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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

firstly am really sorry for such late comments gd,...!!!😳

just read DNA and this story...!!

both are awesome.. super se bahut bahut upar...!!!

the harsh reality of society which you portrayed in DNA ... all kinds of things do happen in real life... so sad to see all these things happening...!! you portrayed it very well it was really very heart touching...!!!

how could any parent do this to their child...!!!

just loved the bonding between the child and everyone... so glad they decided to bring him home...!!!

and the way daya sir kissed his left eye and cheek to lessen the scar was such a innocent and pure jesture...!! totally loved it...!!!!

and ofcourse wo shuru mai.. the way he helped that driver ... too good... loved these small small things..!!

naamkaran part was too good... Naklu apt name... Acp sir were so happy...

hmm to ye tha DNA ka full form... i liked this..!! <3 <3 <3

ohh no so baby's parents came to take him... but why now?

abhi sir and daya sir scenes were really emotional... ohh no nervous breakdown..!!!😲 glad he is okay...

but he left😲

love how you depicted everything that happened so far from abhi and daya sir's point of view... that was truly phenomenal./..!!!! have no words to describe how awesome it was...1!!

and wo end ki future entry...!!!👏⭐️ take a bow from my side...!!

and latest story ka kya kehan..

again a brilliant piece of work from you...!!!

such a heart touching and lovely story...!!!

the way you portrayed meaning of life...!!!

aman and misha are so smajahdar bache...!! dnt want to trouble people...!!!

loved the bonding shared by aman and abhi sir...!!!

aur last mai abhi sir ka pov on life and everyone...!!! truly heart touching...!!! and so beautifully portrayed and written...!!!!!

loved it...!!!!!

👏⭐️ 👏⭐️ 👏⭐️

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: awesum_life
I really like the story that I can't stopy myselft after reading few lines.. 😊 waiting for such kind of stories.. btw abhi sir ko shahyri kb se aa gyi...😃

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: Raaz_sweet
Very very nice and heart touching story GD..!!
Everybody's pain was portrayed perfectly and the last part where abhijeet thinks about life is especially the best..!!

Thanks yaar GD.. It has a very good lesson for all of us..

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: shreela
so cute and very well-written!👏👏 but aapke us din ke pm se mujhe laga tha ki aap kisi investigative story pe kaam kar rahe ho?

Boss abhi Busy hun so stop to Write anything now...

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES
Dada..its so heart touching ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️. Lovely and nice thoughts ⭐️⭐️. Loved this story from heart 😳. Thank you so much 🤗.

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: pinky118
awesome story Dada👍🏼...as always...very touchy and emotional😭...really like it...waiting 4 some more...😊

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya
GD you just made me cry. I thought kam pe padh loongi kya hoga, lekin I had to run off to the washroom because the story was so emotional. Dil ko chu liya.

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: DUOlover123
Awesome Bhaijaan... Loved all the convos specially the convo between Aman and Badey Bhai...
Plus the ending was really cool.
Bhai's tension was shown perfectly.. and the way they all treated Badey Bhai was quite great...
All the emotions were perfectly shown.
Great Job..!! 👏

Bhaijaan.. but I fail to understand that how this story relates with the current situation.. Can you please clarify..?? 😳

But awesome story once again you made me cry.. and once again you made me wonder how can you write so much emotions...
Asusual waiting for your other stories.. 😆

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: duoa
lovely story dada
aman to bht samajhdaar hai👏
every moment was mind blowing 👍🏼

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: snehal.
Such a lovely and straight from the heart story GD. Was waiting for something like this and yes it brought tears in my eyes too.
About your note i would just say "Dil pe mat le yaar" .. Just let it be siply a tv show cause getting attached to it and the characters at this level is only going to hurt more.