manveer :an eternal love story (ch 31-pg 92)ended - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
nice update
love how you made udayveer go to the party as well
really hope that he goes with manyata to the party and not akash.
thanks for the PM
do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
This is awesome yaar :3 but it would be nice if we will get manveer bond in next part (:
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Amazing..!! Waiting Waiting..!!! Update soon..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Loved it.
Can't wait to read more.
Please update soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Chapter-5

M:aakash tum!!

Uday saw him,and the sight caught his attention,he had curled his hands around her.

Anger was raising in uday.aakash diverted his attention from moniya to udayveer.

Both were shooting draggers at each other.tension was raising,the atmosphere got tensed.

Neel:hey aakash yaar tum yaha,achanak!!...

Aakash turned his look towards neel "haan wo orphanage gaya that oh pata chala tum log yaha aaye ho, toh chala aaya".

Manyata gently removed his hands from her waist.

Uday:so,wat say,chalein??

Before manyata can answer aakash cuts her "kaha na,who mere saath hi jaayegi"

Uday:dikhne mein uske secretory toh nahi lagte,let her answer man.

Shivangi was thinking "plz,moniya iss dumbo aakash ko naa bol de,koi andha bhi chalega par ye nahi"

But there was something else in manyata's mind "come on moniya soch kya rahi hai,tu aakash ko janti hai,par iss bhoot ko nahi.aaksh k saath hi chali jaa"

But her heart was speaking something else "nahi moniya tu aise isse yaha chod kar aakash k saath nahi jaa sakti"

As she was in a confusion between her mind and heart aakash spoke in between "chalo moniya,tumhe isse darne ki jarorat nahi hai"
as they were moving ,neel holding shivangi's hand and aaksh with moniya.udayveer's was constantly looking at manyata's back "come on uday why does it matters to u if she goes with someone else,who is she to u"

At other side manyata was feeling stressed "why am I feeling that I did something wrong,why it seems that today my decision was wrong" she turned to look back and he stood at the some position constantly looking at her.her legs got freeze on the spot.

Even at a distance their eyes met an eyelock.

But it got broken when a girl pushed manyata and walked to uday

"uday baby I was wating for u in the club"
uday:I was on my way maya(still his smirk was on)

The music was loud,everyone was deep lost in that world.bars were full

Dancing was all done by them,lost in those music and fun.

But uday was busy looking at manyata,his gaze were fixed at her even if he wasn't with her,he got distracted when a waiter informed him that a caller is waiting for him.he vanished from there.

There shivangi was little upset by aakash but she remained silent for her friend.

Neel cornered moniya and aakash "guys I want to take shivangi somewhere,can u both carry on further without us"

M:ooo,neel so romantic,don't worry u take her I can go alone.

Neel:but how can u go alone

Aakash:I can drop her on my bike.

Neel:ok,that will be g8,see to it she is safer,she is like my little sister.i don't want her to get into any trouble,got it"

Aakash nodded in approval and moniya too.neel left them and took shivangi.even shivangi was in no mood to leave her friend with that aakash but she was constantly forced by manyata so she left with him.here in the club

Aakash:moniya,we can enjoy till more and than we can leave(with a pleading look)

M:ok…..

Aakash was almost down with another shot

M:aakash stop it,u are already drunk too much(taking the glass from his hand)

Aaksh: (in a drunken state)too much…this is too much,today I will tell u what I feel for u

He dragged her outside the club

Moniya was struggling from his grip "aaksh chodo…,kaha le jaa rahe ho"

Aaksh:apne dil ki baat kehne

He dragged her behind the hotel,it was a silent area,there was a pin drop silent,.she was still struggling from his hold

Akash:moniya….(almost screaming) I.. LOVE…… U…

Moniya was shocked.

Akash:I know u too love me,but u are fighting with ur feelings.

He caught her by her arms

Moniya:aakash chodo mujhe…..mein tumse pyaar nahi karti

But he refused to do so he leaned in

M:AAKASH kya kar rahe ho tum

Akash:wahi jo har lovers karte hain

Moniya almost jerked him away,he stabled him self.manyata was about to run away from him but he caught her forcefully…

A sudden blow of punch by someone jerked him to the ground,and before he could manage him.the same person blowed another punch on his jaws.manyata was unable to see the faces .first coz of her moistened eyes and then the darkness

another punch was ready to blow but manyata's hiccup stopped him.

He turned towards her and she was shocked to see him here.how he can be here?...

Sorry guys for that aakash in this chapter.but next time there will be manveer together

I know I was like our cvs who put aaksh in the whole chapter but I want manyata to hate aakash

So just forgive me this time next time it will be manveer

Don't forget to like and comment

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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
i loved it...update soon...thanks aloot for the PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
  • hey jazzy,
  • amazing update
  • , firstly I don't like how manyata choose to go with akash leaving uday behind but at last when uday give a akash a flaming punch, it makes me happiest person. i find shivangi a smart girl and good friend.manyata here is emotionally hypersensiyive. love her too.
  • next time please write a longer update and updarte soon.
  • waiting for many many manveer scenes.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Amazing Part

Manyata hates Akash now and UV punched him only if that happens in DEK cont soon looking forward to next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
guys when did i mention that uday punched that aakash😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70

hey. thanks for the pm...nice update
cont soon😊

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