**My first story AT PG 4 :)**

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Hey friends😊😊 this is my first try so please do comment 😉😊

Jail se FARAR ho gaya hai ek International chor jise CID ins. ABHIJEET ne kiya tha giraftar,ab jiska sirf ek hi maksad hai ins. ABHIJEET ko marna... KALIYA- ab meri jindigi ka ek hi maksad hai ins. ABHIJEET ko khatm karna. scene- CID Bureao ACP-samajh me nahi a raha ek kaidi itne intjam ke baad bhi jail se farar kaise ho sakta hai. DAYA-sir is chor KALIYA ko ABHIJEET ne giraftar kiya tha or jail ke kuch kaidiyo ne use ABHIJEET ko marne ki baat karte hue sun liya tha,sir mujhe lagta hai ki ye chor ABHIJEET ko marne ki koshish jaroor karega... ACP-DAYA ye ABHIJEET hai kahan? KALIYA deta hai CID ko chunauti... (PHONE PAR) KALIYA-ACP mai tujhe chunauti deta hu mai ABHIJEET ko tum sab CID walo ke samne marunga or tum log kuch nahi kar paoge,Mai us ABHIJEET ko agle 7 dino ke andar jaan se maar dalunga bacha sakte ho to bacha lo apne pyare ABHI ko ha ha ha... kya CID bacha payegi ABHIJEET ko janne ke liye intjaar kijiye meri stori ka...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice promo

hope read it soon...
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OMG ...what a promo...!!!! Agar yeh promo sach mein air ho jaaye toh.. half the members on IF will never sleep till the case is aired
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wow!!!!!!!!!!!! excellent promo Shiva! Waiting for this story! 👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks guys .i'll post the story soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ shiva17 - interesting promo...waiting for the story...best of luck. 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow. Best of Luck. 👍🏼

I am not targeting you but in general Whenever one think of getting some CID officer in trouble Abhijeet is first choice.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Shiva - Good promo, all the best for your story. Waiting.
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WOW!!! interesting promo... will be waiting for ur story shiva.. all d best👍🏼
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Hey Shiva.. sorry saw ur promo late... Nice one... wating for ur story

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