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ControlledChaos

@ControlledChaos

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Awesome Bhaijaan... Loved all the convos specially the convo between Aman and Badey Bhai...
Plus the ending was really cool.
Bhai's tension was shown perfectly.. and the way they all treated Badey Bhai was quite great...
All the emotions were perfectly shown.
Great Job..!! 👏

Bhaijaan.. but I fail to understand that how this story relates with the current situation.. Can you please clarify..?? 😳

But awesome story once again you made me cry.. and once again you made me wonder how can you write so much emotions...
Asusual waiting for your other stories.. 😆

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saba yaqoob

@duoa

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

lovely story dada

aman to bht samajhdaar hai👏

every moment was mind blowing 👍🏼

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Such a lovely and straight from the heart story GD. Was waiting for something like this and yes it brought tears in my eyes too.

About your note i would just say "Dil pe mat le yaar" .. Just let it be siply a tv show cause getting attached to it and the characters at this level is only going to hurt more.

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mano86

@mano86

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

story
👏

u really made me cry buddy
😭

Apnun ko, Rishtun ko us Toot Phoot say bachana
jo Khirchiyun ki surat Humaray ander hay
👏⭐️👏👏⭐️👏
loved this a lot
😊

👏

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SofiyaSam

@SofiyaSam

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Awesome story once Dada. ⭐️👏 👏
Very very nice and heart touching
story👏👏.Again you made me cry.
Dil ko chu liya.⭐️.Great Job.👏👏 waiting 4 next.

Note --- Plz dada mention in the story title
TUJH SY NARAZ NAHI ZINDAGI...!
(New Story @ PG 29) not 21.

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megha verma

@vermamegha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

HEY DADA BOHOT ACCHI STORY H

APKO THJO MERE TARAF SE SALUTE

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rosepink

@rosepink.

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

nice story
same like abhi mjhe b nhi samajh rha itna thosne k baad diet coke ka kya matlab😉
nyways
pehle dirct coma me chale jate the bukhar nhi aata tha
oh daya so innocent
uff
abhi k hosp ka bill b daya ne usi k paise se diya
ye kbhi nhi sudharne wala
abhi pura din behosh tha
bt dr. ko bulane k bjaye sirf thande pani ki patti rakhna
ye baat digest nhi hua
normally koi aisa nhi krega
abhi sayng mjhe zinda dekhna h toh naha lo
i felt uff daya was stinkng so badly
😆🤣😉

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rosepink

@rosepink.

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

daya sayng tmhara bhai bistar pe pada raha toh...
i felt bad, rahul ne ek kheech k lagana tha daya ko
aisa koi bolta h kya
many othr dialogs wr lovng nd funny
i broke into laughtr
daya chckng abhi evry now nd dn k coma me toh nhi chala gaya
was funny
abhi POV ws r8, misha aman bondng nice
zabrdast story
day 1 ko hi padh li,cud nt rvw time nhi mila
sorry maaf kr dena
ye kya pg29 pe story thi aur 21 ki sair kara di khali pili😉
u rocks,kep rockng
khush raho
many thanks
regards

Edited by rosepink. - 12 years ago