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poojaluvnbt

@poojaluvnbt

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#31

kay aap meri stories ki rating kar sakte hai taki mujhe ye pata chal jaaye kimeri kaun si story aap logo ko jyada pasand hai taki main aage bhi usi tarah ke letter likh saku.

as exaple

1. mistory of bullet

2. child murder mystory

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please do it for me

Edited by vs-kmh - 15 years ago

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prabha.

@prabha.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Ok Puja, I will try to rate your stories.

MYSTERY OF THE BULLET - 10/10 by me, it was perfect, there is not a single thing I would like to change. This is your best work till date, if you ask me. The scenes, the dialogs, everything was so in sync with the CID Team we know. You seem to have got under their skin and understood each one of them so well. As I was reading the dialogs I was able to hear them in each character's voice. I could almost see the whole story unfold in front of my eyes. I have not had that level of magical effect in other stories.

INSPECTOR FREDRICS - 9.5/10 a very very close second to the above story. It was almost there, very close to perfection.

ABHI v/s DAYA - 8/10

MYSTERY OF THE CARD - 8/10

CHILD'S MURDER MYSTERY - 7.5/10

TAARIKA IN DANGER - 7/10. This one appealed the least to me. A lot maybe influenced by the fact that I don't like Taarika much.

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Puja...I love all your stories and agree with the ratings Prabha has given....but a small request. Please write one story without hurting anyone. 😃

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

ratings given by prabha are exactly what even i would like to give just that:-
child murder mystery is 8/10 for me-this is because of the fact that you potrayed the softer side of our Abhijeet beautifully in the story
but yes taarika in danger is 7/10 -your story was nice but it is just that i really don't like taarika at all and imagining a Taarika-centric story is impossible for me,for the other stories i could imagine everything happening before my eyes but,for Taarika i find it difficult to sympathise with her but your plot was perfect and enjoyable :-) :-)

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poojaluvnbt

@poojaluvnbt

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#36

This one is really sweet. I just loved your stories. All of them have smthing memorable in them . Really great work.. 👍🏼

And hats of to our Daya- abhi jodi. Bhagwaan is jodi ko humesha salamat rakhe... 3 cheers.. 👏 👏 👏

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sneh.

@sneh.

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#37

nice work yaar. keep it up 👍🏼

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#38

👏⭐️ur stories are always veryy nice..same with this one!!! U portrayed daya's character really well..his feelings and sentiments portrayed beautifully!!! Keep up the good job dear...looking forward to ur contest wala story now...i am sure its gonna b a very good one!!!