**My first story AT PG 4 :)**

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Naomi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

The story is just...

...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4 u di...

Edited by Naomi. - 13 years ago

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kb11

@kb11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

puja's story centre- STORY NO. 9 ON P. 8 2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 10 11	vs-kmh	87	18037	05 October 2011 at 5:50am By sherdilali
	SACRIFICE...! (my story) :D 2 3 4 5 6	somu_05	41	2817	12 April 2011 at 10:15pm By -Twinkles-
	Story CID under Fire 2 3	sunnyp1414	22	1301	25 March 2011 at 6:18am By visrom 40677572
	Story-l1a2o2c3 10 21 by m_kal2011 2 3	m_kal2011	17	936	20 November 2010 at 2:17am By m_kal2011
	Story contest - disqualified story(late entry) 2 3	visrom	19	1621	07 July 2010 at 12:49am By prabha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: kb11

puja's story centre- STORY NO. 9 ON P. 8
2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 10 11
vs-kmh 87 18037 05 October 2011 at 5:50am
By sherdilali

SACRIFICE...! (my story) :D
2 3 4 5 6
somu_05 41 2817 12 April 2011 at 10:15pm
By -Twinkles-

Story CID under Fire
2 3
sunnyp1414 22 1301 25 March 2011 at 6:18am
By visrom 40677572

Story-l1a2o2c3 10 21 by m_kal2011
2 3
m_kal2011 17 936 20 November 2010 at 2:17am
By m_kal2011

Story contest - disqualified story(late entry)
2 3
visrom 19 1621 07 July 2010 at 12:49am
By prabha.
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AIN!!!!!!!

ye kya hai😲

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yashi

@.YaJuShI.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

sory shiva di for late reply
Ur story is 2222 gud
Awesome job di keep it up
Grt job

meri taraf se apko ek choti si treat😉

Edited by Gabriella - 13 years ago

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Mini :)

@--MINOZ--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: darknite
Sorry for late reply. I already read the story but through my mob. so i couldn't comment that time itself.
Now my comments... Excellent work you earn a ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. friendship of duo is brought out perfectly. Hats off.😛

Thanks Dear😃😃

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Mini :)

@--MINOZ--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: ALISHARANDEV
so good👏

Thanks dear😃😃😃

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Mini :)

@--MINOZ--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Naomi.
The story is just...
...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4 u di...

😃😃Hey Naomi Dear😃 Thanks 4 liking my Story 😃😃

😃😃😃Thats Soo Sweet Of You😃😃😃

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Mini :)

@--MINOZ--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Gabriella
sory shiva di for late reply
Ur story is 2222 gud
Awesome job di keep it up
Grt job

😃😃😃Thanks A Lot Dear😃😃😃

😃😃This is for you...

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yashi

@.YaJuShI.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Awww... Thanx di
This teddy is so cute jst lyk u :D

FOR U SHIVA DI

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Chashmish

@VevaH

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

hey SHIVZ , Hatts Off :) its so

U hav done a Superb Attempt 👏

de Concept ws really MIND BLOWING!👍🏼

Liked de BOND of "DU☺️"which is really missing 😔 now a dayz;hense de Suspence & Thrilling part ws also Gud !👏,& LUVED de Emotional Sequence😳

KEEP IT UP :)

FOR U ON UR FIRST SKILL !

WITH SOME FRESH😉 FLOWERz

🤗 & finally so SORRY 4 LATE😃😉

as it need time so 😉,
abt de FONT, plz SHIVZ ,do use large font, as my Chashmaa is tooo weak Dear😉

Edited by vevah - 13 years ago