Hr Zulm...!(New Experimental VM @PG 139) - Page 26

Originally posted by: mano86

story
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u really made me cry buddy
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Apnun ko, Rishtun ko us Toot Phoot say bachana
jo Khirchiyun ki surat Humaray ander hay
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loved this a lot
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Originally posted by: .Nishi.

Awesome story once Dada. ⭐️👏 👏
Very very nice and heart touching
story👏👏.Again you made me cry.
Dil ko chu liya.⭐️.Great Job.👏👏 waiting 4 next.


Note --- Plz dada mention in the story title
TUJH SY NARAZ NAHI ZINDAGI...!
(New Story @ PG 29) not 21.

Originally posted by: vermamegha

HEY DADA BOHOT ACCHI STORY H

APKO THJO MERE TARAF SE SALUTE

Originally posted by: rosepink.

nice story
same like abhi mjhe b nhi samajh rha itna thosne k baad diet coke ka kya matlab😉
nyways
pehle dirct coma me chale jate the bukhar nhi aata tha
oh daya so innocent
uff
abhi k hosp ka bill b daya ne usi k paise se diya
ye kbhi nhi sudharne wala
abhi pura din behosh tha
bt dr. ko bulane k bjaye sirf thande pani ki patti rakhna
ye baat digest nhi hua
normally koi aisa nhi krega
abhi sayng mjhe zinda dekhna h toh naha lo
i felt uff daya was stinkng so badly
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Originally posted by: pooja.abhi

Lovely story GD 👏

Very nice 😊

Originally posted by: neha_dna

Very touching story GD...

Very nice thought and wonderfully written...!!

God bless you 🤗

Originally posted by: devildiva21

firstly am really sorry for such late comments gd,...!!!😳

just read DNA and this story...!!

both are awesome.. super se bahut bahut upar...!!!

the harsh reality of society which you portrayed in DNA ... all kinds of things do happen in real life... so sad to see all these things happening...!! you portrayed it very well it was really very heart touching...!!!

how could any parent do this to their child...!!!

just loved the bonding between the child and everyone... so glad they decided to bring him home...!!!

and the way daya sir kissed his left eye and cheek to lessen the scar was such a innocent and pure jesture...!! totally loved it...!!!!

and ofcourse wo shuru mai.. the way he helped that driver ... too good... loved these small small things..!!

naamkaran part was too good... Naklu apt name... Acp sir were so happy...

hmm to ye tha DNA ka full form... i liked this..!! <3 <3 <3

ohh no so baby's parents came to take him... but why now?

abhi sir and daya sir scenes were really emotional... ohh no nervous breakdown..!!!😲 glad he is okay...

but he left😲

love how you depicted everything that happened so far from abhi and daya sir's point of view... that was truly phenomenal./..!!!! have no words to describe how awesome it was...1!!

and wo end ki future entry...!!!👏⭐️ take a bow from my side...!!

and latest story ka kya kehan..

again a brilliant piece of work from you...!!!

such a heart touching and lovely story...!!!

the way you portrayed meaning of life...!!!

aman and misha are so smajahdar bache...!! dnt want to trouble people...!!!

loved the bonding shared by aman and abhi sir...!!!

aur last mai abhi sir ka pov on life and everyone...!!! truly heart touching...!!! and so beautifully portrayed and written...!!!!!

loved it...!!!!!

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Originally posted by: gadhadada

Originally posted by: gadhadada