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Originally posted by: misha.as

Masterpiece story GD...⭐️
Love it...👏 ⭐️
Every bit of story was wonderful and diary part, I m speechless...⭐️⭐️⭐️
Amazing...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Great work...👏⭐️
👏 👏 👏

Thank u so much...🤗
🤗

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Finally I read the story again in relaxing mood😃.. Kya Dada, are you planning to give us heart attack😆? Every bit of this story is wrapped in extreme pain and grief.. My heart pinches many a times while reading it.. At first after Daya sir's leave the condition of Abhi sir is really heartbreaking as well as the fake funeral scene.. Acp-Daya conversation is another heart touching scene.. Truly loved the father inside the ironman cop who cares for his sons and guides them.. The last part of flashback..both forget their present grief..went back to previous era..is just OUTSTANDING, EXCELLENT, WONDERFUL, MARVELLOUS, MESMERIZING.. My heart danced with joy when Daya sir came back to home.. You know what Dada, throughout the story I was fearing kahin Dono mein se kisi ekne suicide attempt na karle ya shayed dono eksath.. Warna to rote rote hamare room mein flood aa jata.. This time even Abhi sir put his feet into Daya sir's shoe na..You added the formalities about the baby in a nice way..very good.. Hats off to you..Take a bow👏👏👏. Day by day you are improving amazingly and truly I have no words for your hard work, dedication, passion..these are beyond words..hats off once again👏👏👏. Just one thing Dada, how Daya sir got Abhi sir's diary?? Will you please explain it? I am confused or did I miss something? BTW, what about your next stories😛? Will those be set up in 2015?

Originally posted by: anjaan_anjaani

dada I would like to start with a sorry. I was on holiday and wen I came back I had to sort out school things so I am a little late. When I logged in I got to see lots of notification which made my day :)

awww, its Not a Big Deal baccha, as we all have so many other responsibilities na...😃

Firstly your story yummy mistake...It was great but why is bary bhai hurting is chote bhai, he was not like that before :)

Un ki Yaaddasht chali gayii thi...😆😆😆, Basically Sometime we think after we did😭, I showed that aspect on this... 😊

Thank You so much for eating oops reading Yummy Mistake...😉🤗

coming to the second story, why so serious. I thought this was mind-blowing. why do you get such ideas from. it was a really new and different idea which I loved. I'm sure bary bhai will never forget this gift.

😆, ohhh thats Not My Idea, its inspired by a Hollywood Movie named GAME and I gives Refrence it... just little mould it a bit😉... Yes Baray Bhai always remember that Surprise Birthday Party... 😛😛

Thank you so much for loving this different Idea...🤗

now coming to the last story dna. the storyline was really good. I liked how you added bary bhais diary and chote bhai's memories. it was outstanding...there are no words to describe it. I was crying throughout the story as it really touched my heart. The last chapter was like "sone pe suhaga" that made me cry so much. you are right, some things will always leave a mark that no one can erase. you make a great author dada. god bless you dada and you keep coming up with such stories. Oh and dada you also said you would write a story where we see chore bhai looking after bru bhai. Would it still be possible for you to write that...I'd not its fine

When are you posting your next story?

OML! itni Tareef, yes this PAST RIDE was the Soul of this story and after long time, i really enjoyed that Ride wo bhi Free mein😉😆... Yes Sometimes things leave their Mark, specially when come out from the people we Love the Most...😭

Thank You so much Baccha...🤗

Baccha right now i m really Busy in Some Personal Stuff, i m trying to write if Possible...

Its really a Good Question...👏

plz ask Next...😉😈

Originally posted by: DUOlover123

^ Bhaijaan... Last few lines ke baarey me kya khayal h?? 🤣 😉 hmm??

First of all sooo sorry GD 4 replying after long time😳

ur last story 'why so serious?' was v nice👏