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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: buublly

First of all sooo sorry GD 4 replying after long time😳

ur last story 'why so serious?' was v nice👏

a dangerous b'day surprise 4 Abhi sir😛really unexpected😊
Now come to DNA...
once again a v v emotional nd terrific story👏
some moments were extremely painful that really made me cry😭
but m glad that u raised such issue
I have also read some news like this nd feel so bad 4 those children😳
Nakul's condition hurt me a lot
I also feel that Daya sir was right but Abhi sir was also not wrong
As always u portraited their relation beautifully
in 2nd part i think u have done lots of hard work 2 collect those moments from different episodes
last few lines were amazing nd really touched me.😊
GD m sure yadi aapke Bhai nd Bade Bhai aapki stories pad len to wo v aapke kaayal ho jaayenge hamari tereh😉😃


First of all BUUBLLY, I m not accepting Ur Aplogy as Its totally Needless... Samjhy Baccha...😳
WHY SO SERIOUS was only a Safety Plan based Story, sometimes SURPRISES comes in Weird manner na...😉😆
In DNA...😳
Yes I tried to Lime light the Painful Fact with Ease...😭
I really enjoyed that Past Ride personally...🤗
about Ur Last Line... now I have No Expectation from DUO...😭
Thank You so very much baccha...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie006

Hi,dada😛

first of all i would like 2 congratulate u 4 ur new PH🤗
i know it's tooo late😳😳😳bt late wishes is better dan never😉
i hope u'll open ur next ph very soon😛
my good wishes always wid u dada😊
god bless u⭐️
n keep writing👍🏼


this is called the Competation...😆
Thank You so much CUTIE baccha...🤗
Der Aayed Durust aayed...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

I dunt know why I posted it, I wrote it Last Year as a Time pass but after Re reading it tonight, I cried alot... The pain, Hurt, Wounds comes on my Heart, Mind and Soul with this DAYA Sir and SHERYA Track triggered Me...😭😭😭
I know the Actor Himself, the Character He played on screen and the FW Creative Team did not bother about any One, they Forgets their Fans so WHO AM I...😭😭😭
But I really Really feel Hurt, so much Pain n Tears inside Me and how do I flush out would be a Big Task for Me...😭
when any member talked me refrring GD/DADA look what Ur BHAI doing or I read so many Bakwass Stuff really really Embarrass Me, Hurt Me...😭😭😭
I know the Pain was Unbearable for Me... Mujhy buht buht buht Chout lagti hay... 😭😭😭
plz FW, Stop this, i really Beg U... 😭😭😭

Tujh say Naraz Nahi ZINDAGI, Hairaan hun Main...!

ABHIJEET gets ready and moving outside after seeing DAYA who was Enjoying Soccer at Lounge couch with a Big Mac Burger, French Fries and Diet Coke... ABHIJEET always thought that what was the reason behind to use Diet Coke after this Mighty Cheezy Burger and Deep Fried French Fries but failed, He tells DAYA before getting out...

ABHIJEET: DAYA meray pass Chabi hay.. shayed Main Late ho jaon... Tum So jana... (DAYA without looking at Him just moving His Head in Yes) (ABHIJEET again) aur haan Plates Dho kr, TV, Lights aur AC band kr kay Sona aur Darwaza bhi Lock Karna... (angry) Aby Sun raha hay na...

DAYA: haan Boss, Main sub kr lun ga, Tum befikr ho kr jao...

ABHIJEET: acha Bye...

DAYA: Take care...

ABHIJEET moved out from Residence, ignite jeep and Rushed... here DAYA after freed from all done all what Ordered and went to take a Sleep...

His eyes opened with a Ringer, spreading hand on Bed and found Cell, without seeing the Screen, place it on Ear with a Sleepy Voice...

DAYA: Hello...

VOICE: aap DAYA hain?

DAYA eyes opened with a Jerk, seeing the Screen after putting on the table Light, found ABHI name flashed, so whose on ABHIJEET Cell talking to Him as it's a Female Voice... He again placed Cell on Ear and now with Tense Tone...

DAYA (tense): Jee, aap kaun...?

VOICE: dekhyey main ZEHRA hun, KAASH Hospital say, yahan abhi thori der Pehlay Ek Accident Case aaya hay, (handling as She dealt that situation 24/7) aap Pareshan na hun, mamoli chotein hain, hum nay un kay Cell say ye Number nikala hay, aap aa jayein...

DAYA: Jee...

Without losing a Minute, DAYA just Closed AC, wear Chappal and moved out from Residence, He reached there and found ABHIJEET Cell with all Stuff that His Car collided with another Car which was driven by Two Girls (be there.) and those Girls took Him here as His Right Arm have Hair Line Fracture with some Scratches but He came in Conscious before DAYA arrival... DAYA entered in room after meeting those Girls who continuously saying Sorry as they are Learners and the Fault was of them... DAYA relaxed them and they Left the place... DAYA after seeing Him said...

ABHIJEET: chal DAYA...

DAYA knew that in such Small Injuries nobody have the Ability to tell ABHIJEET to stay in Hospital including Himself so without any Arguing, He takes Him to Quillas after Paying Bill (from ABHIJEET valet getting with that Cell, as He forgot to take His Valet in Tension) and after speeding the Quillas started, DAYA wanted to Pinch ABHIJEET but Leave it after seeing His Condition as He was looking really Irritative..

They reached Residence and after entering in His Room, DAYA switch on the Lights and AC, here ABHIJEET ordered DAYA...

ABHIJEET: DAYA ek Shopper say Mera Hath wrap kr day, Main Nahaon ga...

DAYA: magar Boss...

ABHIJEET: plz DAYA, kapray dekhein hain meray, Blood hee Blood hay, Mujhy Iching ho rahi hay aur Tum jaanty ho Main aisi halat mein Bina Nahayey Nahi reh sakta, so bhais karnay kay bajayey Shopper Wrap karo...

DAYA without any word, moved to Kitchen, taken out Bread from Shopper and taking out Bandage from Medicine Box as He did not want to use Rubber band, so after taking that entered inside His Room, wrapped that Shopper with the help of bandage around His Injured Arm, taken out ABHIJEET cloths and giving Him Towel and moved out from Room...

ABHIJEET came out after taking Shower and call DAYA, DAYA entered and unwrapped that Shopper, giving Him Milk with Medicine already Purchased from Hospital Pharmacy and supports Him in Lay down and after putting off the Light, moved out from His room.. Again checked Main Lock, putting off Lights and went to His room...

DAYA's eyes opened due to dawn as He forgot to pull the Curtain so wake up and after looking at the Clock, jumped from His Bed, rushed to ABHIJEET room to wake Him up as it's almost 8:30 AM...

He entered, calling ABHIJEET and when come to touch Him found His Body burnt like a Fire, DAYA come in Tension, He jerking Him but ABHIJEET was Semi Conscious state, He picked His Call found No Charge Bar, ABHIJEET Cell was Missing or He can't find it now, Land Line also not working from few days...

In complete tension.. he ran outside in Barefoot and rushed to KARTIK House, ringing Bell of RAHUL portion continuously and Madly either Calling RAHUL name, who came out with AMAN as Both Quite Confuse after seeing DAYA from Balcony in that Tense Condition...

RAHUL (confuse): kya hua DAYA...?

DAYA (tense tone): yaar wo ABHI... ABHI ko...

RAHUL without wasting Time, rushed with Him.. AMAN behind them.. Both RAHUL and AMAN found ABHIJEET with Injured Arm and in High Fever with Semi Conscious state so trying to ask DAYA...

RAHUL (asking tone): Dr ko Call kiya...?

DAYA: Nahi Dr. ASHOKE aur Dr. RAJEEV tou hay hee Nahi, aur Dr. TAREEKA aur Dr. SALUNKHY bhi...

RAHUL (rash): DAYA, Mumbai mein aur bhi Dr hain, acha ruko, balky Phone do apna...

DAYA: Phone Charge Nahi hay.. Yaar ABHI...

AMAN take out His Cell and give it to RAHUL as He was almost ready for going College, RAHUL searched Call Contact and call someone, talk to Person and after Cutting tell...

RAHUL: kuch nahi hua hay, Injury kay karan Bukhar aa gaya hay, Thandy Paani ki Pattiyaan rakkho, abhi Uter jayey ga... (DAYA standstill) (RAHUL in harsh voice) DAYA Towel do koi... Jaldi (DAYA gave Him) ( RAHUL again) aur Qainchi (scissor) bhi...

DAYA: wo tou hay nahi...

RAHUL just look at Him in Irritation but found only Panic on His Friend Face so tell AMAN to bring Knife from Kitchen... He brought it, RAHUL cuts small pieces of Towels and tell AMAN...

RAHUL: AMAN Ghar say Ice Cubes lay kr aao...

AMAN rushed, RAHUL taken out Ice Cubes from Fridge and pour little water on 3 Bowls taken from Kitchen, dip Ice Cubes and Towel Pieces on it and then give it to DAYA with...

RAHUL: chalo Pattiyaan lagao...

DAYA (absentminded): kahan...?

RAHUL (angry): Aby apnay Sar pr... (he relaxes himself and say) kya ho gaya hay DAYA, ABHIJEET kay Maathy pr rakkho aur Hath aur Pairun ko bhi Towel mein Lapeto... Garmi Ka Bukhar hay abhi Uter jayey ga... Ye Injured hay, Warna Dr keh raha hay Kay Thandy Paani say Nehla do...

Meanwhile AMAN also backed with Ice cubes and RAHUL Cell, RAHUL added cubes on Bowls and also Ordered AMAN to again Chill the Cubes as might be needed later, AMAN also puts DAYA Cell on Charging, while DAYA and RAHUL just wrapped ABHIJEET in Icy Towels...

After an Hour, RAHUL checked His Fever feeling lower Down... He was very much Shock after seeing DAYA in such Panic as He knew that ABHIJEET hurt so many times either going on Comma so many times too But...!

ABHIJEET was still in Semi-Conscious state, but His Fever starting to Lower Down.. RAHUL did not like to move to Station after seeing DAYA in that situation... AMAN also bunked His College, He brought food from His Fridge and after Warming it on Micro Wave, RAHUL suggested DAYA to take Meal but He denied, He was still on ABHIJEET bedside on Rocking Chair after taking out from His room looking Tense and Panic... RAHUL said...

RAHUL: DAYA, Bukhar utarny mein waqt lagay ga, Tum khana tou khao, Warna Khud Bemaar par jao ga...

DAYA: Nahi Nahi, Main Theek Hun yaar Tum Kha lo...

RAHUL (irritative tone): kya Tum Kha lo, hath dekha hay apna, itni sii der mein Swell kr gaya hay, Dawai khani hay na Tumhein...

DAYA (causual): haan haan Kha lun ga..

RAHUL: tou Pehly kuch Kha tou lo... (concern) Thora as Kha lo yaar...

DAYA: Nahi Nahi...

RAHUL: phir Dawa...

DAYA in Rash standup, taking Out Medicine from His Room and just take it with Water as AMSN already setting the Table... RAHUL completely Stunned...

DAYA (angry tone): Kha li Dawa, mil gaya Sukun...

RAHUL really comes on Anger but Relaxed Himself with Force as He doesn't want to create any Scene in front of AMAN otherwise He really wanted to Slap DAYA...!

After some time, hearing ABHIJEET mumbled Words... RAHUL again doing the Same with DAYA and at Night again RAHUL tells DAYA in Low Tone...

RAHUL: DAYA ab tou thora Kha lo, dekho Raat ho gayii hay, Tum nay Subah say Kuch nahi khaya, Main Dr say complete contact mein hun, wo keh raha hay kay Garmi kay karan Viral Fever chala hua hay, Hospital lay jany ka koi khas faida nahi, wo bhi yehi kr rahy hain... Ab tou ABHIJERT ka Bukhar Kum bhi ho gaya hay... thora sa Kha lay Yaar...

He was too much Tensed as time passing DAYA hand really Swells up More, DAYA was really in Panic and Tension... DAYA look at RAHUL and before Repeats the Same, RAHUL clutched His Hand with...

RAHUL: Nahi jub tak kuch khao gay Nahi, Main Tum ko Dawa Khany Nahi dun ga...

DAYA (comes in rash with): Tum yehi chahtay ho na... (he took or said stuffing Bites on His Mouth and say in rash) bus ho gaya... Kaha liya... Saheh...

He snatched Medicine and gullop it... RAHUL completely Quiets... !

AMAN also Quiets after seeing all... DAYA did not move for few seconds from ABHIJEET place, the Whole Night He spends with His ABHI... RAHUL ordered AMAN to sleep on Guest Room where as He stayed on Lounge Couch...!

Next Morning ABHIJEET comes on Senses, He was feeling Shock after seeing RAHUL and AMAN but the way DAYA Hugged Him with...

DAYA (teary tone): Boss Tum Theek ho na...

ABHIJEET (confuse): haan kyun...?

RAHUL: Tumhein buht Taiz Bukhar ho gaya tha...

ABHIJEET (smiles): arry tou Bukhar hee hua tha na, aur (shocking tone) DAYA kya halat bana li hay ... haan...

RAHUL (harsh voice): haan dekho isy, Tum nay Mujhy Kaha tha na kay Tumhein Yaqeen hay kay Ye apna Khayal rakkhy ga... Kal say Ek Niwala Nahi khaya Is nay... poori Raat isi Chair or Guzar dii... Hath dekho... Kitna Swell...

DAYA (interrupts): haan tou, Tumhein kya masla hay, Mera Hath hay, Main jesay Chahy...

RAHUL (rashly cutting): aik Hath maarun ga na, Saary Masly Hal ho jayein gay...

DAYA (teasing): Tumhara BHAI Bistar pr para ho na, tou Main dekhun ga kay Tumhein Kitna Khany Ka Hosh rehta hay...

ABHIJEET (shout): DAYA...

RAHUL look at Him, Clutched AMAN palm and moved out from Residence in a Minute... DAYA really comes in Trouble...

ABHIJEET: DAYA kya ho gaya hay, wo Tumharay Bhaly kay Liyey hee keh raha hy...

DAYA (angry): yaar Tum Bukhar mein Tap rahy ho, Behosh ho aur Usy yehi Gham hay Kay Main kuch Kha lun, Batao...

ABHIJEET (tense tone): DAYA Itny say Bukhar say Tum itna Pareshan ho ...

DAYA (stupid way): pr Pehlay kabhi Bukhar hua tou Nahi na... bus Direct Comma mein chaly jaatay thy...

ABHIJEET really try hard to control His laugh, He look at Him and His Fear, Tear, Tension, Panic... He hugged Him and say...

ABHIJEET: Mujhy Zinda dekhna hay na... (DAYA look at Him) (ABHIJEET tease) tou Sahab Naha lein... meharbani hogi...

DAYA moved in Embarrassment, He really Hurts as He also seeing DAYA Swell Arm, He knew How much RAHUL cared about DAYA... he really Jerk His Head... Life comes on a Usual way...

Next day, ABHIJEET went to meet RAHUL as He felt that DAYA was Not happy on His Act... ABHIJEET ring Bell and AMAN opened the Door, Invited Him, ABHIJEET sat beside Him and ask...

ABHIJEET: AMAN, RAHUL nahi hay..? aaya nahi kya abhi tak..?

AMAN: nahi Sir, wo... wo aap Bhayya say Gussa Nahi hain na... wo Bhayya ko aisa Nahi karna tha, unhun nay DAYA Bhayya kay sath is tarah baat ki, pr Sir, wo DAYA Bhayya ka Hath itna Swell ho gaya tha na tou Bhayya Buht Pareshan ho gayey thy, wo zarur DAYA Bhayya say Sorry...

ABHIJEET (interrupts): Nahi Beta, kis nay kaha kay Main RAHUL say naraz hun ya DAYA Khafa hay...?

AMAN (Smiles and say): Nahi Sir, DAYA Bhayya tou Bhayya say Khafa hain, Mujhy malum bhi hay... (ABHIJEET shocked, he added again) darasal Sir DAYA Bhayya na dar gayey, jub Bhayya bemaar hotay hain na tou Main bhi buht darta hun... Bhayya samjhy nahi... Us pal Bhayya ki Posiition pr aap thy aur DAYA Bhayya ki Position pr Main tou Main samjh sakta hun kay Un ko kitna Khauff tha, aur Sir phir Khany peeny ka Hosh kisay rehta hay... (after a second) aur aap Bhayya ko bhi Ghalat Mut samjhein, DAYA Bhayya ki beemaari ki wajah say wo bhi Dar gayey hain...

ABHIJEET heard all this with Open Mouth and Wide Eyes... AMAN again connects the Conversation as...

AMUN: Main isi liyey tou Bhayya ko beemaar nahi parnay deta, Mujhy buht dar lagta hay, is liyey Main Buht Khayal rakhta hun, Un ka bhi aur apna bhi, ta kay wo pareshan Na hun... Un kay Khany peenay ka, Khud nahi khata tou wo Meray Sath Kha letay hain... (smiles) thori Blackmailing kr leta hun, Khud Doodh nahi peenay ka Drama kr kay Un ko aadha pila deta hun...

ABHIJEET (smiles): hmmm... aur DAYA Bhayya kyun RAHUL Bhayya say Khafa hain..?

AMAN: Sir Main nay apnay MOM aur DAD kay sath Buht waqt nahi bitaya... (teary sound) pr Bhayya un ki Baatein bus DAYA Bhayya say kartay hain tou Main Chup Chup kay sunta hun, (loving tone) Mujhy acha lagta hy... pr ab Bhayya DAYA Bhayya say baatein Chupatay hain, un ki Bemaari kay karan... DAYA Bhayya ko buht Dukh hota hay Sir, wo hr pal Mujh say poochtay hain, RAHUL Theek hay, Khana Khaya, pareshan tou Nahi lug raha tha... jub Main Un say kehta hun kay aap khud poochein tou bus Smile kartay hain... (after a while) ek aisi Smile jis mein aansoo hee aansoo hun...

ABHIJEET Stunned, He never knew such things and especially He never spend such Time with AMAN, He saw that AMAN was very much Close to DAYA and Mostly Respected Him but not much Frank with Him like He is with DAYA... AMAN again say with Tears...

AMAN: aik baar Main nay Bhayya ko bataya nahi kay Meri tabiyet Kharab hay, Bhayya nay Mujhy kaha kay MOM DAD nahi hain na is liyey Tu nay Mujhy bataya nahi yaar... Buht Royey Bhayya us roz, tou phir Main nay Kuch kabhi nahi chupaya... pr Sir wo ye Baat khud samjh Nahi pa rahy... DAYA Bhayya ko bhi Buht Dukh hay aur shayed us Roz Un kay Gussa hony ki wajah bhi yehi thi...

ABHIJEET (weaving on his hairs with): Tum tou Buht Samjhdaar ho Beta...

AMAN: Sir samjhdari ka Taluq Umer say thori hota hay (ABHIJEET Stunned) (AMAN added) aap ko malum hay jub Main nay MISHA say poocha kay usy apnay parents yaad aatay hain tou kehny lagi kay main un ko Dil mein yaad kr leti hun, kyunkay phir sub Mujhy dekh kr rotay hain aur samjhtay hain kay wo log Mera Khayal nahi rakh pa rahy, isi liyey Mujhy apnay parents yaad aatay hain... (after a second) Sir ye tou Natural hay na, jub wo itni Choti ho kr ye samjh sakti hay tou Main tou Us say itna Bara hun...

Main DAYA Bhayya ko Udaas nahi dekhna chahta Sir pr Main kuch kr Nahi pa raha, DAYA Bhayya nay Bhayya ka buht khayal rakkha hay, aap ko malum hay DAYA Bhayya mujhy Pocket Money bhi detay hain (ABHIJEET Shocked) aur MISHA ko bhi... jitni Toffie, Chocolate wo Khatay hain na sub mein Mera aur MISHA ka Share hota hay, Hum jub say yahan Shift huay hain, jitni baar bhi aap kay Ghar Pizza ya Burger aaya hay na, Humaray Ghar bhi aur phir jub wo Phone kr kay Mujh say poochtay hain na kay AMAN Baccha Theek say Khaya na aur RAHUL nay khaya tou... Sir kya app Bhayya ko bolein gay kay wo phir say DAYA Bhayya say Dosti kr lein... Mujhy Buht Dukh...

ABHIJEET pulled Him and Hugs that samjhdaar Baccha who was in Tears and asked little Tough...

ABHIJEET: ye Tum Mujhy Sir kyun boltay ho... haan.. (order tone) ABHIJEET Bhayya Nahi bula saktay..?

AMAN (departs and says in naughty): Aap nay kabhi Bola hee nahi...

ABHIJEET: acha Sr. insp ABHIJEET say Panga...

AMAN starting laughing and suddenly say in Secret Tone to ABHIJEET as...

AMAN: Sir (ABHIJEET glared) (AMAN added) ohhh Sorry, ABHIJEET Bhayya aap Bhayya ko ya DAYA Bhayya ko ye sub nahi baatein gay na...

ABHIJEET: nahi, magar Tum bhi Meray yahan aany ka Zikr kisi say nahi karna...

AMAN (naughty): DAYA Bhayya ki tarah pait mein Chupa lun... hahahaha...

ABHIJEET (standup with): acha aur koi Pareshani tou nahi hay yahan...

AMAN (make face): yahan tou nahi, pr MISHA Mujhy BHAI nahi bolti, Mera Naam leti hay, hay na Ghalat baat...

ABHIJEET: Saheh ho jayey gi...

AMAN: Theek hay...

ABHIJEET moved out after Learning so many New Lessons and went to ANDHERI Police Station, He did not enter just waiting for RAHUL who came after Half an hour and after seeing ABHIJEET stand beside His Police Jeep so moved towards with...

RAHUL: arry ABHIJEET, Tum yahan, Main tumhari hee taraf aany ka Soch...

ABHIJEET (signaling on Driving seat with): chalo...

RAHUL sat and ABHIJEET told to move to Caf Santa, Both Reached and after settling and Ordering about Cold Drinks... RAHUL initiated...

RAHUL: yaar Main aany ka Soch raha tha... pr time nahi mil raha tha... yaqeen karo... (after placing order he added again) Us roz tou Sach dil kiya DAYA ko aik Mukka maarun Zor say pait mein...

ABHIJEET Bursts into Laugh either RAHUL could Not find anything Funny on his comments... he asked in Confusion...

RAHUL (confuse): hans kyun rahy ho...?

ABHIJEET (lovely tone): rang dekh raha hun RAHUL... buht saaray... (smiles) Mahabbat kay... Apnayyet kay... Caring kay...

RAHUL: matlab...

ABHIJEET: ye choro , batao Pait mein hee kyun.?

RAHUL: Dimagh jo Pait mein hay Us ka...

ABHIJEET (relax tone): hmmm wesy Baat ho gayii Sahab say...

RAHUL: nahi main Us say...

ABHIJEET (again Tease): Naraz hun, dil tou krta hay ja kr us ka Munh tour dun... hain na... (RAHUL Embarrss) (ABHIJEET added) Baat Nahi hoti na abhi tak Sahab say tou ye Juice Tumharay Galy say Uterta kya..?

RAHUL completely Embarrassed, after taking Juice Sip by Sip, He was trying to hide His Expressions from ABHIJEET Naughty Glints... ABHIJEET look at Him and say...

ABHIJEET: Main nay Tumhein aur DAYA ko Us Raat Baatein kartay dekh liya tha...

RAHUL (laugh): Sorry Yaar, pr Mujhy Yaqeen nahi tha kay DAYA mujhy aisa kahy ga, pr phir jub wo Ghar aaya na aur AMAN say Mila tou Buht Bechain tha, Main nay AMAN ko pehlay hee Warn kr diya tha kay DAYA aayey tou Mujhy Us say nahi milna... pr AMAN ka baccha Usy meray Kamray mein lay aaya aur Mujhy ek Dum Jhatkay say Utha kr Bola kay DAYA Bhayya ka Hath Sujh gaya aur Wo bahar Serhyun say gir gayey, Main Bhaga aur Bus Yaar, phir DAYA ko dekh kr koi naraz reh sakta hay kya.. Us nay kuch Kaha nahi, pr us ki Aansoo Bhari Smile main kub tak nazarandaz karta...

ABHIJEET: Tum dono Dramybaaz say tou Main na Tang aa gaya hun...

RAHUL: arry kya karun yaar... wesay acha hua Tum jaldi Theek ho gayey... warna tou...

ABHIJEET (angry): aby kya jaldi Theek ho gaya, hr baar Sotay mein aa kr utha deta hay.. Jahil.. jub poochun tou kehta hay Main dekh raha tha kay Tum Comma mein tou Nhai chaly gayey...

RAHUL: hahahahhaha... isi liyey tou Main Bemaar nahi parta... jub Tabiyet thori Up Down lagti hay na, Khud hee Dawa Kha Kha kr Theek ho jata hun... kya bataon.. AMAN ki Jaan pr ban aati hay..

ABHIJEET Smiles, Both Standup ... ABHIJEET said after sitting on Jeep as...

ABHIJEET: Sunday ko Shaam mein Free rehna, Kahein chalna hay...

RAHUL moved Head in Yes and Dropped ABHIJEET who entered in Residence as DAYA already in Bureau and ABHIJEET on Leave...

Here at Sunday... Beach was already Crowded... DAYA silently signaling Keep Quiet signal to FREDDIE and VIVEK and also signaling them to Move with Him... they Pulled a Person sat on Chair at Sandy Beach, He opens Eyes in Jerk but it's Too Late as All Three Threw Him on Weavy Shore and laughing Heartout...

Here AMAN and MISHA talking Something... ABHIJEET moved to them, again same Issue as Both Arguing on Calling AMAN as BHAI by MISHA... ABHIJEET sat in front of Them and Both presenting their points so ABHIJEET Hearing both Points ask to MISHA...

ABHIJEET: MISHA gurya, Aap AMAN ko BHAI kyun Nahi kehtay...

MISHA: pr ABHIJEET Uncle, AMAN tou Mera Friend hay na... Friend ko BHAI thori boltay hain...

ABHIJEET: tou MAMA ko bhi Friend Nahi boltay hain na... aik taraf aap VIVEK ko MAMA kehtay ho aur phir Friend bhi... hay na Ghalat baat...

MISHA (after thinking): pr BHAI tou nahi, kuch aur...

ABHIJEET: hmmm... acha chalo BHAYA, kesa hay Acha hay, MISHA jesa Pyara... (to AMAN) kyun bhae AMAN, manzoor hay...

AMAN: Bilkul...

MISHA: chalo BHAYA Hum log na Gold Fish pakartay hain...

AMAN: arry Gold fish yahan nahi hoti...

MISHA takes her BHAYA towards Shore while ABHIJEET Suggested to keep a safe Distance, here saw DAYA, RAHUL, FREDDIE and VIVEK doing Masti on Water Splashes... DAYA call Him to their side... ABHIJEET moved with...

ABHIJEET (thinking): kitni ajeeb hay zindagi... hr kisi ka falsafa (philosophy) Alug, magar Nateeja aik... Apnun ko, Rishtun ko us Toot Phoot say bachana jo Khirchiyun ki surat Humaray ander hay, ye umer aur Tajruby (experience) ki Muhtaj nahi... FREDDIE Umer mein VIVEK say bara saheh pr Rishta Dosti ka... DAYA kay pass Rishtay nahi magar Nibhany ka Dhang apni jagah, aur yahan ye bacchy (look at AMAN n MISHA) kitnay samjhdaar, lamhun mein jeeny ka Fan seekh liya... bus Zindagi baratny ka Dhang shayed sub ka Alug hay pr Zindagi tou Sub ki Aik jesi hee hay na...!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
I really like the story that I can't stopy myselft after reading few lines.. 😊 waiting for such kind of stories.. btw abhi sir ko shahyri kb se aa gyi...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very very nice and heart touching story GD..!!
Everybody's pain was portrayed perfectly and the last part where abhijeet thinks about life is especially the best..!!

Thanks yaar GD.. It has a very good lesson for all of us..
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Posted: 12 years ago
so cute and very well-written!👏👏 but aapke us din ke pm se mujhe laga tha ki aap kisi investigative story pe kaam kar rahe ho?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved It To The Core !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dada..its so heart touching ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️. Lovely and nice thoughts ⭐️⭐️. Loved this story from heart 😳. Thank you so much 🤗.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome story Dada👍🏼...as always...very touchy and emotional😭...really like it...waiting 4 some more...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
GD you just made me cry. I thought kam pe padh loongi kya hoga, lekin I had to run off to the washroom because the story was so emotional. Dil ko chu liya.
Edited by KS_Minion - 8 years ago

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