and the inspector.

Unnati; so u going ?

Manyata : yh

Unnati: do u want me to come with u.

Manyata: no dw I will manage and I don't want u to get into this whole raj mess I will take vijay bhai

Unnati: ok don't take too much stress and let me know how things go.

Manyata: will do... ill see u later as I need to get ready and leave. after saying bye to each other both cut the call. Manyata quickly got ready into something comfortable and went downstairs to have breakfast to see everyone sitting there already. Except vijay as he was getting ready and j was sleeping as she had to finish this design off for some client and due to that she stayed awake the whole night...she took her seat and smiled at everyone.

Mrinalini: gd morning beta

Manyata: gd morning dadi erm where is vijay bhai

Mrinalini beta he is probably In his room. Manyata nodded and texted vijay about going to the police station and also about pia probably getting discharged today and after few mins she got a reply from him stating that he will cme along with her... after about 5 mins vijay came down. And sat opposite manyata.

vijay: dad I will come later to office if that k

brij: that's fine beta but r u planning to do something today? if u want u can take a day off

vijay: well I have to go and give statement against raj at the police station. Manyata didn't expect vijay to say this Yes her family knew about raj bad work now but she was hoping brij doesn't plan to come with them

brij: beta shall I come with u. manyata closed her eyes thinking her doubt would be coming true

vijay: no dad I know u r angry with him with the way he was using us so I don't want u to get into this mess he said drinking his juice quickly

komal: beta if anything do give ur dad a call.

Vijay: dw mom. Shall we go manyata. Before they could get up. Mrinalini stopped them

Mrinalini: beta where r u taking manyata

Vijay: woh dadi I erm... yh well one of my friend has bought a new flat and he wanted to redesign it do I told him I wll bring manyata and he could share his idea with her so she will come with me to the police station and from there we will leave to my friends place. Mrinalini nodded and both left for the police station. Once they were in the car vijay looked at manyata and spoke after few mins.

Vijay: manyata will u be ok seeing raj. Manyata looked at vijay and gave a sad smile.

Manyata: I have to be ok vijay bhai and for me he is not the person I loved he is a stranger... someone that broke my trust... someone that changed mine and pias like especially pia... and someone who was trying to do a fake business deal with u and papa so his illegal work stays hidden. For me his only raj sighaniya and pia's culprit. Vijay looked at her for a second and then drove off... Soon they reached to the police station and both got out of the car vijay went towards manyata and put his arms around her shoulder and started walking in.

Raj who was sitting in the lock up was keep on looking at inspector suraj who was writing something down about a case.. he wanted to get out of the police station fast and was also thinking what is taking his lawyer so long to get his bail papers ready. And another reason was to go and see manyata as he wouldn't let her go so easily. He was looking angrily at the inspector and the people sitting next to him in lock up making faces.. he got up and started walking from one corner to the other and was in a thinking mode when he heard inspector say manyata name and vijay name and looked up to see them sitting down opposite the inspector. Manyata and vijay walked in and they located inspector suraj however vijay was the only one who located raj and making him get angry and tightened his grip on manyata shoulder. Manyata who was a little lost in her thoughts looked at vijay when she felt his grip tighten. And saw him looking ahead when she followed his gaze she saw raj after so long but the only difference was things were not the same between them and will never be she was looking at him sadly remembering all those lovely moments spent together when pias word came running back when anger took over the sadness and she looked away from raj who was still staring at her... both vijay and manyata ignored him and went towards inspector suraj.

Inspector: thank u so much for coming and mr vijay its gd u came too as u can sign on these papers too . As u know this is a rape case we needed u to sign these papers which states that whenever required u will communicate with us and answer all the question asked. Manyata and vijay nodded and manyata started signing first

Vijay: inspector I hope pia name doesn't come out in the open especially at the court

Inspector suraj: u don't worry about that and we will make sure miss pia sharma name doesn't come out so u can relax he said smiling. Vijay nodded and started signing after manyata finished... Raj was still looking at manyata. He went near the lock up bar with his fingers tightening around them.

Raj: manyata I need to speak to u. manyata ignored raj... and he continued. Give me a chance dammit he said angrily and now vijay looked angrily at raj

Vijay: u don't deserve any chance Mr Singhania so its best if u stop ur drama and forget my sister.

Raj: u know I love her vijay just listen to me once. Vijay ignored raj completely.

Vijay: inspector when would this case reach to the court

Inspector: we have registered a fir against him and the case hearing is after 3 days.

Vijay: thank u so much he said shaking hands with the inspector and he and manyata got up to leave.. vijay held on to manyata hand and was about to move.

Raj: manyata u cant go without hearing me out. this time manyata stopped in her track and vijay looked at her questionably she turned around and looked at raj.

Manyata: what do u want to say? She asked walking towards the lock up with no emotion for the guy in front of her

Raj: manyata look we have been together for 5 years. Do u think its easy to forget a 5 year old relationship no right... u will be hurt and even I will be. Like I said for us I will say sorry to pia just tell her to take this damn case back and then I will come and ask for ur hand I will even say sorry to brij uncle for thinking about of doing a fake project with him. We will be happy like before don't u think I deserve a second chance.

Manyata; 5 year old relationship? U will be hurt? Sorry to pia? We will be happy? Us? Asking for my hand?...second chance?... I don't think any of these things mean anything to u. to be honest im happy that im not with a person like u anymore. u were saying we were happy together. But were we really coz at that time u were hiding ur true face. The raj that I loved doesn't exist for me anymore because behind that raj face was a evil monster face who had done really bad things in the past. but as they say truth always wins and ur truth came out. and about asking for my hand I don't think thats possible because even u know im engaged and soon will get married she said showing her engagement ring to raj and about second chance u think I will give u a second chance for these type of things u have done?... I would have gave u a chance if u was a nice guy or if there was any type of misunderstanding between us but over here the case is totally different and u don't get second chance for crimes like this... Bye Mr raj singhaniya its time for u to pay for ur crimes. Vijay smiled the way manyata spoke to raj. Manyata turned around and started walking towards vijay and both left from there while raj was in rage... nobody dared to speak to him like that and he continued looking at manaya and vijay walking out of the police station.

Raj: now I will show the real evil side of me manyata baby. U r only mine and I wont let anyone take u away from me. He thought looking angrily into space. As soon as manyata and vijay got out manyata hugged vijay tightly. Who was surprised as inside she was all strong and now she was hugging him.

Vijay: u ok manyata. Manyata nodded her head and after few minutes broke the hug.

Manyata: I really hate him. He still considers all this as a small mistake and asks for a second chance for all the things he has done. Vijay bhai if it was something small or something like normal problem in our relationship then yes I would have gave him a second chance but here he has done something really bad with everyone and doesn't even show guilt on his face.

Vijay: I know manyata... but he was like a complete psycho and its good he is behind the bar now only court needs to punish him and then he will be away from ur life for gd he said cupping her face manyata smiled at him

Manyata: I love u

Vijay: I love u to my manyata bhai. Shall we go now.

Manyata: one minute and with that she called on lalit phone as she knew pia would have his phone. After few rings pia answered.

Pia: whats up sexy... manyata smiled hearing pia speak like before.

Manyata: nothing much just wanted to know what time r u getting discharged

Pia: after 30 mins u coming?

Manyata: yes ill be there soon

Pia: cool see u bye... both ended the call... pia smiled sadly she was trying to behave normal for her loved ones she still didn't tell anyone how that one night still haunts her and scares her in her dream.. but she had to forget it and she wants to forget it and live life like before although she knew it would take a little time.

Meanwhile manyata and vijay sat in the car and manyata told vijay about pia getting discharged. Vijay was happy that finally pia would be going home but also he was getting excited to see dr shilpa. He started driving. After 20 mins both reached the hospital and headed to pia room. They soon entered and saw pia sitting in her normal clothes with lalit next to her as dr shilpa was talking to them. But three of them looked towards the door to see manyata and vijay walk in. vijay was happy seeing dr shilpa but tried to keep it normal. Lalit went and hugged vijay and manyata

Vijay: hi dr shilpa how r u? manyata looked at him weirdly

Dr shilpa: erm im gd thanks how r u.

Vijay: all gd thanks. Erm how is pia now

Dr shilpa: she is fine but still need to take full rest. also I made her a chart that she should follow everyday she said handing the file to manyata.

Manyata: thank u so much dr shilpa. The way u treated pia in all these years I don't know how to say thank u and shall I be honest im happy I met someone sweet like u who takes care of her patients really well.

Dr shilpa: then don't say thank u... she said smiling and then placed her hand on manyata shoulder... I was more than happy treating pia and I loved seeing the bond u shared with her it just shows how much u love her and I can also see how much she loves u.

Lalit: dr the discharged papers r signed so can we leave

Dr shilpa: sure but please bring her to me after 1 week. And make sure she follows the chart I made her all nodded and shilpa left. vijay kept looking at her but what made him smile was when dr shilpa was about to leave the room she turned and looked at vijay and smiled before going.

Manyata: so madam shall we leave she said holding pia and helped her to get up.

Pia: yes lets go... vijay helped lalit carry pia bag and they walked out of the hospital while manyata and pia were walking slowly with manyata holding on to pia shoulder as pia was adjusting to walking back normally. When they reached outside lalit told his driver to go as they decided to go in vijay car manyata and pia sat in the back while lalit was sitting at the front with vijay

After an hour they reached to pia house and walked inside and sat on the couch while the maid bought water for all of them.

Lalit: manyata beta yesterday I forgot to tell u that I met brij yesterday..and u know how we told ur family that pia had decided to stay in New York so nobody knows about her condition over here.

Manyata: haan uncle but did papa say anything.

Lalit: yes beta he asked me when pia is coming back since ur wedding is coming near and also she didn't attend ur engagement plus I couldn't come as I was with pia but I told him that I was out of town for an urgent meeting. Beta its best if u tell them now that pia would be coming back from New York after two days

Vijay: lalit uncle is right manyata plus they know how close u and pia r and they might find something fishy if pia is missing from other functions now... only we knew that pia was in coma but we cant give them any more doubts

Lalit: exactly and this is gods blessing that pia came out of coma just on time it seems that even god didn't want my daughter to miss ur big day he said caressing pia head who smiled. But tell me something pia u lied to me when I asked u who that person was that was responsible for ur state? Everyone looked at lalit shocked especially pia.

Pia: how do u know ? she still couldn't believe that lalit knew.

Lalit: beta I found out the day u came out of coma... I left as soon as possible when vijay called me and told me that u got out of coma and I was about to enter the room only to hear the last bit when u said manyata bf was responsible for ur state but when I asked u and u said u don't know about who did this to u I didn't want to force u to tell me.

Pia: im sorry dad I didn't want u to worry plus manyata didn't know about this so I didn't want u to think that she knew about raj been the culprit. She said holding onto lalit hand. Manyata got up from her seat and kneeled in front of lalit and took one of his hand holding it tightly

Manyata: im really sorry uncle if raj wouldn't have been in my life then all this wouldn't have happened to pia. She tried to help and knock some sense into that person head but all he cared about himself... because of me he did all that to pia and got away for so many years. But believe me I didn't know he was the cause for all this. Lalit smiled and placed his hand on manyata head.

Lalit: it was not ur fault beta. Pia did what she thought was best for u. im not blaming any of u. maybe this was meant to happen so all of u know raj true face this way.

Vijay: lalit uncle is right and there is no point in thinking about the past... what happened was for the best. But uncle please don't let anyone at home know that manyata and raj were in relationship as nobody knows about this.

Lalit; dw beta I wont. Now u all talk I will be in my room... with that lalit got up and went to his room while manyata sat down next to pia.

Pia: so has that duffer rajveer made any plans yet.

Manyata; well yh uday called him yesterday when he was at the office and he mentioned about some client inviting him for a party who happens to be a gd friend of uday so he told rajveer to join him and then unnati got the idea of me tagging along.

Pia: so did that work ?

Manyata: yh rajveer told udays dadi to convince him to take me but I think even giri uncle told him too because when he called yesterday he said giri uncle wants me to go with him

Vijay: so that's y he called?

Manyata: yh

Pia: lets hope things go gd at the party between u and uday.

Vijay; ok girls I have to leave as i need to go office as well... manyata u not going to ur office

Manyata: no vijay bhai me and unnati r still working on the same client and she has gone on holiday for few weeks so till then there is no office until we don't get another client.

Vijay: ok do u want me to come and pick u up later on

Manyata: no its k I will take taxi

Pia: wt do u mean taxi u don't worry my driver will drop u. vijay bhai u can go i will take care of this girl. Vijay nodded and left while manyata and pia were alone. Manyata noticed pia thinking about something.

Manyata: pia u ok?... pia came out of her thoughts

Pia; yah I was just thinking about how happy we were but then 1 night changed everything

Manyata: true but we r happy right now as well in fact much happier than before.

Pia: manyata u cried ur heart out in front of vijay bhai that day but wont u share ur pain with ur friend. Manyata looked at pia and slowly gave her a tight hug. After few mins manyata spoke.

Manyata: I saw him at the police station today. Pia opened her eyes when manyata said that and broke the hug for manyata to continue with what happened

Meanwhile at the police station raj was sitting on the floor and was thinking when his lawyer mr Ahuja called out his name. raj looked up to see mr Ahuja who nodded at him. Mr Ahuja went towards the inspector.

Mr Ahuja: inspector saab I need to speak to my client privately so please can u allow us. Inspector gave Ahuja a look and then told one of the constable to take raj to a different room. Where criminals get to talk to the people that come and visit them. Once they were in that room the constable gave them few mins and went out.

Raj: mr Ahuja what has taken u so long.

Mr Ahuja: I was thinking of how to get u out. because right now bail probably wont help in this case.

Raj: so u expect me to stay here my whole life he said gritting his teeth. Mr Ahuja gave a sly smile to raj

Mr Ahuja: mr singhania I wouldn't have came here if I didn't have a solution but I have a way of getting u out of here only if u agree to it.

Raj: what is that he said leaning forward looking at Ahuja and waiting for him to speak.

Mr Ahuja; that solution is...

Constable came in and took raj out who looked at Ahuja one last time before getting into his cell while Ahuja left after assuring him.

Back to pia house. manyata told everything to pia that happened at the police station.

Pia : this guy is a monster. She said angrily. Manyata held on to her hand

Manyata: forget about him. But if u ever need me u know im always here.

Pia; I know. Manyata but?

Manyata: but?

Pia; it still scares me that night if uday hadn't come that day raj would have done more damage to me by... and she left her sentence hanging which manyata understood...pia continued speaking again after few secs... but u know manyata I want to forget that night and think of it as a bad dream.

Manyata: that day will come soon pia it will take a little time but it will... ok now I have to go as everyone at home thinks I was with vijay bhais friend.

Pia: ok chal I will tell the driver to drop u. and she was about to get up but manyata stopped her

Manyata: pia don't move right now I will go and tell the driver to drop me.

Pia: pakka ? she said pointing her fingers at manyata

Manyata: pakka she said smiling and kissed pia on the cheeks and both hugged each other and manyata walked out of and told pia driver to drop her... once manyata reached home she quickly told the driver to go so nobody at home knows she came from pia house as her family member knows pia driver very well.

When she entered inside she saw j sitting on the couch watching tv and went towards her. And sat next to her.

Manyata: whats up nandu? U didn't go office today? She asked drinking jais juice that was on the table.

Jai: nothing much didu...I was looking for something to watch on tv. And nope there was not much work at the office so I didn't go but I told pinky that if im needed then she should call me. By the way where were u

Manyata: I was with vijay bhai his friend needed to redesign his flat so vijay bhai recommended me. Jai nodded.

Precap: same as the promo

uday and manyata were at a party... uday was busy talking with some ppl while manyata was standing alone in a corner moving her gaze around the hall and also kept glancing in udays direction... some guy came to her asking for a dance and she declined feeling uncomfortable because of the way he was looking at her ...

man: come on beautiful one dance wont harm u he said sipping a glass of whisky and looking at manyata from head to toe making her uncomfortable.

Manyata: i said I don't want to dance so please don't force me said moving away from the guy a little and kept looking in udays direction but he was busy talking to others. But when she was busy looking at uday she didn't notice the guy come even closer to her and held her hand.

man: if u don't want to dance we can go somewhere else he said holding her hands tightly and dragged her away from the hall and taking her into another room While manyata was trying free herself but culdnt as the person was strong and kept looking at uday but no luck.


Ok now sorry to everyone who was waiting for me to update this ff since ages... im really sorry for keeping u all waiting and I hope u guys like these two parts... I know there is less manveer scenes but I promise u will get more manveer scenes in the upcoming parts.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi...damn this is interesting
Manyata's one wrong choice did a big damage huh

Pls give my story a look too. It's called learning to love royals. Pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
finally got update
uff everyone just worried for manyata not for uday 😡
at least unnati & rajveer should understand uday pain 😡
but no they r also just thinking aby manyata's pain when she is at fault 😡
poor uday both unnati & rajveer forcing him to forgive manyata & confusing him
I hope uday wont melt just like that
yuck that monster raj is so disgusting 😡
how manyata date that jerk 🤢
poor pia suffered a lot & still its painful even uday got hurt in that 🤢
now what plan that monster raj & his lawyer making? 😡
continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey...I just read all the chapters and must say it's going amazingly👏 Right now I'm only worried about what that loser lawyer said to that coward 😡 I really hope he's not planning to trap Manyata in someway. And about Uday , Manyata is there to handle him 😆

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